I Became a Rich Second Generation Through the Book, I Directly Redeemed the Heroine

It's a very good story. At first I thought it was going to be dark and dark, but it turned out to be a sweet everyday story about a rich man and two 18-year-old twins, eating, drinking and having fun together, just having fun. The two heroines are also good, no other messy ambiguities, just a sweet love, good sisters under the same quilt

I hope this book becomes popular. If it does, I will quit my job and stay at home and make updates [crying][crying][crying]

The flaws are not hidden, the writing is smooth, and there are no obvious poisonous points. The character of the male protagonist is neither a virgin nor cold-blooded. The "rich second generation" feeling is more natural, not the awkward feeling of pretending to be cool just for the sake of showing off. And it can be seen that the author pays great attention to the details. The characters are not stereotyped. The current plot advancement is a little slow. The villain's IQ is normal. It is hoped that some events that the male and female protagonists will experience together can be appropriately added to promote the relationship, instead of just relying on daily interactions.

Let me talk about the conclusion first, super big Comfortable, really comfortable. There's nothing wrong with it, it's just that it's very comfortable to watch. The previous part of the slap in the face was a bit high because the writing was very classic and smooth, but I just skipped it. The overall setting and writing are not top-notch, but it's very comfortable, just like my beloved Askaron (?)

Although the plot is not very unconventional, judging from the small details, the author was very careful in writing this novel. The characters are not as stereotyped and unpleasant as traditional urban novels. Overall, the author worked very hard to write this book. I personally recommend it. I hope the author can continue this meticulous attitude [Chigua] [Admire]

It's okay, a little bit toxic, and many scenes in it are unrealistic, but after all, it's a novel, so it doesn't matter. If you can accept that the plot in it is not that realistic, I still recommend it.

The writing is very good. It contains relatively new ideas in the redemption article. I have never seen anything similar before. It can be seen that it is purely handmade. Try not to use it as I am afraid that it will be lost.

It's quite a good read. After reading it, I just sighed that it's really good to be rich. This book doesn't have any nonsense and cliché plots. It just writes about everyday, ordinary happy life. It's easy for people to get involved.

Good news, daily life is very sweet, the male protagonist's outlook on life is good, and the female protagonist is given enough respect. Nowadays, most of the great novels have multiple female protagonists, which is too boring. This novel is light and healthy, and it is very enjoyable to read, but it is too slow. How can you sleep without updating ten chapters a day at your age? Come on, five stars

It's nice to watch. Personally, I don't dislike the description of the environment and details at all. The author put a lot of effort into this, so there's no problem with it. What needs attention is the plot design. I hope the author will use his brain to create a more ups and downs plot! Come on, come on, overall it's great, looking forward to the follow-up!

I also know why one is called Wan Ning and the other is called Wan Su. Because Su Ning. Com

It's okay. It's pretty good-looking. The ups and downs are too small. It's okay to live a stable life. I hope there are still some twists and turns.

It's really good-looking. It's heartwarming and everyday. The plot is also clever. There's no undue tension in the plot. It's good-looking! [Adoration]

It was well written, but the pace felt a bit fast.

How to say it? At present, most of the stories are about the male protagonist being extremely rich. There are few daily stories, and they are not campus youth love stories. So far, the novels have mainly given me one idea: the male protagonist is extremely powerful. Other than that, there's not much else

The writing is quite good, the male and female protagonists are likeable, and the plot progress is not stiff. I have read several books about sisters and two female protagonists, but this one still stood out to me. There are not so many slaps in the face, and the male protagonist has a high enough status, which makes it very enjoyable most of the time.

So far, it looks very good. There are no system-arranged dummy tasks. I hope the male protagonist can gradually realize his affection for the female protagonist from simply hugging her thighs to survive. Don't send a knife. I have already given gifts to support the author. Come on💪

Not bad, in this era when new books are defended per person, screening new books is already a thankless task. If you don't pay attention, a red stone feast will happen. I personally think the writing is pretty good, the people are pretty good, and they are not fake. He may be bad but he is not pure and knows when to give in. Overall, it's worth watching, but I haven't gotten to the point yet, so you can wait and see again. Slow, slow, slow, really too slow. Hurry up and speed up the pace. Author, you can write more than ten chapters a day. It's a good thing that you write in detail, but you can't be too detailed. Please extend the time scale. You won't be able to do anything happy until you go to college, and there won't be any turning point in the plot. It was really written according to the earth's online time. The details are appropriate! The details are appropriate, author!

It's quite comfortable [laughs][laughs], the setting has explanations, please write more about business wars

Everything is stable and the future is promising. Come on!

It's okay. It's a sweet story. Maybe I prefer reading stories that heighten emotions. For me, there's nothing toxic about it at the moment. But one suggestion is to reduce the number of provocative villains, otherwise it will be a bit boring later on. You can increase the interaction appropriately, write more warm daily stories, and then what things we have experienced together, and promote the development of the second child more. The boss's is a bit too much, so I forgot about this second child.

It's so beautiful. I support you, the author. It's not enough.

It's okay, you can take a look

I'm a local dog, I like to watch

Not bad, relatively slow pace

Not bad, not bad. There are very few novels nowadays that can describe emotions in such detail.

It's relatively okay. You can read it if you are in a bad mood.

It's beautiful, I love watching it, it would be nice if there were more

It's nice to watch. Although it's a bit cliché at the beginning, it disappears later on. It's non-toxic and safe to watch.

Write quickly, the donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this, I'll count them to ten chapters a day [shy]