Naruto: Failed Miserably from the Ninja School Onwards

Very well written. Characters do not just have personal labels, but have their own feelings and ways of thinking. It feels more immersive. And most of the characters are not OOC. Hope the author continues to do so. [Like] I feel that if the protagonist is written in such a different way, it will be difficult to write this direction well. Even the boss of Novice Village, Orochimaru, couldn't be passed, and then the cheats were eliminated. With things like this, how can the protagonist be worthy of serving in the ninja world? There will be no chance of becoming stronger in the future. Even if the Sharingan turns into a kaleidoscope, he will still be blind sooner or later. In order to show that he was kind and righteous in saving Shizune, he directly gave Orochimaru a big gift package. Jiraiya and Naruto couldn't find a way to save the protagonist. Even Sasuke has a protagonist aura than this original protagonist.

It's already tied, and so far it's been very good-looking. The emotional line of the Hayate Team that the protagonist joins is particularly good, but there's a bit of a knife in the back. I'm still looking forward to the protagonist getting in touch with the roots later, because there are roots in the latest chapter. But the protagonist and Orochimaru probably won't be able to cooperate. It's a pity. I remember that the system rewarded scientific research talent once, which should be useful later. Anyway, I am looking forward to the follow-up development. The author will update it soon! ! ! (A small suggestion, just a personal opinion, don't comment! I don't really hope that the protagonist will establish an organization by himself later. There are many fan fiction protagonists who will establish their own organizations in the later stage. I personally still don't like this kind of thing, because it will be very, very confusing in the later stage, and then it will basically be unfinished. I still hope that the author will follow the main line of writing.) This is the first time I post such a long book review, so the language may be a bit awkward, but this book is really good. Can you write without CP? Please🥺

It's okay. It mainly depends on whether people are used to it. I've seen various protagonists, including troublemakers, funny, invincible, multiple girls, making up for regrets, etc., Etc., So I may not accept it. I think the protagonist is not great, and there is no regrets, etc., And it also intercepts the two characters of lustful Sennin and Tsunade, lustful and gambling. Personally, I can wait patiently until Chapter 47, and I am unlikely to follow it for a while. [Cover face]

The process of joining Hayate's team was quite harmonious. Saki and Takuya had been teammates for a year and got along well with each other. Hayate was very attentive and willing to teach. The daily writing is also very comfortable. There is no sudden pretentiousness or slap in the face, nor does the idea of ​​​​having a female protagonist start to give away the daughter. For these reasons, it is worth reading and giving it a 5-star review. It would be good if the female protagonist is not written. Many emotional scenes are not well written and it is easy for me to give up on writing. If it doesn't work, it is also delicious to use Konoha's traditional art - Konoha's bond. (Isn't this how Naruto chases Sasuke in Shippuden 😂)

It's pretty good. The making-friend scene is not as awkward as expected and is more natural. There are probably one or two sentences in Chapter 56 (?) That feel more AI-like, and the rest are like hand-made, making a wish without cp [laughs] Five-star support

Two chapters a day is not enough Brother, give me one more chapter, I'm dying, please Brother, I feel like there are ants crawling on me. I can't stand it anymore. Brother, I feel like my whole body is shaking and I can't breathe Brother, please Brother, just give me one more chapter, just one more chapter. Brother, I will never touch you again, please, brother, really Brother, just one chapter, I swear I will never touch this thing again. Brother, I really can't bear it anymore. Please give me another chapter. Brother, I'm dying Brother, please, brother. Brother, I feel like there are ants crawling on me Brother, I feel like my whole body is shaking Brother, I can't breathe Brother, please.

Yes, the plot is smooth, and it's not awkward when making friends, which is good. "'(<(: Forgot to rate:)>)'" 1111111111111111111∧V∧V∧V∧V∧V

So far, the writing is okay, although it's not very exciting, but the plot is very straightforward and comfortable, the plot is steady, and the characters' emotions are not stiff. I hope I can keep writing it, the rhythm will be tighter, and the plot of the protagonist will be more exciting. It will be better. Come back after fattening up [grass has been planted]

As the title says, it was indeed a complete failure. From being planted with a cursed seal by Orochimaru, to being planted with a cursed seal by Danzo, and finally being instantly killed by Itachi's illusion, there really was nothing he could do. The protagonist gains a lot and loses a lot. All in all, it's a pretty good Naruto fanfic.

A book worth looking forward to. It's tied. Let's start from the daily chapter. The Ninja School is quite funny. I wonder if the protagonist is considered a complainer hahaha. I guess he has a basic affinity with everyone in the Twelve Little Strong, right? I really like the daily life after the group class. I found that the protagonist didn't talk much after forming the Hayate Class. Imagine that from an outsider's perspective, he might be a little reserved? (Maybe Takuya is too active, hahaha team) The teacher and teammates are pulling this junior! In the daily chapter, we can see that he is serious, considerate of others, steady, and studious. In the class chapter, the protagonist is very gentle (this one is delicious)! Pay attention to emotions. After the key accident happened later, I felt like I had more words to talk about (I really liked the part about Tsunade. There was already a feeling of emotional leakage. The loss experienced gave the protagonist spiritual growth and enlightenment. (But I didn't expect that the protagonist just kidnapped Orochimaru when he invaded Konoha. From the dialogue, it would be too strange to see the protagonist from the perspective of the kidnapped. (There will be a lot of things to know, and the protagonist kindly reminded her that this This kind of interaction will probably leave a deep impression on the protagonist. Haha, I think the next meeting will be very funny. I look forward to it.) Fortunately, I look forward to Konoha Bond. (Generally speaking, the character is quite lovable. I am looking forward to the future development. I wish to have no cp and no heroine. Please use Konoha Bond to work hard. I really miss the protagonist when I see the protagonist using the curse mark under Orochimaru. The black curse mark creeps up on his face. For my next time No longer powerless to fight, although every time the key parts have to be defeated according to the underlying logic (?), It is so miserable, but the battle damage is so cute (such a very grown-up protagonist with a bit of "copying" characteristics, I don't know what kind of sparks will happen with Kakashi! I am very curious about the subsequent interaction, but unfortunately I have only seen Kakashi's reaction described in the Chunin Exam), the expansion of the curse seal and the use of the attribute that abuses oneself in order to become stronger The part is also very cool, just like a tree bud growing up on a cement floor. In short, it's a very mature character! It's the first time I've read it, and I'm looking forward to the future development. I'm really looking forward to the teacher's next development. I read this book a little too quickly, and I don't think my imagination will take action!

I really hope the author can change the part about being reborn and returning to the body. (Personal thoughts are purely subjective and not malicious: the system prevented Orochimaru from occupying the protagonist's body and teleported the protagonist to a safe location) (><)

You can watch it. Just treat the characters in the plot as strengthened. Orochimaru can be treated as a transplant of Hashirama cells and Sharingan. But how to recognize each other later is a big pitfall. Maybe it will be fine if the rhythm of the comments is handled.

It's okay so far, please cheers, author

Okay. So far, this book doesn't have any serious flaws, and the characterization is okay. Give me a five-star encouragement

It was a bit uncomfortable to write in the early stage🌚. Let's wait and see how it goes after the manuscript is sent out😇. If you have any comments, you can also mention it😋

The author writes very well

The writing is good and exciting. It's a pity that Danzo was hit by the sealing technique. If it is not solved in the future, it will be a big poisonous point.

There's nothing poisonous about it. I hope the author can avoid making more noise in the future.

Okay, okay, well written.

The writing is okay, but the author is too lazy and immediately hyped the author.

Well written and interesting. It's a pity that I can't update more than 100,000 per day [licking the screen]

It's well written. I'm halfway through it now, and there's nothing bad about it.

There's not much to say, the details are well written and the output is high.

It's pretty good. There are no conspiracy theories and it's very comfortable to watch. The emotional line is also well written and the characters are well created. Compared with most fan fiction, it's also very good. It's a rare masterpiece from Tomato.

It's okay, but the word count is too few

Is there a female protagonist? The author is great It feels okay. I finally tied it😋

A great book

Okay, okay, it looks pretty.

Push it, it will make you cry

A good book, it feels a bit like a shounen manga.