[God-killing fic + Mysterious Resurrection fic + Mysterious Lord fic + Jiahao + Making up for regrets + Cool writing + No female protagonist + Complex ingredients]
My name is Yang Shan. When you read this sentence, I am already dead...
After accidentally traveling through the God-Slaying World, I discovered that there was a mental hospital in my head. I thought it was the same one as Lin Qiye.
But I didn't expect that you have to pretend to be proud to open the door of the ward. As long as the heroic value is high enough, you can get all the abilities of the patients in the ward.
And there is a strange eyeball painted on the first ward door.
"No, no, no, no, no, I am undoubtedly angry."
"Are you kidding? Why do you have to be proud of your ability to extract it?"
"But now that I have traveled through this time, I want to destroy all the gods outside the country, and I want the tragedy to never happen again!"
Reader comments
Jiahao is not so arrogant. To be arrogant, you don't suddenly go crazy and shake yourself in the rain. You have to be arrogant and feel a little handsome at the same time. Compared with me, your generosity is still too low [you taste carefully]
How to say it? The boldness is weird, even when Yang Jian speaks these lines, he is very bold, but it gives people the impression that he is very handsome. When the protagonist speaks the same lines, it is more like a joke, without that feeling. It can only be said that the author grasped the meaning of freedom very quickly, and it was unnatural to be so bold.
The subject matter is quite interesting, but I don't think I need to call myself Jiahao at every turn.
It doesn't feel that grand, ugh
I can only call him a fake hero. He doesn't act or speak like he just occasionally pops out quotes from galas. He doesn't have any pride at all when he studies.
The author can check out other Jiahao articles on Tomato, such as Starting from Jiahao and Becoming Arbitrary for Eternity,
ps: No malice, just expressing my opinion. If you really can't listen, it only means that your pride is too low and you can't understand my current state.
My name is Yang Jian. When you read this sentence, I am already dead. This is my story. I became a ghost controller at the age of 17, and my life has been on the established track. I have experienced knock-on ghost incidents, ghost mission incidents, ghost choke incidents, starving ghost incidents, Caesar Hotel incidents, ghost newspaper incidents, human head incidents, ghost post office incidents, ghost dream incidents, ghost lake incidents, Dahai City Fushouyuan incident, and ghost shadow head incidents. , The haunted house incident, the wish ghost incident, the strange bus incident, the national war, the ghost blood incident, and finally embarked on the road of Yin and Yang, ended the supernatural era, and became Yang Jian, but in the end I seemed to be no longer me. Maybe I had already died during the starving ghost incident. Now I in the world may just be a god with the body of Yang Jian named Yang Jian. Some people say that it was fate that chose it. I want to say that I chose my destiny.
It's too late to mourn Yang Jian😱😱😱The next person to appear is the person in charge of Dahai City😌The founder of the supernatural wheel altar😆😆😆You will die if you touch it😡You will die if you look at it🤗The owner of the cursed sword😏Fushouyuan Boxing King☺️Drives the scapegoat Guiyun Ghost Amnesia Ghost Leather Shoes🤯🤯The only surviving achievement achiever in the class🥵🥵🥵Original synopsis Evaporates half of the population of Dahai City😵💫The most invincible man in Asia😍😍😍Ghost Eye Yang Jian's lifelong enemy🤪🤪The strongest attack🤩Master Ye Zhen! ! ! 🤤🤤🤤
I lied to you and came in to eat super coffin nails🤪
Things before the sun and moon
The Year of the Dove Holding the Branch
The eternal throne of heaven has arrived, and the world has been transformed. Then the True King, the original one, began to wage war against the seven terrible kings, the masters of the old world. The terrifying kings are dragons.
The Original One created His own luminous shadow. And the number of shadows is four.
[Phanes, or the original one]
The original one may have been Phanes. It has wings and wears a crown. It is born from an egg and it is difficult to distinguish between male and female. But if the world is to be created, the eggshell must be broken. Phanes - the original one - used eggshells to isolate the "universe" from the "microcosm of the world".
[More than forty years after holding the branch]
Forty winters bury the fire, and forty summers boil the sea. All seven kings were defeated, and all seven bowed their heads to heaven. The original king began the creation of heaven and earth.
…
…
Okay, let's not talk anymore, it's a nail falling from the sky.
You can also just write about Jiahao recently. Don't write too outrageously or deviate from the original work, right?
So pretty! ! No CP! ! The author greatly appreciates the update! ! Expect
Yes, but when you realize that you are Jiahao, you will not be able to feel comfortable.
I am Ghost Eye Yang Jian is now officially online
The author, an old pastor, writes very well. I am undoubtedly excited [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]
I am proud of you. In terms of generosity, I would like to call you the strongest. In addition, the author wants to see the protagonist use Brother Huozi's confusion to turn himself into Xie Hanmo in Fangyuan's eyes [sneaky laugh]
It takes courage to read on
It's so cool and has a strong element of mysterious resurgence.
The setting is good, but it feels a bit sugary and I don't feel proud of it.
Character C~B
Scenario C
Writing style C
Brainstorm D~C
Fun joke A
The author is enthusiastic
The author still worked very hard, please give me five stars for encouragement.
. . . . .
Jiahao is not so arrogant. To be arrogant, you don't suddenly go crazy and shake yourself in the rain. You have to be arrogant and feel a little handsome at the same time. Compared with me, your generosity is still too low [you taste carefully] How to say it? The boldness is weird, even when Yang Jian speaks these lines, he is very bold, but it gives people the impression that he is very handsome. When the protagonist speaks the same lines, it is more like a joke, without that feeling. It can only be said that the author grasped the meaning of freedom very quickly, and it was unnatural to be so bold.
The subject matter is quite interesting, but I don't think I need to call myself Jiahao at every turn.
It doesn't feel that grand, ugh I can only call him a fake hero. He doesn't act or speak like he just occasionally pops out quotes from galas. He doesn't have any pride at all when he studies. The author can check out other Jiahao articles on Tomato, such as Starting from Jiahao and Becoming Arbitrary for Eternity, ps: No malice, just expressing my opinion. If you really can't listen, it only means that your pride is too low and you can't understand my current state.
My name is Yang Jian. When you read this sentence, I am already dead. This is my story. I became a ghost controller at the age of 17, and my life has been on the established track. I have experienced knock-on ghost incidents, ghost mission incidents, ghost choke incidents, starving ghost incidents, Caesar Hotel incidents, ghost newspaper incidents, human head incidents, ghost post office incidents, ghost dream incidents, ghost lake incidents, Dahai City Fushouyuan incident, and ghost shadow head incidents. , The haunted house incident, the wish ghost incident, the strange bus incident, the national war, the ghost blood incident, and finally embarked on the road of Yin and Yang, ended the supernatural era, and became Yang Jian, but in the end I seemed to be no longer me. Maybe I had already died during the starving ghost incident. Now I in the world may just be a god with the body of Yang Jian named Yang Jian. Some people say that it was fate that chose it. I want to say that I chose my destiny. It's too late to mourn Yang Jian😱😱😱The next person to appear is the person in charge of Dahai City😌The founder of the supernatural wheel altar😆😆😆You will die if you touch it😡You will die if you look at it🤗The owner of the cursed sword😏Fushouyuan Boxing King☺️Drives the scapegoat Guiyun Ghost Amnesia Ghost Leather Shoes🤯🤯The only surviving achievement achiever in the class🥵🥵🥵Original synopsis Evaporates half of the population of Dahai City😵💫The most invincible man in Asia😍😍😍Ghost Eye Yang Jian's lifelong enemy🤪🤪The strongest attack🤩Master Ye Zhen! ! ! 🤤🤤🤤 I lied to you and came in to eat super coffin nails🤪 Things before the sun and moon The Year of the Dove Holding the Branch The eternal throne of heaven has arrived, and the world has been transformed. Then the True King, the original one, began to wage war against the seven terrible kings, the masters of the old world. The terrifying kings are dragons. The Original One created His own luminous shadow. And the number of shadows is four. [Phanes, or the original one] The original one may have been Phanes. It has wings and wears a crown. It is born from an egg and it is difficult to distinguish between male and female. But if the world is to be created, the eggshell must be broken. Phanes - the original one - used eggshells to isolate the "universe" from the "microcosm of the world". [More than forty years after holding the branch] Forty winters bury the fire, and forty summers boil the sea. All seven kings were defeated, and all seven bowed their heads to heaven. The original king began the creation of heaven and earth. … … Okay, let's not talk anymore, it's a nail falling from the sky.
You can also just write about Jiahao recently. Don't write too outrageously or deviate from the original work, right?
So pretty! ! No CP! ! The author greatly appreciates the update! ! Expect
Yes, but when you realize that you are Jiahao, you will not be able to feel comfortable.
I am Ghost Eye Yang Jian is now officially online
The author, an old pastor, writes very well. I am undoubtedly excited [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]
I am proud of you. In terms of generosity, I would like to call you the strongest. In addition, the author wants to see the protagonist use Brother Huozi's confusion to turn himself into Xie Hanmo in Fangyuan's eyes [sneaky laugh]
It takes courage to read on
It's so cool and has a strong element of mysterious resurgence.
The setting is good, but it feels a bit sugary and I don't feel proud of it.
Character C~B Scenario C Writing style C Brainstorm D~C Fun joke A The author is enthusiastic The author still worked very hard, please give me five stars for encouragement. . . . . .