Zone Zero: the Biggest Weapons Dealer in New Elido

I use the most concise, straightforward, and least roundabout words to tell you that this book is okay, but some places seem too abrupt, and the overall text is still a bit messy. However, it is still readable. The author's writing style needs to be improved, especially the emotional line. In fact, the author can write at a slower pace, but the writing feels a bit fast now, so I should slow down the pace appropriately. And don't have too many female protagonists. The main female protagonist I want to read is Alan. After all, I have read a lot of fan fiction. I want to read something original. Narcissus is still very fragrant. Generally speaking, it's okay. Give me some support, but you have to work harder and don't be selfish.

Come on, author, it's so beautiful. Even if JueZuo backstabs you. I have to write it down too. Come on, the big brother who writes JueZuZero.

Not bad, but isn't it soul-piercing? Why is the ether resistance so low?

Come on, Lao Zuo can do anything [crying]

Narcissus, it's narcissus, it's so delicious, I'm not full!

First give a score to support the author, Narcissus, you still have to love yourself [Adoration]

Looking forward to the next plot

I'm always a little unsure about this book whether it's AI or whether it was copied and pasted [face covering] Mainly because there are always two paragraphs of the same language in some places.

Your writing and narrative skills need to be improved, but the flaws are not hidden. I agree with your imagination in creating storylines. Just correct those glaring things and it will be a better work.

Come on, keep reading. It's a beautiful JueZuZero novel. Can the heroine have Yi Xuan? [Sinister smile]

Narcissus Narcissus Narcissus Narcissus

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

I have been attracted by the author's big book. I want narcissus, can I? ? 😋@ Sexy robber

Do it faster, do it faster, and get more.

Although there is a clone, Narcissus [Adoration], Japanese