[Handcrafted, somewhat traditional; mindless fun interwoven with deeper meaning; an attempt at grand-scale storytelling]
The Age of Declining Dharma. The world undergoes a cataclysmic transformation.
In this age where everything devours the weak, one person drifts through time and space and lands in a modern city.
(Blessings and misfortunes come together, though those caught up in them may not realize it.)
Though he doesn't know where he was born, he lives a fairly peaceful life.
He perseveres through countless worries, struggles, joys, and pains.
The Great Dao decays, all laws are consumed, and everything withers away.
In this mortal martial civilization, combat power is currently represented by four attributes: vitality, magic, attack, and defense.
Shen Qingxuan is a fragile mage who awakened with powerful attributes and explosive abilities.
With a special necklace he always carries, he gradually builds his attributes by killing monsters, achieving a whole new transformation in strength.
As his strength grows, he realizes something is amiss. After one breakthrough after another, he finally learns the reason behind it all.
I looked at a few pictures and couldn't stand them anymore. It can be seen that it was written by a rookie, so give it a three-star encouragement. Ask a few questions. The attributes are very confusing and completely disproportionate to your attack power based on the attributes you write. The career traits are honestly useless, not useful at all. 100 Blood at level 1 and 110 blood at level 3 can be understood as level 1 + 5 drops of blood. If you think about it, I can understand that the mage is brittle in the early stage, but you seem to have forgotten that the mage is still a cripple in the early stage. The attribute points you added and the +1 attack are simply not suitable for your profession. Are you writing about Gandalf in the movie and TV series? Go up there with a stick? There are too many loopholes and the attribute settings are extremely unreasonable. I couldn't stand it after watching a few pictures. It is recommended to cut it and start it again, and it will start to feel better immediately. Otherwise, you won't be able to eat it.
Cut it and rewrite it. There are too many pitfalls in settings. First, online games do not have speed attributes. The second attack attribute can only be hit with skills. This is not what an online game novel should be at all. .
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This book is useless as soon as we get started.
First, like it