(The title "Evil God" was a bait title. Scroll all the way to the bottom.)
"I think I should say a couple of things (ᗜ ˰ ᗜ)"
A black-haired girl named Xia Yan raised her hand.
"The moment I transmigrated, I noticed three problems."
"First, I was a guy. How did I turn into a girl after transmigrating?"
"Second, I hadn't even gotten used to it yet when I ran into a giant snot creature that eats people. Sigh, that shows there's something wrong with this world™️."
"Third, going by the usual rules, I transmigrated, so where's my System? Isn't this just making things harder for me? It's like going to eat and not being given chopsticks, or getting in a car and not being given a steering wheel. What's the point? Just get it over with."
Author: All right, you just want a golden finger, don't you?
"What do you mean, I just want a golden finger? Listen, old-timer writing your first book, that's not right. I'm a transmigrator. You have the right to give me a System. It's my right, got it?"
"You save one System by giving me one. With so many people transmigrating, how many Systems are you going to save? Fine, I think I've hit a nerve, so I'll leave it there. The readers will let you know how many problems there are."
I'm not good at writing blurbs, so please head to the story.
(I'm a new writer writing my first book and still figuring out my style. If you're interested, take a look. If you don't like it, just leave. Please don't flame me.) (I'll revise the blurb later. For now, it'll do.) (This work is also titled "Ultraman: The Mob Heroine's Self-Cultivation." That would be the title if I only wrote the Nexus arc. The Evil God mainly comes into play in later events. Originally, I planned to write only the Nexus arc and then end the story
If you don't understand the introduction, you can read this comment. [Change Order] (High probability) [No system] The protagonist can control Chiton's battle through the battle instrument, and can look forward to a wave of waves. He has the ability of telepathy and lightning. Maybe he can cosplay Misaka Mikoto in the later stage? After wandering for a few days, Brother Zhun was finally taken in, but is Brother Zhun really stuck with the baby? In short, it can be regarded as making up for the psychological trauma of brother-to-be not saving Sera. The plot and rhythm are very comfortable, the characterization is great, and the daily life is well written. And the protagonist's personality and identity are quite fun to put in the world of Nexus. I am very much looking forward to the exciting plot in the future. So far, it looks like it has quite a potential.
First of all, from my personal perspective, I really like this novel so far. Secondly, the protagonist is a person with special powers and possesses the power of Leonix. It is not like some system novels, where you just sign in to a blank slate with a great source. It is not too expensive and not too strong. This is well written. Then there is the arrangement of the follow-up plot. I saw what you said in the comment area. Regarding the confusion about the follow-up arrangement, I recommend that you follow the plot with the participation of the protagonist, and then there will be a plot with Zaki to seize Forget River. It is best not to deviate too much from the original world view. At the same time, it is definitely best if you have your own ideas.
This is my first novel, and I want to see how difficult it is to write. 🤔😠
The Five Great Oaths of Ultra (Five Great Oaths of Ultra) ⒈Abdominal ペコのままschool へかぬこと; Don't go to school hungry (don't do anything unprepared) ⒉のいいにをすこと; When the weather is nice, you should hang out under the quilt (seize the opportunity for everything) ⒊をくにはにをつけること; Watch out for vehicles when crossing the road (be aware of hidden risks) ⒋Other people's strength and strength; Cannot rely on the strength of others (be responsible for your own actions) ⒌The soil is on the ground and the bare feet are walking and the walking is back. Play barefoot on the ground (down to earth, honest person)
Good luck! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I'm short of words and can't come up with any good sentences, but it's really beautiful! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I haven't watched Nexus, I've only seen it in some short videos, but the teacher's writing is really good, especially the relationship between Gumon and Riko, which made me cry. @ Fengnianyuhuo Teacher, can you update 50 chapters a day? If there is no food to eat 😢😢😢 What are you looking at? There is none left!
When we meet, there is bound to be a moment of parting... Flowers may look cute when they bloom, but once they wither, they only add to the sadness of people. But... I don't know when the petals will be blown away by the wind... If you know that you are about to disappear, but still live in that moment... (Translation: Keep up with the big army)
Yeah What does this mean? After searching for a long time, I couldn't find it. There is no such word in Japanese as 'ひ'. The Japanese word for ひdansou means sun and day. What I found on the word ひDansou means "what" in Guangzhou dialect. It doesn't look like it means 'what's the day'?
I give it five stars. The rest of the writing is pretty good, but the beginning is a bit lacking in information density. The protagonist's plug-in is Chiton. I suddenly remembered the joke from before, what does it mean when everyone is in despair, you create a Chiton to absorb despair, and what does it mean that your Chiton can also absorb hope and transform it into a shining form. The left hand does more damage, the right hand does more damage
Compared with those AI articles that are stiff in the first chapter, this is already pretty good [face covering]
Your book was recommended to me by a platform for a while, but because I didn't know much about Ultraman and wasn't very interested in it, I didn't read it. But now that the platform has recommended this book to me, I think this book should be somewhat outstanding. I took a look, it's pretty good, but can I update a million words a day?