Name: Ming Tide: Resonance with Aleph at the Beginning
Author: Naraku 0120

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Synopsis

(Mingchao fan + no system + male drifter + single female protagonist Linna) Aleph 1: "Ladies and gentlemen, let us give you a round of applause——" "The best Naru-style resonater, the eternal partner of justice." "Outstanding alumni and youngest professor of Xingju College." "The non-staff supervisor of the Broken Star Club who is the least arrogant and has the most collective sense of honor." "Solaris's first Peace Ambassador." "The Man Behind the Drifter." "Mr. Elias, come on!" Elias: "Ahem, I'm not, I don't have it, don't talk nonsense. Also, where did you get such a lot of titles?!" There was warm applause and curses from the audience. … Drifter: "Elias is a trustworthy and trustworthy partner. As for Nair, the Void Walker, as the resonator of the Naru style and the supervisor of the Broken Star Society, he is a serious problem for the entire Solaris!" The Broken Star Club and the public shouted: "The wanderers are confused!" Elias could only regret this: "I'm sorry Drifter, you were talking about me." (If you don't want to watch the original plot, you can just jump to Chapter 15)

Reader comments

The unique perspective of Aleph as a resonant is very interesting, and it has the flavor of a villain novel. I also hope that the author can maintain this momentum. After all, the core bosses of the entire major version have been included, and only the protagonist can take over as the villain. I just have a suggestion: the original New Federation part at the beginning may be a bit dissuasive to some readers. After all, everyone who reads fan fiction would still want to see content related to the original characters. I feel like I can just start the chapter directly in the academy, and then the heroine Rinna or Dania will appear (for one thing, when I saw Aleph's resonance, I thought it must be the heroine Dania)
13 likes16d ago
Okay, three aspects of evaluation: First, the self-created plot is okay here, but I think some of the plots can be considered. Your self-created plot should also follow the game plot. Ah, for example, when "Rina" was a mercenary, she was not called Rina, and there is also the "Eternal Sakura Miko". The miko is a hidden trump card, and the Broken Star Club should not know it so early. The second aspect is character creation. This aspect is okay. The protagonist and Aleph's images are relatively vivid. The professor also has some funny genes in him. Linna and other supporting characters are also okay. The third aspect is that you have a single heroine. Based on your name, I guess she is Rinna. Well, Rinna has been described so far. Is it too little? You even wrote about the godfather of that family so vividly, shouldn't there be more descriptions about Rinna? Finally, I want to say one more thing. The writing style is relatively young and there is room for improvement. I will give you four stars for encouragement. If the next writing is good, I will support it with five stars. Well, you can create your own. You can follow the plot at least. Well, that's okay, I look forward to the author's progress.
10 likes13d ago
Good reviews, the protagonist still has the feeling of being the mastermind behind the scenes.
2 likes12d ago
Yes, the author's writing and plot progression are both good.
2 likes14d ago
It's so well written and I'll add more
1 like11d ago

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