Zerg's Broken Lord Redemption Guide

It seems pretty good so far. I read the introduction carefully recently and found out that it is a unit text [face covering] and it does not look like the stereotypical male insect comes from Blue Star and protects the female insect. I feel that Alvi is the cub who needs to be protected (seeing that his master has a bit of PTSD and I feel a bit pitiful). If there is a misunderstanding, he will say it straight and never delay the matter. The first world feels like the kind where two imperfect souls redeem each other [Thinking] By the way, can I ask when Feng Wuque will be offline? Belated affection is better than being a bitch [smile] Why did you go there so early? Alvi appears from time to time and scares him into developing PTSD (post-traumatic stress disorder), poor kid [almost crying] But the poor kid is a bit white and black in some aspects [laughs evilly]

There is no obligation to fatten this book! The writing is solid, the plot is pretty good, and it looks relatively novel. However, I personally feel that the emotional line advances a little too quickly, but it does not affect the overall situation. I still feel good after following it.

When I saw a Zerg article written by an acquaintance, I immediately read it [angry] The smell is still very nice and interesting. The baby Alvi with black hair and pink eyes in the first unit is kind and cute. The admiral is also a arrogant pink-haired and pink-eyed beauty with a black belly and black sesame dumplings [admiration]. The admiral is very interesting, but Alvi is a little naive when he first comes to the Zerg. The combination of the two is so delicious, okay?

Hmm, it's a serious tasting. I think it looks good and the writing is good. I don't know why the rating is relatively low. Anyway, I really like the characters of both parties. Well, the one drawback is that in my opinion, the characters in the early stage are a bit flamboyant? Well, I don't know how to describe it. It just feels a little unsettled and a little fragmented. But after looking at the back After that, when I connected them all, I no longer had that feeling. Well, this is because when I read the article earlier, I never had a clear understanding of the characters of the two people, because the changes were too fast and too diverse. Of course, after reading the later part, I accepted them all. I like this kind of character very much, but some people may think it is not good.

When the category of Zerg literature tends to become routine, it opens up new ideas. The imperfections and mutual sympathy between the two protagonists are so eye-catching, and any misunderstandings are resolved on the spot without any delay. I hope the author will get better and better.

The writing is quite good, and the characterization of the characters driven by the plot is a bit immature, and can be described slowly. For example, Anka was discovered and rescued. He may be relatively white, black, and a little bit of tea, but when describing it, he was being rescued one second, and revealed his true nature the next second, which made me feel faster. Does Anka have a second personality? The plot can also be written slowly. It feels like it goes by a bit fast, so it is not easy for readers to get the development of the characters and plot, but the setting completely pokes my xp. I have never seen this type of Zerg novel. Great support for the author.

It's good to read, but I don't know how many chapters there are in this small world. It feels like there are so few people. It's so difficult to find Zerg stories that don't have traditional plots (ᐡ o̴̶̷̤ ﻌ o̴̶̷̤ ᐡ)

Shocking and delicious [savour it carefully] Boss, please promise me not to give up the trap, okay [I'm about to cry] Be sure to write well, I will always follow you [Salute]

Shockingly delicious, sweet and delicious! ! ! '- ̗̀ʚ ๑'~'๑ ɞ ̖́ฅᐞ˶⦁༝⦁˶ᐞฅ

So sweet, the males are both delicate and delicate, and each pair is delicious

Nice! Pulling each other back and forth to act, this is not a Zerg routine of doting on your wife.

I really like Kapibala [shy]. It's so cute. I can create a world by myself.

The description is delicate and vivid, and it makes you want to read more.

Very beautiful, very beautiful, very beautiful

I just like reading this kind of redemption stories.

I really like this kind of story about character positioning, looking forward to it

It's a unit story, but it will be quite long. So far, the first one is almost over, and it's okay. The two protagonists just keep pulling each other, one is a bit cute and the other is like a little kid.

So far it looks good, in line with my taste, and very delicious, but there are too few... There is no cookie cutter, there are many types of cp [shy]

The contrast is huge, but there is no sense of fragmentation. It is incomparably beautiful.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking [shy]

I always feel that the reaction of the protagonist and the protagonist are a bit repetitive [face covering]. After a while, I discovered that the male insect has special abilities. First he took a step back, and the protagonist also took a step back. The two people were pulling back and forth.

It's very interesting, both protagonists are very sane.

OK, my writing is at the top of Tomato. Come on, keep up the good work.

It's so beautiful that I can't stand it anymore. I can't bear to watch it. I really want to gain weight but I can't help but want to watch it. I still can't help but tie it up. I'm so good at writing. I especially like the male and female insects in this setting. I like all the CPs that have been released so far. I feel like watching Mermaid Has Fallen before. I hope that the next few worlds will maintain this level [crying]

The author is so awesome and good at writing! ! !

It's super delicious and hurt/comfort.

Like it very much! ! The plot is smooth and the logic is tight without watering down.