[The new book’s rating has just opened and will rise later. The issues readers pointed out in the reviews have been fixed.]
[Everyday life] + [Love rival showdowns] + [Multiple heroines] + [Master] + [Yandere] + [Empress]
Su Qing is taken by a System into a melodramatic xuanhuan novel whose author abandoned it before finishing.
The System promises that if he rewrites the tragic endings of the heroines in the book, he can return to the real world and receive a generous reward.
After a thousand years, he finally completes the last mission. Before returning to reality, Su Qing decides to leave the women with an unforgettable memory: he’ll steal their first kisses!
But…
The moment he gets back to the real world, he barely has time to catch his breath before a chilling voice sounds behind him.
“My good disciple, where are you in such a hurry to go?”
What?!!!
Su Qing has only just managed to calm his master down.
And it hasn’t even been long since then.
The other two empresses also break through the dimensional barrier and arrive in the real world.
“Su Qing! You’ve been hiding this well!”
…
But after the misunderstanding is cleared up,
the three empresses who came with murder in their eyes
start acting very differently.
The empress and master: “You rebellious disciple, you’ve already been the one who seduced your master. Now it’s my turn to seduce my disciple~”
The yandere fox demon: “Master, you deceived me for hundreds of years. As punishment, what kind of cage do you like?”
The Great Zhou Empress: “Brother Qing, after all the things you’ve done, shouldn’t Xi’er collect a little interest from you~”
It's very interesting. The three main female protagonists all have very good personalities and they all like the male protagonist. However, there are too many other female protagonists, so it would be a pity not to accept them. For example, my sister, and a girl who is very sexy and likes the male protagonist.
The book I wanted to give up suddenly came to read it. I was just happy for the day and was preparing to code 10,000 words a day, but only one day later someone poured cold water on me 🤦 Some people say that the protagonist looks useless if he has no cultivation, but this book is biased toward daily writing. In addition, when he returns to the real world, he never expected that the heroine will come. If he recovers his cultivation, it will not feel like a Shura field. Besides, isn't there a system? Although it is still being upgraded, the effect after the upgrade is definitely not worse than the cultivation level. Let's wait and see 🍉
Come, the author, read with me, and I solemnly swear: starting from today, I will never update. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, being tempered into steel, and worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly swear: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can code diligently. I am the keyboard in the dark and the guard on the Great Wall of Internet. I voluntarily dedicate my life to coding every day and every night.
The only bad thing is that there is currently no possibility of peaceful coexistence.
I've read more than fifty chapters now, and it's really good. The two main female protagonists have different personalities. The younger sister is a bit quirky, and the school beauty has too few scenes, so I can't tell what her personality is at the moment. And I've read a lot of yandere-type novels, and I found that as long as they are yandere, they have a bit of a depressive aspect [laughter]
Okay, okay, it's really well written. I don't know why, but when I watched this, I didn't think about the protagonist having to eat it so early. Anyway, I really wanted to watch it. Especially in daily life, they describe how to be jealous. Can the school beauty have less of a role?
One of the most beautiful Shura fields
Has this book been changed? Why do I feel that the names of some of the heroines in it have changed? I remember that two empresses came to Blue Star even earlier, and only the master of the male protagonist just arrived [what]
It's relatively good among the genres I've seen, but the timeline is still quite slow. It's over 60 chapters and only a little over two days have passed. If the heroine is not considered a system at the moment, there should be about 7. There are three characters that the male protagonist traveled through the world, including his sister from the original world, the school beauty, and one who appeared in the hospital before. But there are very few scenes. The other one is the male protagonist's sister. Her biological family member is probably his sister or aunt.
The writing is pretty good, but I want to know the ending of the original three female protagonists? Have you ever had a relationship with the original male lead Ye Chen? Okay but there are still some typos. 🤭