Zhengdao's Adoptive Mother Wants to Recognize Her as a Relative, and the Magic Teacher's Wife Is Crying Anxiously

★☆☆☆☆ Why the more I watch, the less I see My wife finally ate it, happy meow

The writing is great, and the martial arts fighting descriptions are excellent. [Shy] Ahem, if the author wants to write about a harem with multiple female protagonists, he can add some characters from other sects or statuses, such as Buddhist teachers and Taoist nuns. If he wants the writing to go beyond the emotional drama, You can write about the livelihood of the male protagonist and his mistress after starting the business, such as breeding, and you can add some of the process of the male gaining opportunities or gaining enlightenment and cultivating his body. In addition, eat quickly [angry] and update more [smile], and support the daily uninterrupted two yuan balance to cheer [blowing kiss]

There are multiple heroine harem stories. I can see that the author is also a fan of Guan Guan [admiration]. I just think of Tomato and Li Wen. I like the kind of gentle big sister who will always tolerate you. Maybe this is one of the reasons why I read this kind of article [Thinking] There is not much content at the moment. Pei Wanzhuang left the hero behind for some reasons. Now the hero feels a little guilty. He can already foresee what will happen next. He will compensate fiercely for doting on his godson [laughing] When you are tired or feel wronged outside, a big sister is always a safe haven. You can rely on her. She will not betray and will only love you forever [almost crying]. I suddenly saw Li Wen saying so much. Maybe it is because I am not living a satisfactory life in reality. I want someone to love me all the time. In general, I hope the author can write more. I really like your book. Come on👏

It's magnificent, the rhythm is invincible, and the plot and writing are top-notch [lick the screen], it feels like watching a sketch. The feeling of pleasure is unparalleled. Whether you are a girl lover, a master and a rebel, or a native of the motherland who loves to drink milk, you can find what you want to see here. I can only say that the author is no longer human if he can write it [face covering]. The only shortcoming is that it is too short [laughing evilly] (author, do you understand what I mean) [Please update more] [Please update more] [Please update more]

The fighting scenes are described very well And if you look at the title of the book, I know what you want to read. This book can satisfy most of them and the author has a very good awareness of lightning protection. It is rare to see such a good awareness of lightning protection. The plot is very exciting and worth watching

Previously, because there was a plot that was planned to be done but was not done, and Li Wen was mentioned in the introduction, I thought the author was deliberately deceiving me. Looking back now, I think I was too arbitrary, because the content was just a little delayed, and everything that should be eaten will be eaten. Now I have eaten the master wife, which is good. If nothing happens, other female protagonists will eat it (according to the analysis of the introduction and content direction). I support the author.

I won't comment too much, it's really fun. The protagonist is so handsome and the martial arts feel is really good. It's not bad. I didn't expect much from the title, but it turned out to be really fun. The writing is very good in describing the exercises and movements. But there are some shortcomings in terms of emotions. It is not very good to write emotional scenes. The three relatively clear female protagonists who have appeared so far all have deep backgrounds and certain emotional foundations. As a result, the relationship between the master's wife and the junior sister is still relatively slow. As a result, the relationship line of Sword Immortal is more vivid. In comparison, the remaining two relationship lines appear weak and one-sided. The emotional scene with my mistress is true, it disappointed me and I'm still pulling the strings

Does the author have any works in the moderator? I'm going to read it [laughing evilly]

Ask politely! When are we going to make acres [sending my heart]

I feel like the author has a side job, and this book can actually resonate with my supreme bones [laughing evilly]

It looks good, the characters are described delicately, the relationships are well handled, and there are no poisonous points. Please keep up the good work, the author.

Go faster, my wife is not in a hurry to cry, I am in a hurry

Okay, okay, hehe

The author is not like the person in Tomato

This book has exploded [Like] I suspect the author is too

I'm afraid the author has not seen Chen Qing and Qin Xinmei, right?

Not bad, very good to my liking

Not bad, the first few chapters

Well written. Add to bookshelf.

Looks good and creative. But there are still few chapters now, so it's best to update it three or four times a day, otherwise it won't attract people.

A martial arts novel with a good plot and very enjoyable reading. Great support for the author.

It's very interesting. The author's vocabulary is quite good.

It's a pretty good martial arts harem story. It's more detailed than Ji Cha's and not as greasy as Guan Gongzi.

It's still delicious😋, but not as good as the one from Shizi

It's so arrogant. There is no need to say more about this masterpiece of harem literature. It will be updated soon.

Is this cover Mei Ning? [Laughs]

Uncle Liu Huang, please don't perish [laughing evilly]

Well written, please update quickly

Urgent, urgent, urgent! I am the King of Urgency! When did we meet?

It's so cool. Please update it quickly. It's not enough.