Ancient style suspense + Qiangqiang + crime-solving reasoning + sand sculpture complaints
She is a cool-looking beauty with a funny face and a tough mouth on the inside. Shen Yanci (sufferer)
Just when Shen Yanci was about to bravely go up to perform "Wooden Man", a shrill scream suddenly came from upstairs——
"He's dead! Master Qian is gone!!"
Shen Yanci's eyes lit up: "A good death... Ah no, here's the chance to solve the case!"
He originally wanted to hide behind the pillar and eat melon, but he didn't expect that the chief catcher Gu Linzhou, who frightened the black and white gangs in Jiangnan, kicked the door open.
Xuan Yi has black hair, is 1.9 Meters tall, and has an aura of 2.8 Meters.
Gu Linzhou's dark and cold eyes swept across the whole place, and finally settled on the young man in a moon-white gown behind the pillars with red ears.
Shen Yanci's heartbeat soared to 150, and she screamed in her heart: "What a fool! With this figure and looks, even the male protagonists I write would not dare to do this!"
But he still had to pretend to be calm, and even when Gu Linzhou was approaching, he raised his head and asked: "My lord, you have no evidence and no evidence, and you accuse someone of innocence in public. This discipline method... Needs to be strengthened."
Gu Linzhou narrowed his eyes, bent down and leaned close to his ear, his voice was low and dangerous: "Young Master Yanci is very talkative, why don't you go with me to the crime scene?"
Later, Shen Yanci never returned to the road of eating melons and appreciating beautiful men. He successfully managed to get himself into the palace and lived a painless life as a well-behaved and grown-up boy.
At night, Shen Yanci was pressed on the bed by Gu Linzhou. Gu Linzhou whispered in his ear, Yanci... Called Mr. Xian...
Reader comments
Darlings, brothers and sisters, don't worry, come in and take a look, it's full of flavor.
Let's take a chance and talk about your protagonist. Not only talk about the advantages, but objectively talk about the points that the character can easily be criticized for.
Shen Yanci traveled through time and became a Qinghuan in Lefang. He only had AI as his trump card, so survival was always his first priority. Gu Linzhou, on the other hand, has been handling murder cases all year round and is very thoughtful and does not trust anyone easily. From the conflict between the two people when they first met (please note that the character background introduction at the beginning of the book can be read in more than one article), to being forced to join forces to investigate the case, the feeling of pulling and ambiguity, and the interaction after being together in the middle and later stages. Old fans know that I may write the interaction in more detail (I think that if there is any difference, please believe in your point of view, you can also comment in the paragraph review, I will read it), which is the core highlight of this book.
However, there are a few places that I have been weighing when I write:
The AI golden finger is very difficult to control, and it can appear to be too omnipotent if you are not careful; there is too little interaction between the two in the early stage, and Gu Linzhou's continued attention to Shen Yanci's baby can easily appear to be insufficiently motivated; Shen Yanci, as a person who has been pretending to protect himself for a long time, sometimes reveals his emotions too quickly (mainly because I wrote too high).
I will slowly make corrections in the future. Under normal circumstances, I will reduce the number of scenes where the AI cutie Zhaoyan directly gives answers, and add a lot of daily interaction details to make the character's action logic smoother.
Also, my time jump will not be too big, it will be more daily. Anyway, everyone is welcome to taste it, - ̗̀ ෆ( ˶'ᵕ'˶)ෆ ̖́-
(♥∀♥) Beautiful! Baby Yanci is really human, and the interaction with Gu Linzhou really gives off the feeling of love and hate, the tug-of-war between enemies, and the AI feeling of Zhaoyan Xiaotuanzi is a bit artificial, but also a bit human, which is interesting anyway. There is also the great contrast between Yan Mo and Jiang Shuo, the serious and pretentious cute little bun and the loyal dog-like dull and cold noodle hunter, it is always interesting! Sisters, believe me and rush with confidence! ! ! ! [Adoration][Blowing a kiss][Sending a heart]
Darlings, brothers and sisters, don't worry, come in and take a look, it's full of flavor. Let's take a chance and talk about your protagonist. Not only talk about the advantages, but objectively talk about the points that the character can easily be criticized for. Shen Yanci traveled through time and became a Qinghuan in Lefang. He only had AI as his trump card, so survival was always his first priority. Gu Linzhou, on the other hand, has been handling murder cases all year round and is very thoughtful and does not trust anyone easily. From the conflict between the two people when they first met (please note that the character background introduction at the beginning of the book can be read in more than one article), to being forced to join forces to investigate the case, the feeling of pulling and ambiguity, and the interaction after being together in the middle and later stages. Old fans know that I may write the interaction in more detail (I think that if there is any difference, please believe in your point of view, you can also comment in the paragraph review, I will read it), which is the core highlight of this book. However, there are a few places that I have been weighing when I write: The AI golden finger is very difficult to control, and it can appear to be too omnipotent if you are not careful; there is too little interaction between the two in the early stage, and Gu Linzhou's continued attention to Shen Yanci's baby can easily appear to be insufficiently motivated; Shen Yanci, as a person who has been pretending to protect himself for a long time, sometimes reveals his emotions too quickly (mainly because I wrote too high). I will slowly make corrections in the future. Under normal circumstances, I will reduce the number of scenes where the AI cutie Zhaoyan directly gives answers, and add a lot of daily interaction details to make the character's action logic smoother. Also, my time jump will not be too big, it will be more daily. Anyway, everyone is welcome to taste it, - ̗̀ ෆ( ˶'ᵕ'˶)ෆ ̖́-
(♥∀♥) Beautiful! Baby Yanci is really human, and the interaction with Gu Linzhou really gives off the feeling of love and hate, the tug-of-war between enemies, and the AI feeling of Zhaoyan Xiaotuanzi is a bit artificial, but also a bit human, which is interesting anyway. There is also the great contrast between Yan Mo and Jiang Shuo, the serious and pretentious cute little bun and the loyal dog-like dull and cold noodle hunter, it is always interesting! Sisters, believe me and rush with confidence! ! ! ! [Adoration][Blowing a kiss][Sending a heart]