I'm the Corpse King in the Apocalypse, and I Even Raised an Empress

Overall, it's pretty good. The part where the protagonist, his daughter, and the policewoman fight the protagonist together made me sick of stupidity. The rest is okay. When I saw that part, I wanted to give it four or three stars, or two or one star. But since this is the first book, and there aren't too many bad points later on, I'd better give it five stars for encouragement. And what I also want to say is that it feels a bit like it was written by AI, and some paragraphs are repeated. But regardless of whether it was written by AI, I still hope the author will write more. After all, I read it in one sitting, which is too little. Of course, if the author sees the comment, he can reply whether it is AI? It doesn't matter whether you reply or not, it doesn't affect my reading.

First, there is no need to emphasize the loss of the king's consciousness. Second, there is no need to emphasize that the little girl is the empress. You can directly write the plot of their dependence on each other. Another, you can write about infrastructure, because we are also a nation that likes infrastructure. Third, the timeline can be accelerated. It's not about strength, but about the age timeline of the little girl, even if she's in her teens. Another thing is that the empress herself will be fifty years after the end of the world, so it's not impossible to speed it up. Objectively speaking, the novel you wrote is still very good about two people connected by the same fate and healing each other. You can continue, come on.

I feel the writing is quite good. I don't know why the score is so low. Even if there was a misunderstanding about who was the zombie king in the early stage (it also took a long time to escape the plot), it would not be so low. It should be an 8. If the misunderstanding was faster, it would be a 9. Good luck to the author.

For newbies, this is already well written, keep up the good work ❤️

Just describing "this zombie has human consciousness" has been written countless times, and I have to emphasize it every time. I am really afraid that we readers will not remember it, and the background author is also afraid that we will not understand it, so he explains it repeatedly and writes it over and over again. The author is really too careful. Come and take a look (dog head)

I really like the subject matter, but the author likes the play style with the most barrages and the play style with the lowest ratings. I feel that sooner or later it will be bad 🤦, which means I am a poison-resistant king.

Chapter 34, still a roadside road

The subject matter is novel and the storyline is smooth. Super pretty

The writing is very good and the plot is very good.

Yes, the story is novel and not procrastinating. Big boost to the author.