Ancient-style mystery + powerful leads + crime-solving and deduction + comedic banter
A cool, alluring beauty on the outside, but a funny, stubborn smart-mouth within: Shen Yanci (bottom) x a cold, taciturn, secretly seductive, scheming man with an overwhelming possessive streak: Gu Linzhou (top)
Just as Shen Yanci was steeling himself to go up and perform his “statue” act, a bloodcurdling scream came from upstairs
“Someone’s dead! Master Qian is gone!”
Shen Yanci’s eyes lit up. “Good riddance... I mean, a chance to solve a case!”
He’d meant to hide behind a pillar and watch the commotion, but instead, Gu Linzhou, the chief constable who terrified both the underworld and the respectable world of Jiangnan, kicked open the door.
Black robes, ink-dark hair, six foot three, with an imposing presence to match.
Gu Linzhou’s deep, cold eyes swept over the room, then settled on the young man behind the corridor pillar, dressed in a pale moon-white robe, the tips of his ears flushed red.
Shen Yanci’s heart raced to 150 beats per minute. Inside, he shrieked, “Oh my god! That physique, that face... even I wouldn’t dare design a male lead this handsome!”
But he kept up a show of composure, even lifting his chin to challenge Gu Linzhou as he approached. “You accuse me of sullying someone’s good name in front of everyone without a shred of evidence, my lord. Your methods of discipline... could use some work.”
Gu Linzhou narrowed his eyes, bent close to his ear, and murmured in a low, dangerous voice, “Young Master Yanci, you certainly have a silver tongue. Why not come with me to the crime scene?”
After that, Shen Yanci never looked back from his path of gossip and handsome men. Before long, he’d managed to land himself in the prince’s manor and acquire a well-behaved grown son without any effort.
That night, Gu Linzhou pinned Shen Yanci to the bed and whispered in his ear, “Yanci... call me husband...”
Darlings, brothers and sisters, don't worry, come in and take a look, it's full of flavor.
Let's take a chance and talk about your protagonist. Not only talk about the advantages, but objectively talk about the points that the character can easily be criticized for.
Shen Yanci traveled through time and became a Qinghuan in Lefang. He only had AI as his trump card, so survival was always his first priority. Gu Linzhou, on the other hand, has been handling murder cases all year round and is very thoughtful and does not trust anyone easily. From the conflict between the two people when they first met (please note that the character background introduction at the beginning of the book can be read in more than one article), to being forced to join forces to investigate the case, the feeling of pulling and ambiguity, and the interaction after being together in the middle and later stages. Old fans know that I may write the interaction in more detail (I think that if there is any difference, please believe in your point of view, you can also comment in the paragraph review, I will read it), which is the core highlight of this book.
However, there are a few places that I have been weighing when I write:
The AI golden finger is very difficult to control, and it can appear to be too omnipotent if you are not careful; there is too little interaction between the two in the early stage, and Gu Linzhou's continued attention to Shen Yanci's baby can easily appear to be insufficiently motivated; Shen Yanci, as a person who has been pretending to protect himself for a long time, sometimes reveals his emotions too quickly (mainly because I wrote too high).
I will slowly make corrections in the future. Under normal circumstances, I will reduce the number of scenes where the AI cutie Zhaoyan directly gives answers, and add a lot of daily interaction details to make the character's action logic smoother.
Also, my time jump will not be too big, it will be more daily. Anyway, everyone is welcome to taste it, - ̗̀ ෆ( ˶'ᵕ'˶)ෆ ̖́-
I have seen more than 60 pictures so far, and there are no surprises (I think). You can take a look at it, but I feel that there are very few people watching it. I feel that the description is okay, and the characters are also very fleshed out. I will give a five-star review first and wait until I see it later.
(♥∀♥) Beautiful! Baby Yanci is really human, and the interaction with Gu Linzhou really gives off the feeling of love and hate, the tug-of-war between enemies, and the AI feeling of Zhaoyan Xiaotuanzi is a bit artificial, but also a bit human, which is interesting anyway. There is also the great contrast between Yan Mo and Jiang Shuo, the serious and pretentious cute little bun and the loyal dog-like dull and cold noodle hunter, it is always interesting! Sisters, believe me and rush with confidence! ! ! ! [Adoration][Blowing a kiss][Sending a heart]
The writing is okay, there are no flaws, I just don't have the desire to read further, please do your best, author.
I like the characters very much, and the setting is quite novel. This is also the first detective-type book I've read on Red Persimmon. It's pretty good [shy][shy]
It's really beautiful! Super novel subject matter, I hope you can continue to write [Love][Love]
I haven't watched it yet, but I quite like the setting.
Darlings, brothers and sisters, don't worry, come in and take a look, it's full of flavor. Let's take a chance and talk about your protagonist. Not only talk about the advantages, but objectively talk about the points that the character can easily be criticized for. Shen Yanci traveled through time and became a Qinghuan in Lefang. He only had AI as his trump card, so survival was always his first priority. Gu Linzhou, on the other hand, has been handling murder cases all year round and is very thoughtful and does not trust anyone easily. From the conflict between the two people when they first met (please note that the character background introduction at the beginning of the book can be read in more than one article), to being forced to join forces to investigate the case, the feeling of pulling and ambiguity, and the interaction after being together in the middle and later stages. Old fans know that I may write the interaction in more detail (I think that if there is any difference, please believe in your point of view, you can also comment in the paragraph review, I will read it), which is the core highlight of this book. However, there are a few places that I have been weighing when I write: The AI golden finger is very difficult to control, and it can appear to be too omnipotent if you are not careful; there is too little interaction between the two in the early stage, and Gu Linzhou's continued attention to Shen Yanci's baby can easily appear to be insufficiently motivated; Shen Yanci, as a person who has been pretending to protect himself for a long time, sometimes reveals his emotions too quickly (mainly because I wrote too high). I will slowly make corrections in the future. Under normal circumstances, I will reduce the number of scenes where the AI cutie Zhaoyan directly gives answers, and add a lot of daily interaction details to make the character's action logic smoother. Also, my time jump will not be too big, it will be more daily. Anyway, everyone is welcome to taste it, - ̗̀ ෆ( ˶'ᵕ'˶)ෆ ̖́-
I have seen more than 60 pictures so far, and there are no surprises (I think). You can take a look at it, but I feel that there are very few people watching it. I feel that the description is okay, and the characters are also very fleshed out. I will give a five-star review first and wait until I see it later.
(♥∀♥) Beautiful! Baby Yanci is really human, and the interaction with Gu Linzhou really gives off the feeling of love and hate, the tug-of-war between enemies, and the AI feeling of Zhaoyan Xiaotuanzi is a bit artificial, but also a bit human, which is interesting anyway. There is also the great contrast between Yan Mo and Jiang Shuo, the serious and pretentious cute little bun and the loyal dog-like dull and cold noodle hunter, it is always interesting! Sisters, believe me and rush with confidence! ! ! ! [Adoration][Blowing a kiss][Sending a heart]
The writing is okay, there are no flaws, I just don't have the desire to read further, please do your best, author.
I like the characters very much, and the setting is quite novel. This is also the first detective-type book I've read on Red Persimmon. It's pretty good [shy][shy]
It's really beautiful! Super novel subject matter, I hope you can continue to write [Love][Love]
I haven't watched it yet, but I quite like the setting.