Zenless Zone Zero: New Eridu's Biggest Arms Dealer

I use the most concise, straightforward, and least roundabout words to tell you that this book is okay, but some places seem too abrupt, and the overall text is still a bit messy. However, it is still readable. The author's writing style needs to be improved, especially the emotional line. In fact, the author can write at a slower pace, but the writing feels a bit fast now, so I should slow down the pace appropriately. And don't have too many female protagonists. The main female protagonist I want to read is Alan. After all, I have read a lot of fan fiction. I want to read something original. Narcissus is still very fragrant. Generally speaking, it's okay. Give me some support, but you have to work harder and don't be selfish.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, the writing is concise, clear and a bit cute (I especially like the sentence "A Lan makes money and A Qinghua, and A Qing spends money to draw weapons for A Lan" which is very good). The vest is also good, but sometimes the three people are confused. I could write more about the appearance of the two protagonists, or make some pictures of A Qing and A Lan's appearance. I can write about daily life and slow down the pace. Does the heroine have big sisters like Yi Xuan, Vagina, Remi, etc.? Come on, author, here I hope the author and readers will never run away [salute]

Come on, Lao Zuo can do anything 😢

I quite like this book. Although they say the writing is a bit poor, I feel it is just right. I think if I imagined it, it would be just like what I imagined, and it would be very immersive. [Already planted][Bookshelf plus one]1

Come on, author, it's so beautiful. Even if JueZuo backstabs you. I have to write it down too. Come on, the big brother who writes JueZuZero.

Not bad, but isn't it soul-piercing? Why is the ether resistance so low?

It's okay, but looking at it, Hakisaku is probably going to take this one to the next level.

Just adding combat power to the clone does not increase the combat power of the main body?

Uh, not bad, but why are there so many repeated sentences in the article? The good thing is, it can be seen that the author is writing his own things, and the main line is also mentioned in one stroke. Come on, boss, don't die, boss (›´ω`‹)

Narcissus, it's narcissus, it's so delicious, I'm not full!