When I Entered the Danmei Article, I Expressed My Innocence

At first glance, this seems to be the kind of thing a newbie can do. Advantages: The heroine's character is quite good, but she is superficial but still very charming. The male protagonists are all okay and not disgusting. They have always followed the tone of this article. Disadvantages: The world of cultivating immortals has many modern words and words derived from cultural activities [what] [what] The heroine herself said it was okay, but why do the indigenous people know it? ! The second is the setting of the plot. As a result, the author has forgotten the three elements of the novel: characters (the character creation is too one-sided, you can add more inner descriptions, good and bad talents can better reflect the freshness of people and the inner pull...), Emotions The plot (I hope the chapters are more rigorous), the environment (I have almost never seen it, and the rendering, atmosphere, and presentation of the world of cultivating immortals are almost pitiful). I hope that the author's writing skills will be better next time. Come on [Blessed immediately] [Blessed immediately] [Blessed immediately]

Come on, boss, it's so beautiful [crying] It's been a long time since I've seen an article on Tomato that's so interesting to me. The little double pear is really cute. I want Shuangli to have a harem, but I also want her to have a 1v1 relationship with the master. What should I do? [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] I really like the master. Before, I never looked at male masters and female apprentices (female masters and male apprentices don't love each other very much either. In fact, I just don't like master-apprentice relationships). But I particularly like the Master in this book, and it's the only one I like in this genre [Send Hearts][Send Hearts][Sneaky Smile]

Boss, I really like this book. I like Shuangli, I like Baili Kongshan, I like Master, and I like Uncle Master. In short, not everyone has a good taste of it. I really like Shuangli and Baili Kongshan, but I took a bite and found it so sour. Shuangli is really a very good girl. She always treats her friends with the greatest kindness. Hugging her friends, when I saw Baili Kongshan blocking Shuangli's sword, I really felt like my eyes were going to pee. Baili Kongshan is Shuangli's most loyal younger brother. Moreover, I like Shuangli and Uncle Shi very much. Uncle Shi swept it, but Shuangli didn't know about it yet. He just made everyone cute like this, Xiaoli Daxia. Finally, boss, I want to ask if that Rong Fei will be resurrected in the future. This is my first time writing a book review for someone. Please forgive me if it's not good, even though most of it is just words.

If you want to write something relaxing and joyful, just write it for me! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Damn it, I burst into tears after reading more than 30 chapters. It's so late at night, and now I can't sleep at all [covers face] I can't stand it anymore, my heart hurts so much, so heavy, I don't recommend reading it at night. . These 5 stars are for Xiaoli Daxia, she is really damn charming (◍ ´꒳` ◍) The writing is good and the plot is good. But the first clues started to appear from chapters 20 to 30. . The foreshadowing is overly natural and very comfortable to watch. But teacher, why is my saliva drooling uncontrollably from the corners of my eyes? Do you have any idea? Big? [Smile] The friends are all really nice, so cute and cute

After reading the latest chapter, I am eager to review it! First of all, our pairs of pears are so cute (the trio of Jiuxiao Sect going down the mountain as a group really made me laugh to death) And the master's character is particularly good, okay? Junior uncle looks good too Then Xiaolizi met many friends later.

It's beautiful and the heroine is great. Wow, Master is really enjoying himself and has low self-esteem [Admiration][Admiration][Admiration], and the author's capital writing is also very beautiful [Like][Like][Like]

I seriously tasted it. The writing is a bit immature in some places, but it's amazing that a high school student can write like this. Overall it's delicious. It's a light-hearted ➕ love at first sight. The flaws are not hidden. It's delicious without thinking. Come on, I will look forward to the update. However, the plot is a bit confusing. Xiaoli from the demon clan went to get Yun Xiaotang's before leaving. I feel like I'm seeking death(?) Although no one really died in the end, it's really a bit overestimating my own abilities🤦🏻‍♀️Should I say that I no longer have the spirit of a teenager so I can't understand it anymore?

It looks good. I like the character of the younger sister very much, but there are too few. Please give me more [blowing kisses][blowing kisses][blowing kisses]

I came across a book that was super appetizing! Like it very much! It tends to be lighthearted and fun, but also has exciting plots. Some plots include small knives, which is very acceptable! If you like quirky, smart, cute and interesting little girls, you can check it out. Our Little Pear Hero captures everyone's hearts in just one breath! The plot I have seen so far, Xiaoli Daxia, has a very charming personality and has saved many people. Let's just save the world with my sister shining brightly! Although the gain is not much, the investment does not make a loss!

Very beautiful! ! !

It's really funny. There are so many cute jokes in it, and the characters are made very smart and interesting. It's really good to read. It contains a lot of touching and unforgettable stories about NPCs. As an old bookworm, I can't help but feel sore in my heart.

It's pretty good, but there's just too little of it. It would be nice to update it more [thoughts]

It's so beautiful, so beautiful. The author's writing style is not embarrassing at all and is very interesting. Hero Xiao Li will charm everyone with his cuteness.

Damn, you must update every day. Even if you don't update every day, you should update it. [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] It's really beautiful.

Author, you write very well, I like it so much! What a lovely book

Very cute [admiration] Xiao Shuangli😜 so cute (*/∇＼*) and the interactions with each of the male protagonists are also very cute🥰

Shuangli is very cute and super charming. I hope Master and Ahli have more scenes together. They are very close to each other.

It's very beautiful. The author's writing style is very good. [Congratulations] Our little pear hero is so adorable.

The heroine's baby is so cute, every character is very good, and the interactions are so sweet that I don't want to get sick, it's so beautiful🤩It's really great (¯▽¯)👍

Sorry author, I don't know what b| is. Can you tell me?

The author writes in a relaxed and interesting way, and it's beautiful and beautiful!!! I like the vivid characters in it, especially the heroine's baby! I want more updates [Blowing Kisses][Flowing Kisses][Flowing Kisses]

I'm very picky about books and I basically stop reading them halfway through. It's been a long time since I've seen a book that suits my taste like this [crying] [crying] This article is more lighthearted and funny. It may occasionally have a sadistic plot (the plot between Aunt Lan and her sister is very painful). The characters are well created and I like it! ! ! I just hope the author can update it with more [love] [blowing kisses]