A Man in a Woman’s Body Enters the Imperial Harem and Outacts Them All

The author's overall writing is pretty good, but there are a few things that seem awkward to me: 1. There are too many dialogue descriptions and it seems cumbersome, and there is not much psychological activity and narration of the characters in the dialogue, which makes it a bit dry. The author can add some emotions and third person into it. 1. If there are many people in a long dialogue, you will not be able to distinguish who is talking, 2. You will not be able to feel what the protagonist is thinking psychologically. 2. There are too many questions and answers, especially in the plot with Grandma Wang. Grandma Wang always tells the protagonist to answer, which easily makes me feel that Grandma Wang is particularly stupid. Although I know that the author arranged for Grandma Wang to use Grandma Wang to describe the protagonist's thoughts, but there is really no character development in this way. It feels like one is like a question machine and the other is like a reply machine, a bit like me and Beanbag... If the author wants to describe what the protagonist wants to do and how he thinks, he can still add some psychological description and third-party events as above. For example, there are some things in the article that do not need to be explained in such detail. The readers only need to know it, and there is no need to let the protagonist say everything. Again, now the protagonist is like a man-machine. 3. There are over a hundred chapters, so I can try to add as many emotional lines as possible. If it is a remarriage, I hope the author can add some inner tangles of the protagonist's past life as a man and now falling in love with the emperor. And add some emotional lines! 4. I hope the author will not give up and keep writing! I like it very much!

It's okay, the heroine talks about everything, even the details of the acting, and just says whatever others ask. Say nothing, why do you say it in such detail? Aren't you afraid of being exposed?

Good looking, tied in one go. The protagonist is very meticulous in his work and well written. I am really looking forward to the last part of the introduction. The questions and answers between the protagonist and Grandma Wang are very suitable for making into a comic series. Even though the protagonist often used modern vocabulary and called the emperor by his name, Grandma Wang didn't even notice it, which felt a bit strange. Moreover, the emperor and the queen mother's goodwill came too quickly, and there was always a feeling that something would happen later.

It looks good, but it still has shortcomings. The first is how the emperor's name can be called directly. It is not very etiquette. The dialogue between the protagonist and Grandma Wang is too straightforward. It can be seen at a glance that something is wrong with the protagonist. There are many modern words. I hope the author can conceive the plot well and stick to it.

It's very interesting. At first I thought it was a novelty for men to wear women's clothing, so I clicked in. At first, I wasn't very accepting of having an intimate relationship, but after seeing it, I became curious about what wonderful sparks would happen later. It's very interesting. ദ്ദി ༎ຶ‿༎ຶ )

It's good to watch, but some people complained about the author's description of the dialogue, questions and answers, but I think it was okay and I could get into the plot quickly. I just watched it the day before yesterday and finished it in one day. I just caught up with the update today. What I like most is especially the emotional line between the actor (protagonist) and the audience (emperor). The tension is very exciting. The most important thing is that if this book is a special favorite, it can convince me that the protagonist is scheming and the emperor is sober. Overall, I was really impressed by the recommendation, especially the emotional line. I am looking forward to the time when the actors reveal their gender to the audience. It would be great if the author could write some modern side stories about them! Come and greet the actors and the audience!!!

This is my first time to write a book review, and I feel that there are many inconsistencies in it. For example, the eldest prince is three years old at first, and then one year old later; the thrush I saw two years ago, but from entering the palace to entering the cold palace, it only takes less than a year, which is amazing🌚 But it doesn't affect the perception, I just think it's a pity. It would be better if it was more rigorous.

The author writes so well!! This book is really good. Tomato or the current novel circle, there are very few articles of this type. I hope the author can finish this book. It is really super good.

It's beautiful... The two of them obviously have nothing to do, but they just feel so sweet.

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