Multiple heroinesSlightly sickly girlShura field
In the first life, Ning Chen lost his life in order to return to Earth and was mad at the favorability of his destined daughter. When his soul was gone, his junior sister Shen Lingyue, whom he had not seen for a long time, committed suicide by suicide. It made him feel a pain in his heart and he decided to reopen the program for the second week. In this life, he decided to live seriously and enjoy life. It turned out that the painting style had completely changed - Senior Sister Wen Zhiyun, Demon Sect Saint Yin Fei, Chief Su Zhi, and Princess Lin Zhaozhao, the four Destined Daughters who used to be devoted to the Tao, are no longer practicing normally.
The Daughters of Destiny's Love Strategy - The Second Week of Eyes Opens.
Why have so many people been punished for not doing so?
And why doesn't the Daughter of Destiny practice properly?
Reader comments
I haven't read a few chapters yet, but what I've seen so far feels good. That is to say, the cold side of the four female protagonists in the past life. No matter what they think in their hearts, for the male protagonists, they seem to have no heart for the readers. I'll be more sadistic when I read it later. After all, there is no regret medicine in the world. Late love is cheaper than a dog, but I hope that lovers will eventually get married, alas (´-ωก`)
In addition, it is not the four heroines who deserve to be reborn, but the eldest heroine and her junior sisters. They died with regrets in their previous lives. Although you have to make up for it in this life, the regrets in your previous lives are only made up for in your own heart. The junior sisters in your previous lives died in vain.
A light love comedy. It's funny and light-hearted, and the author deliberately downplays the poisonous points, such as not writing about the protagonist's sacrifices, and then returning to the world after being reborn... And other poisonous points. Instead, it is logical to write about the regret between the male and female protagonists because of their own shortcomings. And it feels a bit like watching a love battle, gua, beauty dominates and the strong enjoys it.
What I like most is the transformation process of the senior sister from a human-machine to a clown. The human-machine mode of the senior sister really gives people the feeling that you clearly know that she has messed up a lot of things and is a cs, but you just can't get angry, you are just disgusted. It's like playing a game for half an hour and finding out that everyone is a human and a machine except you. I can't help but laugh when I am speechless.
Poisonous point: The protagonist was kidnapped several times by his senior sister and his master, and he was forced to look at his senior sister. Although he later knew that the protagonist had invincible strength, it was unpleasant to watch at the beginning.
Absolute abstraction, the author born from it, teaches you how to write novels [licking screen]
On the surface, this book is written in the form of a light-hearted love game, but there is a dull pain hidden between the lines.
What it tells is not a Shura field where life and death are at odds, but real, vivid, and complex broken souls. Every heroine is burdened with a fate that she cannot reject. The characters and congenital flaws given to them are also destined to bring a few tears.
Every character has regrets.
The shortcoming is actually the style of explaining love that is not very suitable. There is more content explaining the game between the junior sister and other heroines. Also, it is separated from the emotional line, and the author is obviously a little weak in the conception of other plots, such as the auction mockery plot (I prefer that the author takes it for granted, without serious polishing, and lacks rationality and authenticity).
Secondly, I feel that the author has a lot of room for improvement in the integration of emotions and plot. It is true that the emotions are delicate, but in terms of promoting the display and bursting of emotions, the writing power is somewhat tired. Many times when the special plot (about the connection of emotions) involving the male and female protagonists progresses, the narrative will be compact, rough and without buffering. For example, when the junior sister "watched" the scene in the male protagonist's memory about how he died in his first life, without giving any obvious plot signal, he suddenly "watched it and ended up kissing". Although it was not abrupt, it was too compact. This paragraph can be added to foreshadow the plot, the junior sister's feelings about the death (the understanding of the senior brother, the transformation of the senior brother's emotions), the monologue after watching the memory (this paragraph is about the protagonist's pain, the junior sister comforts the protagonist), and then connects the kiss.
/And for the explosive stage of kissing, you have already written it for me! You can't write this in a way that makes me so cruel that I forget my love and my life! /
Back to the topic, this kind of neglect of details in the book is very obvious. The portrayal of many female protagonists, especially Wen Du, is more or less "transformed". But it doesn't matter. As you write later, your writing power will naturally improve, and your writing will feel better. Come on, the logical chain of the plot is very complete. The problem I raised is just a lack of writing skills. I hope the author can overcome the difficulties and write a soulful work.
What is attractive about this book is that the setting of the heroine and the hidden story behind it are closely related to the book itself. The reflection of personality can be captured in her experience. There is no deliberate introduction, but the image is gradually enriched. Moreover, every female protagonist has her own objective shortcomings or character weaknesses, and the reasons why she is different from the male protagonist can be analyzed from their flaws.
The most commendable thing is the very delicate and appropriate emotional description and sincere evaluation. The emotional expression ability of this book is the best among the books I have read so far. I have a strong ability to empathize, and I can make up my own mind about ordinary books; but in this book, the expressions in the book are completely consistent with what I feel, which is rare.
Finally, this book has a literary flavor. If the writing is polished, the focus is on the ups and downs, and the regrets or happiness of the heroines are written out, it becomes a literary and artistic work, and it might be able to compete for the reputation of fairy grass!
It's good-looking, interesting and not toxic yet, but I really, really don't want any female character other than Shen to be successful. Wen gave the impression that he sought out the male protagonist for the sake of seeking enlightenment, and ruined all his hard work. Lin Geng was outrageous, and the part about rushing to buy at the auction was like making a fool of the disaster. Yin was ordinary, and he chose the devil's way of revenge instead of the male protagonist. Su Ye was okay, and he was stupid and wise. Is it good or bad? But they are not as good as Shen. She is such a supermodel that she commits suicide for love. She should be the only choice.
Top notch, in my opinion ambrosia is undoubtedly the best.
There is a lot of interaction between the two heroines Wen and Shen, which is very interesting and does not miss the main plot. The memories are also well written.
It has a background of cultivating immortals, but it is not a traditional one. There are quite a lot of modern elements. Although there are dramas, it still depends on the individual, and it feels innocuous.
After a few photos, I feel it's okay, and there's nothing too poisonous about it. People who don't lick the previous life will give it a thumbs up [laughing][laughing][laughing]
I haven't seen much so far. The junior sister's previous life was in c. The second life was restarted in c. It's a fact that the junior sister got the finishing blow in c bo1. Now it's bo2. The junior sister is still steaming in the early stage. Other bo1 actors started to work hard in bo2. Who can hold it? The boss requires the control point to be 1/2?
Absolute love, the author born from it, teaches you how to write...
This book is really good to read, especially when it describes Lu Bu's hundreds of rounds of battle with Sun Wukong for Diao Chan, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Noah's outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M six times of strafing would have killed him. But I am more concerned about what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Young man is proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang." It shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkeys who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings. The fighting scenes are so immersive, and the character descriptions are spot on!
Unexpectedly, this book has yet to be completed. Zihan fought with Ye Fan in order to win the spot for the West Sutra, and Li Kui went to persuade him to make peace. However, he was tempted by foreign persimmons on the way, and strayed into the depths of the lotus root. He started a relationship with Xiao Longnu in the Huanshi Water Pavilion, but was seen by Sato Kazuma. So Sato Kazuma became angry and went to another world to conquer the Delta with Doraemon, and finally became the plot of the Flame Emperor.
😋It has a strong two-dimensional flavor, and I feel like the author has already had fun with the jokes.
The yandere smell is not strong, just like the garlic in the stir-fried beef, it is there but not noticeable.
There is no twisted plot, it is a pure Shura field. I feel like I have watched another episode of Kaguya-sama.
Very beautiful! 😍It's just too short and weak. There are more authors, more powerful and faster!
My junior sister is so good at gaming that she was sweating profusely when she saw me.
It's so beautiful that it makes the corners of my mouth curl up [lick screen]
The author is so funny and his writing skills are also great. Please update it quickly [please update][please update]
In the previous life of the protagonist, the heroine had a lot of affection for the heroine, but the heroine didn't feel anything. It was only after he died that he discovered his feelings for the protagonist. In the second life, the heroines are fighting wits to pursue the male protagonist [face covering] [face covering]
666 Has finally published an excellent book. I feel very good after reading the first few chapters. I hope that the plot will be richer in the future.
I'm so sad, the next few chapters feel normal, are you going high and low?
Shamelessly give yourself five stars
It's quite interesting, but it's a little short. Come on, please update more.
It's a very interesting novel, and the characters are well developed. I hope the author will work hard!
Not bad, if you can insist on writing it down, it will be a tomato masterpiece. Hope to see it all finished.
If you can see it, the first one to eat is Senior Sister
That's fine. Just try not to paraphrase the dialogue, otherwise it will look like a diary.
Come on, just be nice to junior sister
It's pretty cool, but there are not a lot of people in the comment section.
The author wrote the love story so well, keep up the good work
Nb, the best book I have read here
The existence of this book is to be hunted by me now
I just watched it at the beginning. The plot is quite novel and the title content is not overly misleading.
You need to take your time to get good reviews and work hard, so just accept these four stars first.
I haven't read a few chapters yet, but what I've seen so far feels good. That is to say, the cold side of the four female protagonists in the past life. No matter what they think in their hearts, for the male protagonists, they seem to have no heart for the readers. I'll be more sadistic when I read it later. After all, there is no regret medicine in the world. Late love is cheaper than a dog, but I hope that lovers will eventually get married, alas (´-ωก`) In addition, it is not the four heroines who deserve to be reborn, but the eldest heroine and her junior sisters. They died with regrets in their previous lives. Although you have to make up for it in this life, the regrets in your previous lives are only made up for in your own heart. The junior sisters in your previous lives died in vain.
A light love comedy. It's funny and light-hearted, and the author deliberately downplays the poisonous points, such as not writing about the protagonist's sacrifices, and then returning to the world after being reborn... And other poisonous points. Instead, it is logical to write about the regret between the male and female protagonists because of their own shortcomings. And it feels a bit like watching a love battle, gua, beauty dominates and the strong enjoys it. What I like most is the transformation process of the senior sister from a human-machine to a clown. The human-machine mode of the senior sister really gives people the feeling that you clearly know that she has messed up a lot of things and is a cs, but you just can't get angry, you are just disgusted. It's like playing a game for half an hour and finding out that everyone is a human and a machine except you. I can't help but laugh when I am speechless. Poisonous point: The protagonist was kidnapped several times by his senior sister and his master, and he was forced to look at his senior sister. Although he later knew that the protagonist had invincible strength, it was unpleasant to watch at the beginning.
Absolute abstraction, the author born from it, teaches you how to write novels [licking screen]
On the surface, this book is written in the form of a light-hearted love game, but there is a dull pain hidden between the lines. What it tells is not a Shura field where life and death are at odds, but real, vivid, and complex broken souls. Every heroine is burdened with a fate that she cannot reject. The characters and congenital flaws given to them are also destined to bring a few tears. Every character has regrets. The shortcoming is actually the style of explaining love that is not very suitable. There is more content explaining the game between the junior sister and other heroines. Also, it is separated from the emotional line, and the author is obviously a little weak in the conception of other plots, such as the auction mockery plot (I prefer that the author takes it for granted, without serious polishing, and lacks rationality and authenticity). Secondly, I feel that the author has a lot of room for improvement in the integration of emotions and plot. It is true that the emotions are delicate, but in terms of promoting the display and bursting of emotions, the writing power is somewhat tired. Many times when the special plot (about the connection of emotions) involving the male and female protagonists progresses, the narrative will be compact, rough and without buffering. For example, when the junior sister "watched" the scene in the male protagonist's memory about how he died in his first life, without giving any obvious plot signal, he suddenly "watched it and ended up kissing". Although it was not abrupt, it was too compact. This paragraph can be added to foreshadow the plot, the junior sister's feelings about the death (the understanding of the senior brother, the transformation of the senior brother's emotions), the monologue after watching the memory (this paragraph is about the protagonist's pain, the junior sister comforts the protagonist), and then connects the kiss. /And for the explosive stage of kissing, you have already written it for me! You can't write this in a way that makes me so cruel that I forget my love and my life! / Back to the topic, this kind of neglect of details in the book is very obvious. The portrayal of many female protagonists, especially Wen Du, is more or less "transformed". But it doesn't matter. As you write later, your writing power will naturally improve, and your writing will feel better. Come on, the logical chain of the plot is very complete. The problem I raised is just a lack of writing skills. I hope the author can overcome the difficulties and write a soulful work. What is attractive about this book is that the setting of the heroine and the hidden story behind it are closely related to the book itself. The reflection of personality can be captured in her experience. There is no deliberate introduction, but the image is gradually enriched. Moreover, every female protagonist has her own objective shortcomings or character weaknesses, and the reasons why she is different from the male protagonist can be analyzed from their flaws. The most commendable thing is the very delicate and appropriate emotional description and sincere evaluation. The emotional expression ability of this book is the best among the books I have read so far. I have a strong ability to empathize, and I can make up my own mind about ordinary books; but in this book, the expressions in the book are completely consistent with what I feel, which is rare. Finally, this book has a literary flavor. If the writing is polished, the focus is on the ups and downs, and the regrets or happiness of the heroines are written out, it becomes a literary and artistic work, and it might be able to compete for the reputation of fairy grass!
It's good-looking, interesting and not toxic yet, but I really, really don't want any female character other than Shen to be successful. Wen gave the impression that he sought out the male protagonist for the sake of seeking enlightenment, and ruined all his hard work. Lin Geng was outrageous, and the part about rushing to buy at the auction was like making a fool of the disaster. Yin was ordinary, and he chose the devil's way of revenge instead of the male protagonist. Su Ye was okay, and he was stupid and wise. Is it good or bad? But they are not as good as Shen. She is such a supermodel that she commits suicide for love. She should be the only choice.
Top notch, in my opinion ambrosia is undoubtedly the best. There is a lot of interaction between the two heroines Wen and Shen, which is very interesting and does not miss the main plot. The memories are also well written. It has a background of cultivating immortals, but it is not a traditional one. There are quite a lot of modern elements. Although there are dramas, it still depends on the individual, and it feels innocuous.
After a few photos, I feel it's okay, and there's nothing too poisonous about it. People who don't lick the previous life will give it a thumbs up [laughing][laughing][laughing]
I haven't seen much so far. The junior sister's previous life was in c. The second life was restarted in c. It's a fact that the junior sister got the finishing blow in c bo1. Now it's bo2. The junior sister is still steaming in the early stage. Other bo1 actors started to work hard in bo2. Who can hold it? The boss requires the control point to be 1/2?
Absolute love, the author born from it, teaches you how to write...
This book is really good to read, especially when it describes Lu Bu's hundreds of rounds of battle with Sun Wukong for Diao Chan, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Noah's outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M six times of strafing would have killed him. But I am more concerned about what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Young man is proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang." It shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkeys who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings. The fighting scenes are so immersive, and the character descriptions are spot on! Unexpectedly, this book has yet to be completed. Zihan fought with Ye Fan in order to win the spot for the West Sutra, and Li Kui went to persuade him to make peace. However, he was tempted by foreign persimmons on the way, and strayed into the depths of the lotus root. He started a relationship with Xiao Longnu in the Huanshi Water Pavilion, but was seen by Sato Kazuma. So Sato Kazuma became angry and went to another world to conquer the Delta with Doraemon, and finally became the plot of the Flame Emperor.
😋It has a strong two-dimensional flavor, and I feel like the author has already had fun with the jokes. The yandere smell is not strong, just like the garlic in the stir-fried beef, it is there but not noticeable. There is no twisted plot, it is a pure Shura field. I feel like I have watched another episode of Kaguya-sama.
Very beautiful! 😍It's just too short and weak. There are more authors, more powerful and faster!
My junior sister is so good at gaming that she was sweating profusely when she saw me.
It's so beautiful that it makes the corners of my mouth curl up [lick screen]
The author is so funny and his writing skills are also great. Please update it quickly [please update][please update]
In the previous life of the protagonist, the heroine had a lot of affection for the heroine, but the heroine didn't feel anything. It was only after he died that he discovered his feelings for the protagonist. In the second life, the heroines are fighting wits to pursue the male protagonist [face covering] [face covering]
666 Has finally published an excellent book. I feel very good after reading the first few chapters. I hope that the plot will be richer in the future. I'm so sad, the next few chapters feel normal, are you going high and low?
Shamelessly give yourself five stars
It's quite interesting, but it's a little short. Come on, please update more.
It's a very interesting novel, and the characters are well developed. I hope the author will work hard!
Not bad, if you can insist on writing it down, it will be a tomato masterpiece. Hope to see it all finished.
If you can see it, the first one to eat is Senior Sister
That's fine. Just try not to paraphrase the dialogue, otherwise it will look like a diary.
Come on, just be nice to junior sister
It's pretty cool, but there are not a lot of people in the comment section.
The author wrote the love story so well, keep up the good work
Nb, the best book I have read here
The existence of this book is to be hunted by me now
I just watched it at the beginning. The plot is quite novel and the title content is not overly misleading.
You need to take your time to get good reviews and work hard, so just accept these four stars first.