How does an ordinary person survive in the world of cannibal ninjas? Without passionate dreams or ambitions to change the world, Qin Che's only goal is to open his eyes during the next mission. As a civilian ninja, look at how Qin Che managed to survive until the end. Kagura's Eyes of Mind and Thunder God are not invincible, but what about the Eight Gates Dunjia? There is no golden finger, no system, and no foresight.
Reader comments
1. The protagonist is soul-transporting. He has no system and no bloodline. He has average physical fitness and not much chakra. He became Kagura by relying on the notes of the Uzumaki clan found in the rental house. His mind is a bit crazy, and he even has sealing techniques and refining medicine.
He is said to be a commoner. If he is not a commoner, he must have some bloodline.
2. At the beginning of the orphanage, he kept pretending to be sweet and hiding his roots. After entering school, he pretended to be ordinary and controlled the passing score. He and Kai were close friends, and they trained together and learned eight subjects together.
3. The writing is relatively detailed. From the details of the environment to the details of life, I wrote several times what a wild cat was doing outside the window. It felt like reading excerpts of prose from a Chinese language book.
4. It looks okay so far, but with more details, it feels a bit clumsy, and the plot keeps spinning in circles.
The combat power settings are okay, but too verbose.
1. The protagonist is soul-transporting. He has no system and no bloodline. He has average physical fitness and not much chakra. He became Kagura by relying on the notes of the Uzumaki clan found in the rental house. His mind is a bit crazy, and he even has sealing techniques and refining medicine. He is said to be a commoner. If he is not a commoner, he must have some bloodline. 2. At the beginning of the orphanage, he kept pretending to be sweet and hiding his roots. After entering school, he pretended to be ordinary and controlled the passing score. He and Kai were close friends, and they trained together and learned eight subjects together. 3. The writing is relatively detailed. From the details of the environment to the details of life, I wrote several times what a wild cat was doing outside the window. It felt like reading excerpts of prose from a Chinese language book. 4. It looks okay so far, but with more details, it feels a bit clumsy, and the plot keeps spinning in circles.
The combat power settings are okay, but too verbose.