Lord of the Nation: One Astartes Every Day

The beginning of the work is okay, the structure is not bad, the tea is good and the desserts are good. I will give the author a few suggestions to strengthen the plot of the protagonist. There is no need to pay too much attention to the protagonist's family, because if there are too many, the protagonist will have weaknesses. The protagonist is taking the lone wolf route. This is okay. You can stick to it. I hope you don't make it boring for the female protagonist and the male protagonist to advance and retreat together, because you have set up that the protagonist does not want to expose his position and face it alone. There is no need to have too much love. Anyway, I think in Warhammer ID Romance in this shithole is like being in S. You have to think about surviving and there is no need to engage in such things. Anyway, the pace is okay now. You can more or less reduce the interaction and emotional route of the protagonist and his family, and focus on development!

The reason for giving five stars is that I hope someone can refer to it after seeing it. The previous stand-alone game mode problem is not bad, it eliminates a lot of short-term pretense and slap-in-the-face routines, and there is no extremely difficult plot such as ridicule. It focuses on development, and the highlight is the large number of resources. The numerical value is inflated, and it may collapse later. This is an article that may be discontinued after updating to about two or three hundred pages. Without that kind of ridicule, the perception would be better in my opinion. After all, there are too many tricks. But there are still problems. The combat power of the Astartes is a bit harsh. The protagonist is honestly a flower vase. He wants to give but doesn't want to give. He is physically weak and mentally weak. As long as there is one aspect that is slightly better in the early stage, it will not be a big problem. It is no different from a roadside person. Personally, I feel that after using some auxiliary tools, there are a lot of anomalies in the text, and the reading is not very smooth. I want to write a cool article, but it is not cool enough and a bit toxic. The reason it took so long was that I fell asleep listening to it

Super invincible and beautiful

Why are there only Red Alert, StarCraft, and Warcraft, but no Might and Magic?

I really like this type of novel

I'm Alpharius

Good, good, good, good, good, good, good!

Well written and very creative

@ Pure Little Scholar Author, I also want to write a novel like this (purely for entertainment). Can you let me learn from your beginning?

Cocoa, but the pace is a bit slow, and the first station of 180,000 words has not been completed yet.

It's fun. I haven't played Warhammer before. It sounds good.

Come on, the front is okay

I've read more than forty chapters and it's quite enjoyable.