The Black Tide Crown

The protagonist has the memory of a time traveler, but this article is like a stiff, childish flow novel. Who likes this boring version of stiff, monotonous dialogue, which is boring, stiff, and uninteresting, and who can show it to me, and I am speechless. Childish writing for students? Normal people prepare for a rainy day, but you have a huge explosion of information about time travellers. What plots can't you think of or don't know? . The world is just like that.

It's an AI article. There is no brother in the front, but a dead brother suddenly appears in the middle of writing. There are also inconsistencies in the protagonist's time when he went to learn magic. When his brother died, the protagonist was still learning magic, but was it only a year since the protagonist went there?

AI feels too heavy