HP, Return to the Parent Generation with Your Mortal Enemy

The subject matter is very novel, the plot is a bit humorous, and overall it's okay. But I feel that the characters still have a strong sense of OOC, such as Draco. As the heir to the Malfoy family and Draco who grew up under the love of his parents, no matter where he is, Draco, the arrogant young master, will never apologize in a panic because he is afraid that the other party will be angry. Of course, you can regard this as a change after the war, but I think the frequency of the young master's apology is a bit too high. After the war, he will change, but after growing up under the Malfoy-style education system for seventeen years, he is destined not to apologize frequently because of the fear of the other party being angry.

This is a very, very good Harry Potter fanfic that I saw in Tomato. The characters are not OC at all, and the plot is very consistent with the model world view. I hope the teacher can reward me with 10 chapters a day. This is a bit whimsical, but the setting of this novel is very consistent with the characters of the original characters. It is not completely OOC, and their emotional development is also very similar to the original. I highly recommend everyone to read this novel! It will be tied soon, so I will write a book review as soon as possible. I will follow up with the review later. I hope it won't be unfinished. Come on, author!

When will GG come out, in human form? There are three books by the author. I have two books.

From the author's previous book, the logic is clear, the characters are non-ooc, and it's beautiful!

Okay, wow, it feels okay, it's quite novel.

It's very beautiful, and the emotional line development is not sloppy. The two of them are very sweet.

I hope the author will update it soon. This book is super good.

The previous plot is more interesting, but I personally feel that the emotional line is a bit abrupt, but I am still looking forward to the subsequent plot [Sending Hearts]

Can my wife update 100 chapters a day? A little too delicious [blowing kiss]

Complete structure and clear logic

I just watched the beginning, but the setting is great! ! This setting is actually very difficult to write. The author is so powerful and inspiring. I can't help but comment first.

The character description, actions, and psychological demeanor are all relatively true to the original work, but I really didn't expect it to be Hader. I thought it was Deha. But it's also pretty good. But sometimes it really feels like I'm going against the guests. For example, in situations such as Draco holding Harry, I feel more like Deha.