Across the Heavens, Starting in the One Piece World

Do you have any comments? For example, where is the illogical logic over there? Although this is my first time writing a book, I can really feel that I have improved. For example, I took the time to revise the first ten chapters two days ago, and it is much more pleasing to the eye.

It's quite interesting. The National Awakening is set at the beginning for the direction of the heavens, but it relies too much on the space shuttle ability of teammates.

Brothers can rest assured to prepare qualified grain and grass 🍉

A good book with clear structure and substantial content 👍

This is a rare fanfic. The characters of the three brothers are well established and each has its own characteristics. The author must not stop updating [Bird of Birds] [Top post] [Please update]

How do you say it? You can choose who is the male protagonist emmm

Very well written! Why do you feel like there aren't many people watching?

Good book, the more I listen to it, the more I want to listen to it 👍👍👍

It's beautiful and the writing style is very sophisticated, unlike many writing styles nowadays which are impetuous.

The content is quite novel, keep up the good work