Shape Moon: Start Four Battles, but Transform into an Elf

I hope the author can make some of the protagonists more rational and not have to worship and respect Saber so much. I hope it can be weakened appropriately. After all, the protagonist is a cherubim and has to be a bit strong. But overall it is very interesting and the plot is very innovative. It makes people excited and looking forward to the follow-up. I hope the author can work hard to continue writing.

It should be that Al has been used in some places. Al's words always say: not... Not... But, but it's okay. Well, the main problem is still Al. The author can actually change the description of this kind of AI a little bit. The main thing is what is not... Not... But, what is subtle and what is difficult to observe without looking carefully, such as frowning, smiling, etc. A small amount is okay, but most of the AI uses these descriptions. If it is like this, it will be weird even if it is not seen with AI.

It's not that unbearable, but there are indeed some problems The protagonist can only be said to be the protagonist. There is no question of who the protagonist is. It is more like gaining the ability of an angel and rationalizing it on the basis of Yue. It is not a complete acting genre, and the role of Date Live is not easy to play. You can do it for fun when you don't have a book to read. At least there's nothing wrong with it in terms of perspective. It's probably three to four stars. If you can read it, this book can be considered mediocre. It's not that bad, and it's not that good either. Those who rated 1 or 2 stars are too subjective and the big portions are not enough. In fact, this book can still be used for entertainment. It is probably better than the previous one, but not as good as the previous one. The author said that it will be refined in the latest, so please wait for a while. After reading the refined review, I will update the review in real time. After taking a look at the revised content, I have a reasonable explanation and have alleviated some of the poisonous points. However, it is indeed not up to five stars. However, four stars are definitely there now. I hope the author can continue to work hard. The current momentum is very good. As long as the update is not interrupted, he will definitely be able to create a masterpiece. From the current point of view, I still hope that the protagonist can have some mental growth. Although according to the novel, the protagonist has only traveled for 3 or 4 days. It is normal to have strong power and float easily. With this power, I float better than the protagonist. The main thing is to remind the author. After all, the protagonist's mentality, or the perspective from the protagonist's side, is indeed a little bit toxic in the early stage, but this is also a normal phenomenon. Overall, this book has a promising future, and I will update the ratings from time to time. I hope the author will work hard.

It's nice to read, and the perception is pretty good. There are too few articles about fighting with fellow fans. The author must persevere😭

In fact, I shouldn't comment so early, [laughing], but I think the author's plot is pretty good, especially about giving Wanyuri the moon world identity of a cherubim. This design is novel enough for someone like me who doesn't know much about the moon world and won't pursue the details of the setting. Moreover, the combat power setting is not too outrageous, and the protagonist has zero fighting awareness. , Which is enough to lower her strength and prevent her from being a speedrun overnight. However, I like Guinevere in "Le Morte d'Arthur" very much, so some of her speeches are quite radical. Regarding the AI problem, I don't see much of it. The biggest problem I have seen in AI articles is repetition. It may also be that I have read too little or have insufficient awareness. I think it is good, and I hope the author can write it down.

The protagonist is just Liya's licking dog

The front is a little dull, but the rhythm in the back is very good. Starting from the left and right of Alexander's exit, the whole thing becomes much more compact, and we can also see the serious battle between Kenneth and Kiritsugu. This time Diarmuid also accomplished what he always wanted to do. He left the duel with dignity and loyalty to the master. It was a dream come true. After watching a lot, I really wanted to see a good ending for Kenneth's group. Brother Flash is still a bit humorous, not developed enough, and may not be one of the main characters in terms of status, so I plan to retire it quickly. After a quick glance, the rating is so low, I guess I didn't wait until later. Give a five-star encouragement score to balance it out. If you have time later, you can revise the previous article, which will be even more perfect. Looking forward to the arrangement of the final battle and the ending of these characters who are still alive.

After writing with AI, it is recommended to streamline it more and reduce the frequency of AI use.

I think it would be great if there were pure spirits, such as Manuri, Rinni, Ren, Rin, Tohka, Tenka, Mio, or Mamoru Mariya, or Mamoru Maruna. (I feel that the clone Kuang San is also good, because the clone Kuang San also has no body and is maintained by spiritual power and time. Time is the essence and life, and there is also Kuang Kuang Emperor) Because other elves are not real elves in essence, but people who have reached the power of elves, and they can live without the spiritual power of elves. The protagonists are made up of spiritual power. Without their human bodies, they cannot come as pseudo-elves or half-elves. Those pseudo-elves are closer to the feeling of Ishtar being tortured by flesh. However, there seems to be a saying about the coming of the flesh. It can be explained that I just found an external arrival with a similar wavelength, and the essence is still an elf, not the corresponding person. It seems that after Ishtar took the flesh, she was still Ishtar and not Rin, but it was just affected by Rin's character.

I think it's very beautiful, after all, it's rare. What I like is that it would be nice to hear readers' opinions. I don't know why I always feel that way. What's wrong? After all, it is inside Xingyue. Angels carry original sin, and so far I really don't see where original sin is. Angels are essentially just suits. If you want to stabilize your personality, original sin is very necessary.

It doesn't feel bad now, it's pretty good

I feel very good now, nothing bad. A lot of people say it's an AI text, but as long as you enjoy reading it, it doesn't matter.

Wan Yuri has written a very good style of writing that is both interesting and memorable. I just hope that her attitude and character towards all things as an archangel will be strengthened in the future.

Some things are modified with AI, but they can be viewed. As long as you throw away your brain and don't care about so many settings, it is a good work that can be watched.

Putting aside the emotional description of the otaku protagonist when facing Artoria, it made me hallucinate Zhen. Fair enough, it's okay to be naked.

Good book, I like this subject

It has been written very well

It's okay to be proud

The type is what I like

Don't be fooled by the cover and copy, it's beautiful (*/∇＼*)

It looks okay. After reading the comments, I guess the author has changed it, and I think it looks okay. [Full]

After changing it, I was finally able to watch [face covering]. Although it still has a strong AI flavor, at least it's not that poisonous.

The fight is crisp and clean

The author writes very well, but there is too little. What you write is not enough for me. Author, you are aggrieved. Don't sleep this year and write more.

The description is very good, and it captures everything in my mind.

Let's give it a 5-point rating first.

The author will update it quickly, and it will be updated to chapter 200 soon.

Love to watch, too little

In fact, I want to read the sword dance world from Wanyuri to the Fairy Tail [mainly to satisfy the book I saw in Mao Na, Madhu, that volume just ran away🌿]

A very nice book