The Outcast: Braving the World with a System

The content is smooth and the heroine is very nice and vivid. Although the author said that the younger sister is a bit useless, I don't think she is a weakling at all. She is just a cute and quirky little girl. The content of the article is not offensive. Even if there is a villain (like the Lu family), they will just slap her in the face 👍 The article is also well connected, and the various settings are integrated very harmoniously. [Sending my heart] The men who are currently appearing and have a crush on the heroine also describe the psychology of admiration for the heroine very well. It's a very interesting and interesting article. It's the first time I've read a story about a king in a foreigner. It's not out of the ordinary at all. However, in the latest chapter, I feel that the king's hero appears less. I hope the author can add more 🥰. But now I'm just following the plot. I'm really looking forward to the tomb robbing chapter [Blow kiss] In addition, why is such a beautiful article not popular? 😠 Damn it🍅 I can't eat the fine chaff, give me the author to greatly increase the traffic [Bookshelf plus one] [Grass has been planted] The author greatly asks you to explode after ensuring your health, studies, career and family [Admiration] It's so beautiful and interesting [Bookshelf plus one] [Bookshelf plus one] [Bookshelf plus one] [Bookshelf plus one] [Bookshelf plus one]

First of all, your writing is very good. The characters and the coherence of the linked plot are very comfortable to read. Secondly, the title of your book is Alien and System, and your system is the king, right, but there are too few elements of the king in you. I patiently read Chapter 80, and only three heroes were recruited: Dunshan, Lu Ban, and Dian Wei, and they only have one shot in front of others. One time, it was during the competition. I have to say that I was a little disappointed. I quite like the elements of strangers and kings. I have read novels about summoning fox demons and little matchmakers before, and I thought yours was the same. But I guess it is because of the female channel. The plot is more plot-oriented, and the hooks are not too big, and the summoning of heroes is just for decoration.

I think the setting and content of this novel are very attractive to me. The setting is very novel, the writing is exquisite, and the logic is smooth and coherent. I must have put a lot of effort into the characters and plot. Please be sure to finish it. This is definitely a masterpiece! ! ! Few comments does not mean that no one reads it, and it does not mean that your writing will not be good. Sometimes it may just be that many people have not found it. If it is really because of this that I will not write it, I will feel it is a pity. I sincerely hope that you can continue to finish this novel ദ്ദി ༎ຶ‿༎ຶ ) Everyone, please use your little hands to help me rate it.

The character is a little timid middle schooler, quite cute⚈₃⚈ The plot is smooth, not boring, and engaging. It is a comprehensive collection of Tomb Raider Notes. The emotional line is not abrupt, and it is normal to end liking Lin Shu naturally. There are Zhang Chulan, Wang Ye, and Ma Xianhong.

It's good-looking, it incorporates the King, a very novel theme, and the time when the heroine gets along with the heroes is written very well, warmly and delicately. I hope the heroes can appear more in the future. [Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates]

Polite submission: The sudden update of chapter 100 scares me to death 😳

It's so beautiful. The heroine in the book is very vivid. I'm very curious about when the heroine and Wu Erbai met.

Very well written, keep it up

It looks good. I hope there will be more interactions between the hero and the younger sister.

The subject matter is novel and very interesting. I am waiting for the update every day. I can only read it for a few days. The boss writes it well.