I Say I'm the Absolute Authority. Are You Erdolong or What?!

It's very cool, but the number of words in the current update is too few. The plot is all about battles. There is not much emotional connection between the protagonist and the supporting characters. This is a small shortcoming. The author can write daily stories to enrich the characters of the protagonist and supporting characters. The heroine didn't come out, and the writing is not required to be very good, but the farewell is unacceptable. It would be great if it was a cute type like Ning Mengjiang [I understand], overall it is good!

It's quite refreshing, but there's a good chance it won't be long. The Disaster Serpent and the Order Jade appear very early. I feel like I couldn't write 1,500 chapters. The basic settings were neither written in the early stages nor supplemented when the protagonist grows up.

Copied some of my comments at the end of Chapter 54 (with modifications): The advantage is that the plot is very interesting, the narration is clear, and it advances quickly, and the ideas are also very interesting. There is no female character who will fall in love with the protagonist or have an affair with the protagonist without thinking. This is a big advantage (for me), and the fighting scenes are also very well written 👍. So far, it doesn't seem to have any bad points, but the shortcoming is that the plot advances too quickly, resulting in the characters being a bit flat, and there is a lack of psychological description of the characters. The writing style is at a normal level in Tomato, but if it is not a water-point description, it would seem dry. But it can be seen that there is no AI (or it is not used very much), which is a good thing. There are very few people who insist that most of the content is written by hand. Anyway, it is highly recommended. The author also likes to play jokes. It is very interesting. The ditties of thump thump thump thump thump thump thump thump thump thump thump thump thump thump thump thump thump thump thump thump thump thump thump thump thump thump thump thump thump thump.

It's pretty cool. The labels of ease and invincibility in the introduction really don't lie. In addition, the thank you sound effect is in English and not a pure translation. [Learned]

Overall, it looks okay, but the combat power increases too quickly. Less than 30 disasters were released. If this momentum continues, it will feel like it is not far from the super model. I think the combat power increases so quickly, mainly because there are too many battle plots, and the villain's power feels a bit stronger.

The current chapter is pretty good, but the author came up with the idea of ​​using Punishment as an amplification capsule similar to a thruster. Can Dawn's transformer be taken out later?

The overall tone is very light and humorous, and the protagonist's brain circuit is very strange, which often made me laugh. The story is easy to read and contains a lot of interesting information. Brothers who understand this book will be surprised at every turn! The contrast between the protagonist's serious transformation and then the violent hammer attack is particularly interesting. I hope the author can make it longer. It is the source of my happiness!

A perfect second grade novel! The author understands so well what we want to see. Every time I see the English sound effects, the BGM is automatically played in my mind, and the soul of the second grade is burned 😎. The density of the jokes is just right, it's funny without being embarrassing, and the fight scenes are particularly cool when imagined. In short, it's very beautiful [please update] [Sparrow Eater Masterpiece] [plus one on the bookshelf]!

By the way, are there any characters from the original drama who can appear? In other words, there are more original dream capsules. I think Feng Mo Dream Capsule is good.

I feel a bit flat. Fighting all the time is nothing routine 🤦