[Interstellar martial arts + life evolution + virtual reality + species survival + ruthless action + plot-driven power fantasy + no System]
On Blue Star, the sun disappeared for 12 hours, and from then on, martial arts began to flourish. Six months later, the 100% immersive virtual game Life Evolution appeared out of nowhere. Countries around the world forced their entire populations to log in, and more than eight billion people began their journey of life evolution together.
Zhou Heng transmigrated into this world just in time for the event and promptly quit his job to take part.
His boss tried to talk him out of it: “The evolution game may look fair, but the privileged found out about it long ago and have made all the preparations they need. Martial arts prodigies have trained since childhood and already have a huge head start. There are millions of martial arts professionals, and eight billion people worldwide are competing. You’re an ordinary person with no cheat and no System. How can you compete with them? Keeping your job is the sensible choice.”
Zhou Heng slipped his hands into his pockets and smiled calmly. “Sorry, I have a cheat!”
Upon entering the game world, he shouted, “Cheat, activate!”
From then on, armed with his cheat, he defeated every prodigy, subdued every species, and ascended to the highest throne.
Dear author, your writing is actually quite good, but probably because of the first impression, I don't like Gu Miaomiao as the heroine. [Rolls eyes] Also, the male protagonist's first S-level dungeon announcement was released, and the male protagonist also appeared in the dungeon. Why did Gu Miaomiao assume that Zhou Heng, who passed the S-level level announced in the dungeon, was the male protagonist? [Pouts] Actually, it's good that this book doesn't have a female protagonist. I took a quick look at the back part and it's pretty good. But I really can't accept Gu Miaomiao being the female protagonist. The original owner of the male protagonist's body acts as a licking dog for Gu Miaomiao. [Sad] I can't accept the fact that Gu Miaomiao hangs on to the original owner. 🤮 The character image of the male protagonist is quite good. If there is such a person as the male protagonist, I believe he will not get a girlfriend, because he will only think that women waste his time in practicing martial arts and seeking enlightenment. Even if he does get a girlfriend, his girlfriend will not be Gu Miaomiao (even if Gu Miaomiao's appearance is the type he likes). His girlfriend will definitely be the kind of person who can rival him. Even if not, at least she will be the same person who pursues the avenue. [Chigua] So, dear author, unless you change the article and change the heroine or there is no heroine, we will see you again in the world! Bye ~
The following is the original text: "The sun disappeared for a full 12 hours before appearing. During this period, the Blue Star was dark." ? Isn't this a normal day?
Not bad! The rhythm and excitement are quite spot on!
It's pretty good-looking, relatively rare writing, not so formulaic.
Pretty good, my opinion
Very well written, keep it up!