[Da Qin] [Tianmu Live Broadcast] [Contrast of Raising Cubs] [Chapel Strategy]
In the third year of the First Emperor's reign, the sky suddenly fell. In the picture, the future Qin Dynasty flows like a river of blood, and the "peerless god of murder" sitting on the bones and slaughtering the remnants of the six kingdoms is actually a ten-year-old cub holding a milk cake and chewing it!
Ten-year-old Xianyu Ying Xiaoyi awakened her past life memories and was bound to a cute pet system that "becomes stronger when struck by lightning". She just wanted to be His Majesty the First Emperor's number one fan. Who would have thought that Tianmu would directly spoil the future and package him as the unfathomable "Guardian of Great Qin".
The First Emperor and the civil and military officials of the Manchu dynasty frantically planned their own strategy, vowing to pamper this "young god of murder" to heaven. However, Bai Yuan, a descendant of Bai Qi and the ruthless commander of the Forbidden Army, was ordered to monitor him, but he completely lost control due to repeated "favoritism" and "thunder strikes".
When the remnants of the Six Kingdoms joined forces to force him to kill him, Bai Yuan's sword flew across the air: "To touch him? Ask me about the Great Qin Cavalry first!" Wait, why was the promised cub of the God of Death suddenly held in the arms of his old enemy and fed to him?
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Please encourage me with four stars. I am not equal, but I can give the author some advice here. I feel that the plot is too slow when I read it now. After reading more than ten chapters in the early stage, I still can't find the point that makes me stay. There is no particularly clear plot node that hangs the reader. There is no feeling in the sky, and I can't find anything that attracts me in the few words every time. The characterization could be more vivid, and the emotions and actions could be portrayed more delicately. Let's take a look again. I haven't read a lot, so I don't know how the author wrote the plot behind it. But at present, these three words are too bland. I like the subject matter very much. If you really can't stand it, I'll jump in and see if the author has made any progress. [Love] Best wishes (the above is just my personal opinion, I haven't read much, so don't come here to criticize me. I didn't say I wanted to abandon the article!!!)