Time: Tower of Sage Chapter Natsuki Subaru is eaten up and his memory is devoured
There are a few spoilers, OOC apology, Ai Subaru TV, not a harem
AI content is 0, pure hand coding
The style is similar to Japanese light novels
There is something to say about the first part of the plot
Changyue old thief... Give me back Shaula
Changyue old thief... Give me back Shaula
Changyue old thief... Give me back Shaula
Reader comments
"I have forgotten how long ago it was the last time I asked a waiter to convey my respect to the chef on my behalf"😋
Is the strength of i Subaru too light? [Laugh]
It was a bit confusing in the early stage, and the language was a bit difficult to understand, but it was very tense. I didn't know what it was saying, but it was very exciting.
This book can be said to have the tension of language, especially the flavor of the original work. If the development of its theme and plot is clear, it might be interesting to watch. But in the early stages, the language was really confusing. If you don't look carefully, you may not even understand what is being said. But overall it's pretty good. Except for the confusing language in the early stages, the plot development and language tension are both pretty good.
Are you kidding me? Such a relaxing title actually reaches a terrifying level. [Cry]
It's better than I expected. I was originally dissuaded by the title and cover, thinking it was some vulgar fanfic. But after reading it, I found it to be pretty good. The writing style is quite consistent with the original work, the emotional impact is relatively strong, and the emotional scenes are also good. I feel that one of the main shortcomings is that the early writing was too messy and the explanation was not clear, and the other is that it is a bit OOC. Looking forward to the follow-up plot
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The characters have no OC and the setting is novel.
Looks good. I wonder if the part between Subaru and Echidna was private. The four created by Echidna should be Shaura, Dona Fox, Parker, and Betty.
I've seen this book on the cover [laughing evilly] It's just Cao Subaru TV
Okay, it feels like it has a strong sense of the original text.
It's good to watch, but the plot from the beginning is a bit messy, as if I suddenly thought of something to add, but the later part is okay.
"I have forgotten how long ago it was the last time I asked a waiter to convey my respect to the chef on my behalf"😋
Is the strength of i Subaru too light? [Laugh]
It was a bit confusing in the early stage, and the language was a bit difficult to understand, but it was very tense. I didn't know what it was saying, but it was very exciting.
This book can be said to have the tension of language, especially the flavor of the original work. If the development of its theme and plot is clear, it might be interesting to watch. But in the early stages, the language was really confusing. If you don't look carefully, you may not even understand what is being said. But overall it's pretty good. Except for the confusing language in the early stages, the plot development and language tension are both pretty good.
Are you kidding me? Such a relaxing title actually reaches a terrifying level. [Cry]
It's better than I expected. I was originally dissuaded by the title and cover, thinking it was some vulgar fanfic. But after reading it, I found it to be pretty good. The writing style is quite consistent with the original work, the emotional impact is relatively strong, and the emotional scenes are also good. I feel that one of the main shortcomings is that the early writing was too messy and the explanation was not clear, and the other is that it is a bit OOC. Looking forward to the follow-up plot
Reply within three days
The characters have no OC and the setting is novel.
Looks good. I wonder if the part between Subaru and Echidna was private. The four created by Echidna should be Shaura, Dona Fox, Parker, and Betty.
I've seen this book on the cover [laughing evilly] It's just Cao Subaru TV
Okay, it feels like it has a strong sense of the original text.
It's good to watch, but the plot from the beginning is a bit messy, as if I suddenly thought of something to add, but the later part is okay.