The Poor Little Thing I Picked up Turned Out to Be a White Glutinous Rice Dumpling with a Black Heart.

The author's ideas are good, but his writing skills are not up to par, and there are still some problems (in my opinion) The first is the plot of this book. After reading the change of mentality of the heroine, I felt that according to this set of plot logic, the "butcher's knife" in the introduction seemed inappropriate. This inappropriateness made me feel a bit cliché. I felt that it was written to write about yandere... I didn't like it very much. Then there are the characters in this book. I really like the author's new ideas about characters. The protagonists of this book all start as children. This kind of perspective is very rare in Persimmon (can anyone recommend another good book). But it is also very difficult to write. The description of the growth line must be vivid and natural, and the description of the emotional line must be delicate but not excessive. You must also think about the world from a child's perspective. In this way, there are many things to consider, and it will stink if you don't pay attention. Regarding this book, I think the emotional line is a bit stiff, but I can still read it just by eating candy (personal opinion). Finally, I think the author of this book is very cute and cares deeply about this book. This is also the reason why I gave a score of "1" out of 3➕1. I hope the author will continue to work hard and improve his book.

The plot is very good. I hope that the author will not make the novel too long in the future, but can be more concise, and it will be more than 9 points directly. I also hope that the author can make the male protagonist more powerful, at least his academic performance will not be bad, and he will be better if he has special skills (my selfish request)

The plot is quite interesting. There are parts where true feelings are revealed (I suspect that Lao Zu used his own experiences as a child [laughing]), and there is also a sublimation of values ​​(after reading Chapter 60, except for the ice cellar, the three views are very upright). In the end, although Zhi Die is still growing, his possessiveness has not been expressed. It seems particularly strong now, but it is closer to reality. After all, a person's way of dealing with others is gradually formed by the influence of the environment, and the male protagonist is also the same. Unlike other novels, he did not fall into trouble or strongly oppose it at the beginning (I think that is really too poisonous). I am looking forward to the follow-up plot of my sister's condition getting worse (Bingjiao must be sick and "delicate". It is rare for a book to have both. I hope that the plot will be more suffocating. Of course, you don't have to be like a madman and kill people at every turn. You can use your own strengths, such as adding more comedy elements in the fight between your sister and the squad leader)

Although the writing style is average, the imagination is very rich. Wang Jiahao's character creation is okay. He is usually quite bold, but he was a bit handsome when he was playing chess with the heroine. There was a feeling that although he was passive, he had a chance to win. He caught the heroine's weakness and even threatened her. Give me 5 points for encouragement. I hope the male and female protagonists can be more fleshed out.

Not bad, very plump😋

It's good-looking but there are too few of it at the moment, and Wang Jiahao is really awesome. So far, if nothing else, this book's rating is relatively high.

It's very good. What the author has written surpasses most of Tomato's books. I envy most of Tomato's books. I envy what the author has written. I don't know who to envy for a while.

It's okay. It's not as slow as others who started writing from a young age, but Wang Jiahao really impressed me.

The author writes so well. Please update me quickly [lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen]

Haokang! [Lick screen] Fast forward to the education and training😋

No need to say much, just give it a try [I learned it]

Hao Chi, it's just that the first few chapters are a bit embarrassing

A story about a brother and sister with a very delicate relationship. It has daily life and is not brainless. It's really good to read.

So sweet, update soon, I feel empty

It's a good beginning. I'll give it a try. I'll kick you when I'm in the Shura field. Thank you.

It should be interesting to make an AI comic, and the plot is also very funny

Red eggs are the most affectionate, and one egg gives you lovesickness.

The author could just change the main character's name to mine [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

Even if the yandere in the novel is yandere, it suits my buddy's taste.

I finally found a book that I can read carefully from beginning to end. It's not easy. It's just too short and not enough to read.

It's very sweet. The only drawback is that it's too short. The author will update it quickly, [crazy][crazy][crazy][crazy][crazy]

Saw the latest chapter. Summary: The Warrior of Light will not run away. The author will also actively absorb readers' ideas

Believe in the power of light

It's pretty good. It's one of the few novels I've been interested in recently.

Okay, okay, not bad

It's very beautiful, but there are too few updates. Come on, author [blowing kiss]

It's pretty, but it's too slow.

It's good. Don't be ambiguous later.