Sea of Sand: The Beautiful Woman Wants an Ordinary Life

Very good! It is rare among Pirates fanfics that I don't think the characters are OOC. Although there are many Pingxie Black Flower fanfics, there are some good ones, but it is true that most of them are for the protagonist's emotional line, and the characters are more or less OOC. The protagonist rarely has a clear description of psychological growth. The most common one is that at the beginning All kinds of cheats are very strong. Even if the game starts weak, it will suddenly become stronger in the middle. Then it is difficult to connect the weak behavior at the beginning and the arrogance after suddenly becoming strong, which makes the whole game seem out of touch. Otherwise, the heroine is weak throughout the whole process and has no growth. She is simply being protected, and then various psychological activities appear to be pretentious. Although this book is just the beginning, I like the direction very much. I can see that the heroine's growth is written with care instead of simply focusing on the emotional line. I can feel the heroine's personality charm, not just the beauty of the appearance. The appearance is just a tool for the heroine to be seen, but the personality is the truth that makes the heroine loved. In addition, what I like very much is that the character of the heroine is not that complicated. She is just an orphan girl with a clean life experience and a very good personality. Many novels may set up some very complicated life backgrounds for the development of the overall novel, or to make the heroine's character appear full. I wish I could have the identity of Lao Jiumen over and over again, but I personally feel that it is a fan, and there is a basic outline. What I want to see is the heroine's personal participation in the story to show her charm and personal growth. , Instead of using the life experience of the heroine as the main line to weave more conspiracies and then reveal the secrets to unlock and solve them, it seems to just borrow these characters to fill in the identity of the male protagonist, and use the skin of the same person in the romance novel. Of course, this is purely a personal idea. I personally just hate the practice of piling up various conspiracies for the depth of the article, although most novels are like this. They grow in the early stage, start to fight against and unlock the conspiracy in the middle stage, torture in the middle and late stages, and finally solve the conspiracy, and everyone is happy. All in all, great article! I hope the author can maintain this level in the future, and it will really become my top choice among all cp articles among pirated fans.

I finally saw an author who loves the female protagonist. I think that no matter what kind of fanfic, as long as there is a female protagonist, the readers and the author must love the female protagonist. Only then will it be a good fanfic, a good female fanfic book. The female protagonist comes first and the female protagonist is the main character. She is the female protagonist, not the male protagonist's experience pack, blood pack, stepping stone, or someone who has traveled through time to save and tolerate the male protagonist.

Just read it, this book ranks among the top ones I have read. All the forced love, even the later forced love, is more delicious. I think both the plot and the writing are great, in line with my aesthetics and my thinking logic. How an old bookworm finds a favorite book lies in these details. A stroke of God from time to time will amaze me for a long time. For a book to be well written, it must have its own character. To me, this book is about the blooming of the flower of sin with a touch of Buddha-ness. Guanyin is the same as Guanyin. He has the heart of a Bodhisattva, but at the same time he is imbued with the flavor of mandala due to external forces. It's hard to say what this feeling feels like. It's not a feeling of possession and control, but a looming pull that leads to temptation until you enter a forbidden place. I just love this tone. The pun CP written by Teacher Gege is the most touching couple in the current plot. !!! That feeling of pulling and ambiguity, coupled with the temptation and tolerance of an older person, really poked at me!!! Sound Cluster is relatively pure love, of course, this is only in the early stages. The tone-deaf words are also quite touching, but I won't go into too much detail for the time being, so I am now a firm pun CP boss~ Also, Teacher Gezi respects the plot and characters of the original work very much. The biggest fear when reading fan fiction is that the characters are too OOC, which will lose a lot of flavor. Therefore, it is very, very commendable that the author can restore the character and logic as much as possible based on the tone of the original work! Come and support this pigeon teacher. If you miss her, you will miss a wonderful little world that cannot be reproduced. ! Finally, Teacher Pigeon said that what she wants to express may be different from what she writes, and what she writes may be different from what we see. But I believe that the hard work and love put into it can be seen. Therefore, Teacher Pigeon can firmly believe that we are always behind you. You can write slowly and we will slowly look forward to it. 💕 So Mr. Gezi, please don't stop updating, please, you don't have to look at me to really cry 😢 😢 😢

I will use the most straightforward, the purest, the simplest, the most magnanimous, the most sincere, the most practical, the most hard-core, the cleanest, the neatest, the most straightforward, the least roundabout, the least roundabout, the least roundabout, the least roundabout, the least muddled, the least hidden, the least cunning, the least scheming, the least roundabout, the least pragmatic, the least playful. The most unscrupulous, the least manipulative, the least pushy, the least chicken soup, the least empty talk, the least nonsense, the least ambiguous, the least vague, the least vacillating, the least ambiguous, the least perfunctory, the most to the point, the most direct to the point, the most seeing through the essence, the most pointing out the core, the most to the point, the most sober and transparent, the most down-to-earth, The most serious, the most honest, the most responsible, the simplest, the most obvious, clear, obvious, frank, outspoken, say whatever you want, tell the truth, not hiding your thoughts, not playing tricks, completely, serious, from the heart, from the bottom of your heart, without any pretense, without any politeness, without any concealment , tell you the truth in the most down-to-earth, easy-to-understand, easy-to-understand, straightforward way, without exaggerating, minimizing the facts, distorting the original intention, deliberately beautifying, or deliberately concealing. Tell you the truth, tell the truth, talk about the truth, talk about the truth, without pretending, without acting, without pretense, without pretense, and with sincerity, frankness, and straightforwardness. So pretty!

Very nice, I wonder if Guan Yin will like these men later? How should I put it, I feel like if Guan Yin fell in love with them, they would be taking advantage of her. After all, there is an element of forced love in this article. I don't want Guan Yin to return the arrow so quickly, or even let her return. The appearance of this group of people completely ruined Guan Yin's plans for her future, and she might not even be able to take revenge on them. It feels so uncomfortable to fall in love with them easily. Although they know that this idea is childish, after all, for them, the heroine has no background. Even if they have to suffer the pain of love, they can still take it by force. There are even some cases of robbery that are completely violent. This article seems less authentic than traditional robbery, so Qianqian is looking forward to Xiaoguan's revenge on them. Even if they won't suffer much harm, at least they resisted. By the way, has the author imagined Xiaoguan's future career? I remember her major was related to medicine.

Conservative evaluation can be regarded as one of the top 3 players in Shahai fandom. Of course, I only look at the ones with CP, which can make Shahaixie follow the emotional line of the heart-throb while surprisingly not deviating from the flavor of the original work. It is a great author and a great book. My personal rating for writing is at least 9.4. I never expected to find such a level of fanfic on Tomato. I'm so lucky.

It's good to read, forgive me for being empty-headed and can only say what I want to say. The author has written the tension and ambiguity between Wu Xie and the heroine very deliciously, and created a father-like relationship that makes people feel older. The heroine Xiaoguan is also well portrayed, rational and sober, and I feel that it is more beautiful than many Tomb Raiders fans. The heroine has her own charm, which makes readers fall in love with her. She is no longer like the leather bag in ordinary fans, but a strong and intelligent character.

Very beautiful I don't know which big shot came down to earth [I almost cried] The writing is extraordinary I want to live in my wife's brain… Does the profile correspond to Black Flower Evil Pear? Are there any boys and other male guests?

How should I put it, I feel very complicated. When I read this article, I felt very conflicted, because I am a person who is relatively easy to empathize with. I couldn't help but feel unfair for the heroine when I read it. I felt very depressed when I thought about how she had managed to survive so many years and was admitted to the best university in the country. She obviously had such a bright and beautiful future, but just a small thought of goodwill pulled her into an abyss from which she would never return. I I feel very uncomfortable in my heart, but every time I want to give up on the article, I am always pulled back by the author's magical writing. It's really beautiful. I actually can't accept forced love, but the heroine and Wu Xie are particularly easy to fight. The author's writing is really good, and the tension between the CPs is full. It's not the kind of love at first sight, but the kind of pulling and pulling feeling mixed with a hint of true love. It's really good!!

It's good to watch. I really like the setting of the heroine Guan Yin. She recommends college students who are about to go to Qingdao University + influential figures on campus to study well and good looks + orphan girls. No complicated background, simple, a person outside the Nine Gates. Because of a kind deed, he was pulled into another life, and his life changed drastically from then on. From every action, speech, and inner thought of the heroine, we can see that the author put a lot of effort into it. In the current chapter, every interaction with Li Cu is mixed with a confrontation with Wu Xie. If I use an idiom to describe it: the flower of the high mountains. Just like her name, Guanyin, Guanyin. This book is very good. Guan Yin and Li Cu are very good, Guan Yin and Wu Xie are very good, Guan Yin and Wang Meng are very good. However, Guan Yin is the best. She is calmer, more independent, and very capable of action. She speaks very little but is always observing and thinking. She stands on both sides for safety and will not put her own safety on only one side. Guanyin is now in the novice stage, and is suddenly pulled into tomb robbing, with no idea of ​​where to go, so there will be a moment of dependence on innocence along the way. But she clearly knew that he brought all this. Just as Guan Yin thought, if she could, she would kill him directly. In addition, among the characters that have appeared so far, the one that surprised me the most is Li Cu. He is very interesting in the author's writing. It may also be because I have read relatively few articles about him. From when Li Cu met his classmate Guan Yin in the hospital, to when the heroine called him Yali in the desert and when going to the grave, he seemed to have been given a pacifier and quickly followed Guan Yin's instructions, a bit like Pavlov's dog. All in all, this book is very safe to read and very interesting.