Yuan Ming, do not dismantle the official CP and add new plots. Welcome to taste it.
After returning from the mission to the Country of Waves, there is a cultivating lunatic in Konoha Village.
Doing tasks during the day, and being trained to death by Kai in the afternoon.
Fight with Iruka at night. I have to let my shadow clone practice when I get home.
Naruto's life began to change.
A genius who had buried the Hidden Leaf Village suddenly appeared.
So we continue to see where this unexpected ninja goes.
Reader comments
Surprisingly, it's pretty good. The introduction could be revised, remember to mark it as original voice, and some of the characters are a bit OOC but not serious in their swearing. I hope they can be restrained. It's very reasonable and interesting to read along the way. Hmm... I hope it can be respected for people who don't have many scenes in the original work (referring to Kankuro's attitude towards Taimari, this guy is a younger brother who is afraid of his sister [facepalm])
Because it's a new book and needs support, I'm giving it five stars in advance. So far, there's nothing wrong with it, and I'm very interested in reading it. I hope it maintains the standard... I'll add more if I find it annoying, but from what I've seen so far, it shouldn't be enough to warrant a negative review.
Very interesting and funny
It's still pretty good so far (see Chapter 30
Not bad, not many Naruto articles willing to comment
Surprisingly, it's pretty good. The introduction could be revised, remember to mark it as original voice, and some of the characters are a bit OOC but not serious in their swearing. I hope they can be restrained. It's very reasonable and interesting to read along the way. Hmm... I hope it can be respected for people who don't have many scenes in the original work (referring to Kankuro's attitude towards Taimari, this guy is a younger brother who is afraid of his sister [facepalm]) Because it's a new book and needs support, I'm giving it five stars in advance. So far, there's nothing wrong with it, and I'm very interested in reading it. I hope it maintains the standard... I'll add more if I find it annoying, but from what I've seen so far, it shouldn't be enough to warrant a negative review.
Very interesting and funny
It's still pretty good so far (see Chapter 30
Not bad, not many Naruto articles willing to comment