I, Too, Can Go

Don't make big problems, correct small ones. If you want to make money, I don't recommend you write like this in the short term. If you want to write a good work in the long term, then stick to it, listen more to readers' opinions and go your own way. I hope to present a good work instead of catering to make quick money.

There is no problem with the writing, but the drama and psychological descriptions need to be polished. The passion is a bit lacking, but in this era when everyone is copying public works, I hope the author can find his own way.