Juezuzero: Why Are the Emotions Around Me so Twisted?

The writing is very good: rescuing Twiggy at the beginning is like raising a father; later, the orphanage is whipped with willows, invited to eat and slaughtered, which reflects the protagonist's new-age male spirit; and the title of the book is search, attack and withdrawal, but the search, attack and withdrawal system disappears inexplicably; the best thing is that the protagonist is really a good player, even the game protagonist and NPC do not know...

? Knowing the plot but not Nicole is no longer a problem for cloud players.

This book is really good to read, especially when it describes Lu Bu's hundreds of rounds of battle with Sun Wukong's Q picture for Diao Chan. However, Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuoshou's outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would have killed him. In addition, I prefer what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguoshan in Picture A, "Young man, don't show off your pride in front of your brother Liang." It shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkeys who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, a lot of foreshadowing, the fighting scenes are immersive, and the character descriptions are spot-on!

There are many small problems in the book. For example, no one cared about why the main character was dead and resurrected after his front leg was broken and his back leg was restored. Oh my God, I was poisoned. The old lady in the orphanage slapped the protagonist so many times with her willow stick.

I can barely play Electronic Pickle, the plot is relatively relaxed, the previous plot is boring, and the plot between Nicole and the orphanage is a bit toxic, but I, Akaashi, got used to it, so it was okay for me. This can be used to relieve boredom in normal times I originally wanted to complain about the relatively low presence of Search, Fight, and Remove. Later, due to plot reasons, the system disappeared directly after playing, and then came out to increase the presence. However, I thought that Search, Fight, and Remove would be difficult to continue in the zero world view of the Jue Zone. The world view of Jue is quite large, desperate, and difficult to write down, so I let it go.

The protagonist has a good outlook on life, is humorous in daily interactions, and has a sunny boy persona that is reliable at critical moments. He is my personal favorite among the male protagonists in the harem. The plot is coherent and smooth, original and not obtrusive. The highlight moments do not embarrass the handsome man, and the favorability events are reasonable. I personally do not feel that the plot is going too fast. There may be some minor flaws in some details, but they do not affect reading. As for some people who say turtles [laughing awkwardly], anyway, I am not that angry towards orphans, the elderly and ordinary people who are kind-hearted and do charity. Especially after knowing the motivation of the behavior, I think it is a normal behavioral reaction of a person with a gentle personality and normal outlook on life when he has the ability. Thank you for your praise, come on my bro [please update]

Everything else is okay, the protagonist is a cloud player who has played games

Not bad, at least not that boring [thinking] The last few pictures have been a bit outrageous.

After reading it for so long, I realized that there is no rating [laughs] (deliberately [laughing evilly]) To put it roughly, there are advantages, and overall it is pretty good. Even if it is a fan fiction, it has all the things it should have, and the same goes for the shortcomings. It is a fan fiction, and it has all the things it should have. Many character relationships and storylines largely rely on the information in the original work, and then the author thinks about it himself. This is a novel that you can read during your break (basically fan fiction is like this). It's quite good.

Good-looking and good-looking. Although the early stages are a bit boring, impatient readers will not be able to read on, but once you get to the end, you will find that the more you read, the more addictive it becomes. After watching the whole thing, I can only say that it is really exciting [Adoration] [Adoration] [Admiration] Lao Zuo, please give me more

Not bad, but I always feel like something is missing. You know, it should be a knife. Every book is incomplete without a knife. A knife is a good thing. Only with a knife can you have the motivation to read. If the knife can't kill you, then let the author write a more knife-like plot. So the author, I want a knife.

It's not bad, it's slightly delicious. Kola, as the fourth natural disaster, is to elbow all regrets hard. It always feels like there are a lot of foreshadowings of hair swords. Author Sang, you don't know how to hair swords, right?

How can I put it this way? It's not boring at all. It's very interesting. I found out tonight that I've finished chasing it now [laughs] [like]

At present, it seems to be interesting, not particularly outstanding, but compared with others, it feels pretty good and quite interesting. Although there are some shortcomings, they are all minor problems. The flaws do not outweigh the advantages. I can give it 5 stars. Come on, author.

There are many elements of search, strike, and withdrawal, but the description of the harvest is just a rough outline. The overall atmosphere is positive, but there is little sense of growth.

Overall, it's okay. Some of the plots are a little bit toxic at the end, so the author should keep writing.

Is this really a raid? I just hope that the main character will be strengthened more in the future and there will be less forced and sensational scenes.

Now Zero Zone is really out of the search and retreat.

Great, don't listen to those venomous comments. The author controlled the details very well and saved everything that should be saved. The protagonist of this book has an Ultra spirit.

Wouldn't it be great to write the protagonist as a succubus? Then write the plot smoothly [Thinking]

It's pretty good-looking. I don't think there are any other shortcomings except that it's a bit sparse.

The sky belongs to Havke

There's nothing aggressive about it, and it's very comfortable to watch. There are quite a few female characters, but I personally don't think they're too abrupt.

Good book, good book You have to write your own plot, that's right

It's unexpectedly beautiful and can be smashed to pieces [Like]

There was a section in the middle where the search, fight and withdrawal content was completely gone, but it came back later and connected the plot. It has gotten better, right? [What]

It's okay, the author has good taste in choosing the heroine

It's just that the element of search, strike and withdrawal is too low. What about my search, strike, and withdrawal?

Author, hurry up and write, or I will whip you with a whip [licking screen]

Very nice. The author's content is very thoughtfully arranged.