Transmigrated into a Book as the Villain, I Made a Deal with the Protagonist's Sister from the Start

It's pretty good (*≧∪≦)👍🏻. I read a book review before and said that although it was a bit toxic, the author seemed to have changed it. When I read it, I was worried that I would be bitten by the lack of correction. After reading it, I felt that it was just that bit toxic, and I knew in advance that the author had changed it, so I didn't feel like skipping it quickly. When I saw Baizhang, I noticed that most of the rest of Baizhang's remarks were original works by the author. It was indeed very interesting and I support this kind of originality that is unexpected and has a slight sense of unknown!!!!! Just... I feel like I'm reading very casually and freely. It's a bit like reading novels in the past, instead of reading novels now and guessing the next one when I read one plot. Although it's cool to guess and see it, I feel like I'm a bit like an idiot living in decay 🤦

For a novel with integrity, at least the author knows how to write bones into the body of the protagonist. This aspect is very good. Most of Tomato's villain stories either have a broken spine or are mentally insane. The protagonist of this villain story has small evils but no major mistakes from beginning to end. He has always lived up to his original character and never done anything beyond his own character. The follow-up of the novel is very worth looking forward to.

Wear well received. . . The author set it up that the system brought the body of the protagonist Mo Qingyun and replaced the original Mo Qingyun's identity. . . But the author forgot one person, that is Mo Wanying. She was formerly Mo Qingyun's maid, and she was often beaten severely. It was also common for her to be looked at and bullied. (Although Mo Wanying is still the first child). . . It can only be said that the author worked very hard to avoid lightning, but he did not completely avoid it.

I personally think it's still okay for now. Here's my opinion: When Mo Wanying confessed her identity to the protagonist, it was pure gambling. 🤔 (Anyway, if I were from the perspective of both parties, I would not dare to identify the two parties. After all, I don't know if I am strong enough 🤔.) When it comes to judging the quality of the protagonist when climbing mountains, I think it's normal to have some ideas. After all, most of them (well, I don't know some of them, I just listen to books) don't know what happened between the protagonist and Ye Nu and the Ye family. Of course, I know that everyone is smart and can think of these questions. 🤔 Maybe you are thinking further than me

6 Points is too few! No wonder I can't find any good books, I'm all trying to score points🥺 The villain story has become a traditional protagonist salvation story. The cool story is well written, but the protagonist has to be given a complete dual personality. What about the time traveler? Who is the real person? The protagonist's mentality has changed too much, and the more I write about it, the worse it becomes.

After seeing 100,000 words, it's okay, there's nothing bad about it. There is no problem with having more female protagonists, but I still hope that the male protagonist will have a different and unique female protagonist. The guard next to the protagonist is quite good.

The good-looking protagonist's character makes people feel more and more comfortable

The title of this book is powerful, there is no deceptive title, and there is no slap-in-the-face plot. I was hooked in the first chapter😳 The relationship between the protagonist and his son is that of a loving father and a filial son whom he met on Tieba. The master is cold-tempered on the outside and cold on the inside. This kind of person is the best. If the disciple is punished one day, it will be said to be an inner demon👍👍

My purely personal evaluation: First of all, the first 40 chapters are okay. The overall chapters are short, and the later chapters are a bit random. Emmm, maybe the author doesn't want to write because of the relationship between popularity and income. It's my personal opinion. Emmm, I hope the author can finish the book and write it seriously. After all, Mo Yan once said that even if there is only one reader, the work is still a work, and you should treat every chapter of it like a gift.

Mark, the writing feels like a female author