Wuthering Waves: Resonating with Aleph-1 from the Start

The unique perspective of Aleph as a resonant is very interesting, and it has the flavor of a villain novel. I also hope that the author can maintain this momentum. After all, the core bosses of the entire major version have been included, and only the protagonist can take over as the villain. I just have a suggestion: the original New Federation part at the beginning may be a bit dissuasive to some readers. After all, everyone who reads fan fiction would still want to see content related to the original characters. I feel like I can just start the chapter directly in the academy, and then the heroine Rinna or Dania will appear (for one thing, when I saw Aleph's resonance, I thought it must be the heroine Dania)

What I wrote above is really great, and it suits my taste very well. It is a rare good book. Then we arrived at the Mysterious Village. There are only over 60 chapters in this book. The Mysterious Village has over 20 chapters yet to be finished. Who knows the despair I felt when I kept pressing the next chapter and found that when I reached the latest chapter, it was still a small village. I don't know what is written in it, but I really have no interest in reading it at all. I can only say that the book is indeed a good one. After all, there are so few Mingchao books, so this one can be considered of high quality.

Okay, three aspects of evaluation: First, the self-created plot is okay here, but I think some of the plots can be considered. Your self-created plot should also follow the game plot. Ah, for example, when "Rina" was a mercenary, she was not called Rina, and there is also the "Eternal Sakura Miko". The miko is a hidden trump card, and the Broken Star Club should not know it so early. The second aspect is character creation. This aspect is okay. The protagonist and Aleph's images are relatively vivid. The professor also has some funny genes in him. Linna and other supporting characters are also okay. The third aspect is that you have a single heroine. Based on your name, I guess she is Rinna. Well, Rinna has been described so far. Is it too little? You even wrote about the godfather of that family so vividly, shouldn't there be more descriptions about Rinna? Finally, I want to say one more thing. The writing style is relatively young and there is room for improvement. I will give you four stars for encouragement. If the next writing is good, I will support it with five stars. Well, you can create your own. You can follow the plot at least. Well, that's okay, I look forward to the author's progress.

I found the interaction between Aleph and the protagonist quite interesting. The plot in the middle was a bit too long, which affected the viewing experience a bit, but the rest was okay. The interaction with the heroine Linna is still less now. I want to see them deepen their relationship. Finally, let's have sex!!!!!

Good reviews, the protagonist still has the feeling of being the mastermind behind the scenes.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Yes, the author's writing and plot progression are both good.

It's very good and fits the image of the character in my mind. Isn't it a bit too little and not enough to be jailed😋😋😋

It looks good, but the branch line is too long

What's going on, why don't you come and do it for your own sake?