I'm Innocent, Even Though I Transmigrated into a Danmei Novel

At first glance, this seems to be the kind of thing a newbie can do. Advantages: The heroine's character is quite good, but she is superficial but still very charming. The male protagonists are all okay and not disgusting. They have always followed the tone of this article. Disadvantages: The world of cultivating immortals has many modern words and words derived from cultural activities [what] [what] The heroine herself said it was okay, but why do the indigenous people know it?! The second is the setting of the plot. As a result, the author has forgotten the three elements of the novel: characters (the character creation is too one-sided, you can add more inner descriptions, good and bad talents can better reflect the freshness of people and the inner pull...), Emotions The plot (I hope the chapters are more rigorous), the environment (I have almost never seen it, and the rendering, atmosphere, and presentation of the world of cultivating immortals are almost pitiful). I hope that the author's writing skills will be better next time. Come on [Blessed immediately] [Blessed immediately] [Blessed immediately]

Come on, boss, it's so beautiful 😢 It's been a long time since I've seen an article on Tomato that's so interesting to me. The little double pear is really cute. I want Shuangli to have a harem, but I also want her to have a 1v1 relationship with the master. What should I do? 😢 😢 😢 I really like the master. Before, I never looked at male masters and female apprentices (female masters and male apprentices don't love each other very much either. In fact, I just don't like master-apprentice relationships). But I particularly like the Master in this book, and it's the only one I like in this genre [Send Hearts][Send Hearts][Sneaky Smile]

It's beautiful and the heroine is great. Wow, Master is really enjoying himself and has low self-esteem [Admiration][Admiration][Admiration], and the author's capital writing is also very beautiful 👍👍👍

Boss, I really like this book. I like Shuangli, I like Baili Kongshan, I like Master, and I like Uncle Master. In short, not everyone has a good taste of it. I really like Shuangli and Baili Kongshan, but I took a bite and found it so sour. Shuangli is really a very good girl. She always treats her friends with the greatest kindness. Hugging her friends, when I saw Baili Kongshan blocking Shuangli's sword, I really felt like my eyes were going to pee. Baili Kongshan is Shuangli's most loyal younger brother. Moreover, I like Shuangli and Uncle Shi very much. Uncle Shi swept it, but Shuangli didn't know about it yet. He just made everyone cute like this, Xiaoli Daxia. Finally, boss, I want to ask if that Rong Fei will be resurrected in the future. This is my first time writing a book review for someone. Please forgive me if it's not good, even though most of it is just words.

If you want to write something relaxing and joyful, just write it for me!!!!!!!! Damn it, I burst into tears after reading more than 30 chapters. This was in the middle of the night, and now I can't sleep at all🤦I can't stand it anymore. My heart hurts so much and is so heavy. I don't recommend reading it at night. . These 5 stars are for Xiaoli Daxia, she is really damn charming (◍ ´꒳` ◍) The writing is good and the plot is good. But the first clues started to appear from chapters 20 to 30. . The foreshadowing is overly natural and very comfortable to watch. But teacher, why is my saliva dripping uncontrollably from the corners of my eyes? Do you have any idea? Big? 🙂 The friends are all really nice, so cute and cute

After reading the latest chapter, I am eager to review it! First of all, our Shuanglizi is very cute (the trio of Jiuxiao Sect going down the mountain as a team really made me laugh to death). Then the master has a very good character, okay, and the little master uncle looks good. Then later, the little pear made a lot of friends.

I seriously tasted it. The writing is a bit immature in some places, but it's amazing that a high school student can write like this. Overall it's delicious. It's a light-hearted ➕ love at first sight. The flaws are not hidden. It's delicious without thinking. Come on, I will look forward to the update. However, the plot is a bit confusing. Xiaoli from the demon clan went to get Yun Xiaotang's before leaving. I feel like I'm seeking death(?) Although no one really died in the end, it's really a bit overestimating my own abilities🤦🏻‍♀️Should I say that I no longer have the spirit of a teenager so I can't understand it anymore?

I came across a book that was super appetizing! Like it very much! It tends to be lighthearted and fun, but also has exciting plots. Some plots include small knives, which is very acceptable! If you like quirky, smart, cute and interesting little girls, you can check it out. Our Little Pear Hero captures everyone's hearts in just one breath! The plot I have seen so far, Xiaoli Daxia, has a very charming personality and has saved many people. Let's just save the world with my sister shining brightly! Although the gain is not much, the investment does not make a loss!

It looks good. I like the character of the younger sister very much, but there are too few. Please give me more [blowing kisses][blowing kisses][blowing kisses]

I'm saying Mamma Mia, this little pear 🍐 is so cute to me ꒰づ≧ω≦ づ꒱~♡, mua~ kiss this cute little pear (˘ ³˘)♥