Elder Brother! Don't Be Wet After Rebirth!

The rhythm of the story is very good, and there is no delay in the plot. The female protagonist just does what she wants. The male protagonist seems to be okay so far, but it has only been more than 60 chapters. The specific plot and fullness of the characters are being improved. There are still many misunderstandings, and the conflict between the male and female protagonists has not been solved. The female protagonist is a kind of hybrid character , those bad things in the previous life were directly retaliated in the previous life. In the previous life, due to the indifference and alienation of the male protagonist in the early stage, I was confused by the scumbag's gentleness, so I kept giving to the scumbag and broke up with the male protagonist. However, knowing that I was betrayed, I went back to take revenge after I woke up. Although the male protagonist had sex because of an accident at that time, So in her previous life, she was a little love-minded, but after she regained consciousness, she was a character who would kill and kill decisively. After her rebirth, the heroine knew that she could not live without the hero and wanted to make up for it, so she has been working hard to ease the relationship with the hero, studied psychology, and was like a little sun to warm and make up for the hero's character. Neither the male nor the male protagonist. He is a perfect person. The shortcoming of the male protagonist is that he was alienated and cold-blooded towards the female protagonist in his previous life. This is also mentioned in the article. This is one of the reasons that caused the female protagonist to break up with the male protagonist directly. It is also the reason why the female protagonist has a bit of inferiority. The shortcoming of the female protagonist is that she was too kind to the scumbag before she was reborn. She has no ego and keeps giving. I don't feel sorry for myself. (In my opinion, it's because of the male protagonist's problem, because the male protagonist's alienation, avoidance, and cold violence lead him to give all of himself to the scumbag when he sees a little tenderness in others. Of course, there is also the female protagonist's problem, but I feel that it is because of the male protagonist's problem that the female protagonist has this problem.) Although the brain After waking up, she took revenge. After rebirth, she did not directly retaliate against the scumbag, but depending on the development of the story, the scumbag will have plots and his role in the later stage. When the scumbag causes trouble, the heroine and the hero will take revenge on the scumbag, because the story has just begun, and many storylines have not yet been developed. Open, so the problems between the male and female protagonists are still slowly unfolding and being resolved. I hope the author can slowly improve the plot and rhythm of the story and update it as soon as possible. The last one only represents my personal opinion. I prefer the female protagonist to have more control. The male protagonist can abuse her at will, but the female protagonist cannot. Even in the past and present lives, the male protagonist He silently did something for the heroine in the dark, but the hero didn't speak or explain, and the heroine didn't know, and the heroine still lived a miserable life, both materially and spiritually. Although it seemed that the hero was also miserable, hahahahahahaha, but the feeling was limited to the mental aspect, and in the end the heroine couldn't be miserable! !

I commented after reading Chapter 35. The author's logic is clear and the writing is smooth. The reactions of each character are very logical. They face each other's attitude like a normal person. They will be nervous, misunderstand, wonder what the other person means, and ask friends. It's not like other articles where you fall in love with it out of nowhere, or like God's perspective, I know that's what you think. As long as it doesn't end badly, I have a feeling this book will be a hit. Big cheers for the author