Love Apartment: Everyone Thinks I'm a Playboy

The writing is very good, there are original plots and new plots. The important thing is that the new plots can be integrated into the original plots without being too abrupt. It is too absolute to be one of the best in the fan fiction, but it is definitely among the best. I am so anxious. When can I be with Yumo! Update soon!!!

Yu Mo is indeed the most suitable for Mr. Lin, especially in the latest chapters. Yu Mo's sensitive discovery of Zi Qiao's fake couple's affairs and the clueless analysis are so fascinating. Please update more soon. I really want to raise him, but I'm still afraid of raising him to death 😢 😢

It's not bad. The original content is logical. Up to Chapter 98, the viewing experience is okay. I'll give it four stars first and wait for Yu Mo to come out. I hope it can be updated to the fifth season. Yu Mo has too few single female protagonists. Now it's almost all Nuo Lan's and I'm tired of it. If it gets better in the future, I'll give it five stars 🍉.

Why is the rating so low? I read it in one sitting in one night. I enjoyed it so much that I always had a smile on my face. It's a pity that Zeng Xiaoxian didn't express his feelings. Also, the plot changed by the author made me feel very comfortable watching it, much more comfortable than the original plot.

Overall, the writing was okay. I finished reading it, but I still have to say that the author, what you wrote at the beginning was not good, especially the wedding part. It was very average and I almost didn't read it. Fortunately, I have a high tolerance for iPartment fans and I only read the later part. If I can read the wedding part, this book will be very good.

So far it looks pretty good, at least it's not based on the series. The books with high ratings are not fanfics at all. They almost re-read the plot of each episode in text form. It's considered good to have 5% of your own original text. You might as well watch a TV series.

Mr. Lin's character design is very impressive. He is not the kind of person who will definitely fix him if he makes a mistake. He needs to let others realize their own problems and then come up with solutions. As for the sense of CP with Hu Yifei, I actually don't feel that the sense of CP is very strong. Their two personalities are in conflict. There can be more depictions of Yu Mo in the follow-up. Richard's scumbag plot has been completed, but it is just a suggestion. Maybe we can give Mr. Lin some broken plots that can touch his feelings. People who jump out of the waves have an obvious inner problem, that is, most people actually have a kind of loneliness in their hearts. This kind of people are used to filling this loneliness with indifference.

It looks good. The emotional lines between the male and female protagonists are also relatively delicate. Mr. Lin also has a clear understanding of himself. He didn't see Yumo rushing up like a male dog in other stories. The relationship is very soothing and makes people want to read more. I hope to keep the pace. The more the better, come on.

The writing is very good so far, and it is relatively innovative among iPartment fan fiction. But there is a problem so far. The heroine mentioned in the introduction is Qin Yumo. But now the sense of CP between Hu Yifei and the protagonist is too strong. I hope there won't be a sense of fragmentation when the scene transitions, otherwise a good book will be wasted. Of course, we'll have to talk about changing the heroine when the time comes. So far, the other scenes have been handled very well, but Zeng Xiaoxian feels a bit like a bastard. From the time I discovered this book to finishing it at around three in the morning. Really well written. But there are a few problems. 1. The sense of CP between Hu Yifei and the protagonist is too strong. Basically, they feel like little enemies. But the author's introduction introduces the heroine as Qin Yumo. If you don't consider changing the heroine, you will have to slowly reduce the sense of CP between Hu Yifei and the protagonist in the future. Otherwise, I'm worried that when Qin Yumo comes out and suddenly turns around, there will be a sense of fragmentation. That would ruin a good book. 2. Zeng Xiaoxian has become a bit of a background figure. 3. It is recommended to add some originality. The lines I have looked at so far are basically the lines extended from the original work. 4. Author, your writing is great. There is no need to limit it to the framework of a love apartment. You can completely write your own thing using the cover of iPartment. Your writing style is really great.

It's too short. Author, how could you make it so short? I read it in one night.