[Animation fan + multiple female protagonists + urban daily life + eavesdropping + Shura field + text copy]
Chen Shuo awakened his past life memories and found himself in the comic book world.
At the beginning, I am in class J of the second year of Sobu University. My deskmate is Yukinoshita Yukino, and Ome Sasaki lives next door.
What's even more outrageous is that all the heroines can hear his inner complaints!
She complained to Yukino's face that she was cold on the outside and soft on the inside, but the iceberg beauty looked sideways on the spot.
Mentally taking stock of the endings of each heroine, Qingmei caught her and fucked her on the spot.
The service department analyzed interpersonal relationships and made Yui's eyes red.
Fortunately, there is also a complaint point system. Accurate complaints can be exchanged for full-level programming, god-level original paintings, top-notch copywriting, music theory and arrangement...
To live a new life, the goal is very clear:
Reproduce "Honkai Impact: Star Rail" to create a phenomenal mobile game empire;
Save all the heroines who are in trouble, and rewrite every period of regretful youth.
Just as he was doing it, Chen Shuo realized that something was wrong.
Yukino, Yui, Eiri, Shiwa, Kato Megumi, Mai-senpai, Saki, Nagisa, Murasaki...
Wait, why did you all get together?
Shura field warning! All members of Xinsheng are being publicly executed!
Reader comments
Except for the fact that it was a bit difficult to do Iron Break in the first game, everything else was fine.
Even if the first thing you make is an independent game or a 2D villain game, if it can be completed within a year with just a few people and some outsourcing, it is considered fast.
The plot is pretty good, and the theme of the manga's complaints is pretty good, but the complaints written by the author are not the focus. Instead, when I read the book, I would think about my own complaints about the characters.
There is also the problem of the protagonist's character. The protagonist's personality, words, and behavior are extremely unlikable.
The interaction between the protagonist and the heroines, you can clearly feel that there is no emotion at all, it is all controlled by the author, and it is difficult for me to substitute.
Overall, it should be above three stars and below four stars. I give it four stars because I quite like novels that allow me to come up with plots and complaints on my own. The author's writing is not to my liking, but I can think of complaints that I like. For example, Ying Lili, I came up with a lot of complaints out of thin air.
It's okay. There's just a section at the back where it says Ying Lili hugged An Yilun. I hope it's not the heroine in the back. My mysophobia is a bit serious.
New wine in old bottles, heart-felt comics. The combination of these two genres is still rare. The male protagonist Goldfinger opens the blind box by complaining. Overall, it looks good. I will give it 5 stars to support it.
Another point is that this book is written to discredit the male protagonist of the original anime. Although there are many such writings, I prefer to describe less of the male protagonist of the original anime. After all, after watching the anime, I think it is too dramatic, and it is rare to have a neutral evaluation.
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The store is full, please accept it
It's okay. The content so far is pretty good.
Alas, it's too early to judge
For me, it doesn't have any major negative points, but it has some minor shortcomings in various aspects. However, it is a free book.
2🌟Goodbye, the author is very good at fixing things.
It seems pretty good so far, but the slight flaw is that the story develops too fast. Forty chapters, other novels may only have one or two protagonists, but this one has already gathered a lot. If you want to write longer, I suggest the author write at a slower pace.
I quite like the heart-felt complaints. After watching a lot of female-oriented videos, I feel that they are equally suitable for martial arts and two-dimensional movies. However, martial arts has diaries, and now comprehensive comics finally have them. The only question is for me personally. How many chapters is there in Good Guy? How many girls have you hooked up with? Can your body bear it? Moreover, I personally still like to observe my cute CP partners from the perspective of passers-by, and I don't like to do anything to the main CPs.
The writing is very nice, and the protagonist has a strong subjective initiative. He does not have the bad habits of traditional protagonists such as Asasi, being messy, being manipulated by a few words, and so on. This is what attracts me the most. If this book is available on other paid software, I might pay to read it.
I read the bad reviews and bad reviews, and they all said that the protagonist doesn't eat meat, and he won't eat the meat delivered to his door. My opinion is actually similar to that of the author, which is to cherish the relationship and first time between both parties. It's not that they don't want to eat, it's just that they are too impatient, and the negative reviews are just because of this kind of thing, which means that the only thing about this book that attracts them is the eating of meat and the acquisition of women, and the other plots really don't attract them. The benevolent sees benevolence and the wise see wisdom.
It's edible. Although I feel a bit old for the voice genre, the character of the protagonist is also quite to my taste.
I don't hide my desires in my heart, and I also try to get the Crystal Palace when I have the opportunity. But desire ranks second among the protagonists, who is actually a rare career-oriented protagonist.
Career is more important than beauty
However, although career is more important than beauty for the protagonist, he will still take the initiative when given the opportunity.
Than the kind that says one thing and acts another. Then the story of not taking the initiative, relying on the author's deus ex machina, using the environment to oppress, and then being forced to go together is much better.
Yes, complaints that let others know are the most touching.
Brother, give me five more chapters. I'm dying. Please, brother, just one more chapter. I won't touch it again. Please, brother, really, just one chapter. I swear I will never touch this again. I really can't stand it anymore. I'm tossing and turning now. I beg you, brother. Please give me one more chapter. Brother, please give me one more chapter. , I'm dying, please, brother, I feel like there are ants crawling on me, I feel like I'm shaking all over, I can't breathe, please, brother, just give it, just one more chapter, I won't touch it again, please, brother, really, just one chapter, I swear I will never touch this thing again [crying] [crying] [crying]
I am the author of this book. Some fans reported that someone in the comment area deliberately disrupted and posted untrue comments, so I am issuing this statement for everyone to know.
As for the disruptor, I have reported and banned him! I welcome comments with different opinions, but those who are deliberately malicious are another matter.
In response to this false statement, here is the official response:
First of all, there is no fraud in this book. Although there are many female protagonists in the introduction, I did not say that these will all be harems.
Secondly, hearing the voice ≠ the protagonist's harem, this depends on the development of the plot. For example, Yinglili is currently said to have no harem potential.
Finally, not hearing the voice of the heart does not mean that you will miss the protagonist. This is not in line with objective laws, and I will not write it like this. Moreover, not becoming a harem does not mean that you cannot become someone close to the protagonist, such as a friend, colleague, etc.
Anyway, that's it, if you have any questions, you can leave a message.
Not bad! Combining my own voice with comics, I think it's a bit more engaging than the simple comics in the past (personal opinion). In the past, when I read comics, it would seem a bit bland and boring. This book feels okay.
It's good to watch. I often read manga and only like to watch those with a lot of Yukino scenes. But that's just my personal preference for Yukino and I really like this character. After watching this, I found that I can still expand my tolerance as long as the plot is interesting.
Provincial flow: Haokan
This kind of variety show that combines tradition and innovation is the most suitable for an experienced person like me. Compared with the refreshing style of many different world variety comics and the daily harem style of daily variety comics, it's a great collection + non-toxic points + innovative plot = it's really hard for me not to say it's good to watch.
At present, it seems to be non-toxic, and the world view is well integrated. The characters' personalities have not departed from the original work, and the supporting characters are also vividly described.
It is much better than writing an infinite flow of anime novels. The author accurately avoids poisonous points such as the combat power system.
It is more realistic and not as suffocating as real society. I hope the author of the subsequent plot can keep writing it as it is now! Come on
The plot and emotional aspect of this book are both okay, but at 80 pictures, it's meaty. The male protagonist is more career-minded than love-minded. Of course, the female protagonist will still eat the meat that comes to her door.
The writing still needs to be improved. However, the update speed is very fast. Come on, the author, I hope the emotional description will be more delicate.
This is the first time I have seen the plot develop into the middle stage. God is awesome
It's okay so far. The most interesting thing about this type of novel is that in the early stage when the male and female protagonists are not too familiar with each other, the male protagonist goes crazy and reveals the dark history of the female protagonists. Generally, in the middle of writing, the author doesn't know how to write it down, resulting in it becoming a very ordinary harem story or a monster-fighting and upgrade story. It depends on whether the author can solve this problem.
Overall, it's a regular heartfelt flow, not bad, and it's a variety comic, so it's worth watching.
Advantages Comprehensive comic themes, voice-over themes
Disadvantages: I have a common problem with the development of female characters too quickly. Once I hear my opinion, I basically rush into it. However, the better thing at the moment is that I don't eat it as soon as it comes. I prefer to take it slow and let things come naturally.
First of all, I am a Bentie player, so I cannot objectively evaluate it.
I've also read a lot of comics. Basically, the main characters are literary copycats, who write light novels and songs. There are very few who make games, and even fewer who make Bengtie. To be honest, what I look forward to in this article is not the love between the protagonist and the female character. Although the interaction with the female character is not bad, I am more looking forward to the release of the Bengtie game and telling our story in a different world. I hope that this trip will eventually reach the stars.
This is my first love drama, I hope it won't collapse in the future, and I hope it can be updated to more than 1 million words [laughing]
I'm very happy to have found another novel of this type. I hope there will be more updates. The book shortage is really uncomfortable. Can't the author work harder and update a hundred chapters a day?
Eat melons, love watching, must-see! It's super interesting and I can't put it down because of my heartfelt stories [Like]
Beautiful and worth watching. The protagonist is very upright.
It's so beautiful, I hope it won't be discontinued.
I hope to add Hiratsuka Shizuka, Yukinoshita Harano, Ishiroha, and Hikigaya Komachi as the female protagonists. @ Carved devil's curse seal
Aren't you going to harvest Yingli pears? Why is there no more plot about him later?
Sister Saki, just continue to make a fortune, don't be in a hurry to enter [laughs evilly] I want to watch Daily i Saki TV, it's such a delicious lament~
Except for the fact that it was a bit difficult to do Iron Break in the first game, everything else was fine. Even if the first thing you make is an independent game or a 2D villain game, if it can be completed within a year with just a few people and some outsourcing, it is considered fast.
The plot is pretty good, and the theme of the manga's complaints is pretty good, but the complaints written by the author are not the focus. Instead, when I read the book, I would think about my own complaints about the characters. There is also the problem of the protagonist's character. The protagonist's personality, words, and behavior are extremely unlikable. The interaction between the protagonist and the heroines, you can clearly feel that there is no emotion at all, it is all controlled by the author, and it is difficult for me to substitute. Overall, it should be above three stars and below four stars. I give it four stars because I quite like novels that allow me to come up with plots and complaints on my own. The author's writing is not to my liking, but I can think of complaints that I like. For example, Ying Lili, I came up with a lot of complaints out of thin air.
It's okay. There's just a section at the back where it says Ying Lili hugged An Yilun. I hope it's not the heroine in the back. My mysophobia is a bit serious.
New wine in old bottles, heart-felt comics. The combination of these two genres is still rare. The male protagonist Goldfinger opens the blind box by complaining. Overall, it looks good. I will give it 5 stars to support it. Another point is that this book is written to discredit the male protagonist of the original anime. Although there are many such writings, I prefer to describe less of the male protagonist of the original anime. After all, after watching the anime, I think it is too dramatic, and it is rare to have a neutral evaluation.
The battery is running low, the general needs help The general takes action and everything will be fine ⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡ Full mobile phone, full battery, full of good luck⚡ ⚡Full power reserve, full of energy for travel⚡ ⚡The battery of your mobile phone is full, and your luck is full⚡ ⚡Full power reserve, full of energy for travel⚡ Yao light goes with you, full of power The store is full, please accept it
It's okay. The content so far is pretty good. Alas, it's too early to judge
For me, it doesn't have any major negative points, but it has some minor shortcomings in various aspects. However, it is a free book. 2🌟Goodbye, the author is very good at fixing things.
It seems pretty good so far, but the slight flaw is that the story develops too fast. Forty chapters, other novels may only have one or two protagonists, but this one has already gathered a lot. If you want to write longer, I suggest the author write at a slower pace.
I quite like the heart-felt complaints. After watching a lot of female-oriented videos, I feel that they are equally suitable for martial arts and two-dimensional movies. However, martial arts has diaries, and now comprehensive comics finally have them. The only question is for me personally. How many chapters is there in Good Guy? How many girls have you hooked up with? Can your body bear it? Moreover, I personally still like to observe my cute CP partners from the perspective of passers-by, and I don't like to do anything to the main CPs.
The writing is very nice, and the protagonist has a strong subjective initiative. He does not have the bad habits of traditional protagonists such as Asasi, being messy, being manipulated by a few words, and so on. This is what attracts me the most. If this book is available on other paid software, I might pay to read it. I read the bad reviews and bad reviews, and they all said that the protagonist doesn't eat meat, and he won't eat the meat delivered to his door. My opinion is actually similar to that of the author, which is to cherish the relationship and first time between both parties. It's not that they don't want to eat, it's just that they are too impatient, and the negative reviews are just because of this kind of thing, which means that the only thing about this book that attracts them is the eating of meat and the acquisition of women, and the other plots really don't attract them. The benevolent sees benevolence and the wise see wisdom.
It's edible. Although I feel a bit old for the voice genre, the character of the protagonist is also quite to my taste. I don't hide my desires in my heart, and I also try to get the Crystal Palace when I have the opportunity. But desire ranks second among the protagonists, who is actually a rare career-oriented protagonist. Career is more important than beauty However, although career is more important than beauty for the protagonist, he will still take the initiative when given the opportunity. Than the kind that says one thing and acts another. Then the story of not taking the initiative, relying on the author's deus ex machina, using the environment to oppress, and then being forced to go together is much better.
Yes, complaints that let others know are the most touching.
Brother, give me five more chapters. I'm dying. Please, brother, just one more chapter. I won't touch it again. Please, brother, really, just one chapter. I swear I will never touch this again. I really can't stand it anymore. I'm tossing and turning now. I beg you, brother. Please give me one more chapter. Brother, please give me one more chapter. , I'm dying, please, brother, I feel like there are ants crawling on me, I feel like I'm shaking all over, I can't breathe, please, brother, just give it, just one more chapter, I won't touch it again, please, brother, really, just one chapter, I swear I will never touch this thing again [crying] [crying] [crying]
I am the author of this book. Some fans reported that someone in the comment area deliberately disrupted and posted untrue comments, so I am issuing this statement for everyone to know. As for the disruptor, I have reported and banned him! I welcome comments with different opinions, but those who are deliberately malicious are another matter. In response to this false statement, here is the official response: First of all, there is no fraud in this book. Although there are many female protagonists in the introduction, I did not say that these will all be harems. Secondly, hearing the voice ≠ the protagonist's harem, this depends on the development of the plot. For example, Yinglili is currently said to have no harem potential. Finally, not hearing the voice of the heart does not mean that you will miss the protagonist. This is not in line with objective laws, and I will not write it like this. Moreover, not becoming a harem does not mean that you cannot become someone close to the protagonist, such as a friend, colleague, etc. Anyway, that's it, if you have any questions, you can leave a message.
Not bad! Combining my own voice with comics, I think it's a bit more engaging than the simple comics in the past (personal opinion). In the past, when I read comics, it would seem a bit bland and boring. This book feels okay.
It's good to watch. I often read manga and only like to watch those with a lot of Yukino scenes. But that's just my personal preference for Yukino and I really like this character. After watching this, I found that I can still expand my tolerance as long as the plot is interesting.
Provincial flow: Haokan This kind of variety show that combines tradition and innovation is the most suitable for an experienced person like me. Compared with the refreshing style of many different world variety comics and the daily harem style of daily variety comics, it's a great collection + non-toxic points + innovative plot = it's really hard for me not to say it's good to watch.
At present, it seems to be non-toxic, and the world view is well integrated. The characters' personalities have not departed from the original work, and the supporting characters are also vividly described. It is much better than writing an infinite flow of anime novels. The author accurately avoids poisonous points such as the combat power system. It is more realistic and not as suffocating as real society. I hope the author of the subsequent plot can keep writing it as it is now! Come on
The plot and emotional aspect of this book are both okay, but at 80 pictures, it's meaty. The male protagonist is more career-minded than love-minded. Of course, the female protagonist will still eat the meat that comes to her door. The writing still needs to be improved. However, the update speed is very fast. Come on, the author, I hope the emotional description will be more delicate.
This is the first time I have seen the plot develop into the middle stage. God is awesome
It's okay so far. The most interesting thing about this type of novel is that in the early stage when the male and female protagonists are not too familiar with each other, the male protagonist goes crazy and reveals the dark history of the female protagonists. Generally, in the middle of writing, the author doesn't know how to write it down, resulting in it becoming a very ordinary harem story or a monster-fighting and upgrade story. It depends on whether the author can solve this problem.
Overall, it's a regular heartfelt flow, not bad, and it's a variety comic, so it's worth watching. Advantages Comprehensive comic themes, voice-over themes Disadvantages: I have a common problem with the development of female characters too quickly. Once I hear my opinion, I basically rush into it. However, the better thing at the moment is that I don't eat it as soon as it comes. I prefer to take it slow and let things come naturally.
First of all, I am a Bentie player, so I cannot objectively evaluate it. I've also read a lot of comics. Basically, the main characters are literary copycats, who write light novels and songs. There are very few who make games, and even fewer who make Bengtie. To be honest, what I look forward to in this article is not the love between the protagonist and the female character. Although the interaction with the female character is not bad, I am more looking forward to the release of the Bengtie game and telling our story in a different world. I hope that this trip will eventually reach the stars.
This is my first love drama, I hope it won't collapse in the future, and I hope it can be updated to more than 1 million words [laughing]
I'm very happy to have found another novel of this type. I hope there will be more updates. The book shortage is really uncomfortable. Can't the author work harder and update a hundred chapters a day?
Eat melons, love watching, must-see! It's super interesting and I can't put it down because of my heartfelt stories [Like]
Beautiful and worth watching. The protagonist is very upright.
It's so beautiful, I hope it won't be discontinued. I hope to add Hiratsuka Shizuka, Yukinoshita Harano, Ishiroha, and Hikigaya Komachi as the female protagonists. @ Carved devil's curse seal
Aren't you going to harvest Yingli pears? Why is there no more plot about him later?
Sister Saki, just continue to make a fortune, don't be in a hurry to enter [laughs evilly] I want to watch Daily i Saki TV, it's such a delicious lament~