Naruto: The Sickly Boy and His Two Beauties of Ice and Fire

After reading it, it's just a bit lacking. Overall, it's a great experience. He doesn't kill anyone, but he kills everyone who offends the protagonist. There is a little bit that needs polishing, (I went to Konoha to take the exam, and the part where I stole Naruto's lines in the classroom was a little bold) Come on, author, I'm going to start raising books 🍉 🍉 🍉

It's a pretty good fanfic, and the perspective is actually his. Chichi, Shiro, and Tsunade are all in. There are no flaws in the plot. I feel that the later part is a bit too thin, and the events are postponed too quickly. There is an urgent need for a climax plot to bring up the current rhythm. For example, when meeting Zabuza in advance, the writing is very good, and the character creation is very successful. I hope the author will continue to work hard. I am still looking forward to how I will confront the Akatsuki organization and deal with the distribution of Sasuke's small group. After all, Jugo has poached him. Will Xiangling be eaten? 😳

It's okay, pretty good. Although I made some bad comments in the article, there are only one or two points that make people uncomfortable. Overall, there is no big problem.

The writing is so good. The writing style is very delicate. And it is very comfortable to read.

Okay, okay. I thought Shiro and Kimimaro had similar experiences before. Finally, Kimimaro is the protagonist and Shiro is accepted. The other female protagonists are also very good.