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This battle is too overwhelming. [Lope]'s [Scroll] can be reused at will, but not the protagonist, it is disposable. [Lope]'s [Energy Scroll] can destroy the vault door of Area 13 with one blow, leaving no trace behind. The protagonist's [Energy Scroll] cannot even destroy an [Iron Overlord]. The fighting force was too heavy. Don't forget that "The Adventures of Jackie Chan" has a bit of comedy elements, and the audience is all children, so the expression of the power of the [Eight Demons] is so poor. According to the settings, the real combat power of the [Eight Demons] is at least the level of [Dormammu] [Eternity] [Creation God] [OAA] [No Sky] ([Creation Level] A single demon may not be enough, but eight demons can definitely achieve it together. After all, a single demon has a single origin) Trivia: Never compete with funny characters in terms of combat power. They are all cheating and ridiculously strong. If you can't stand it, you can leave. The protagonist is here to be a nanny, working with oxen and horses. And it may have been written by Runren. Another thing, I think the complete Holy Lord in "The Adventures of Jackie Chan" may be ridiculously strong. There are two episodes in the anime that show the tip of the iceberg of the power of the Holy Lord. One is the episode where Valon uses the [Dragon Talisman]. The talisman is embedded in the palm of Valon's hand, and Valon flies up. There is also the episode where Xiaoyu uses the rabbit charm to travel through time and space. It is so powerful that it is simply outrageous. There is no short version at all, and the demon wizard can do magic. [The Flash] travels through time and space to change the past. Even if he kicks a stone, it will produce various butterfly effects. He doesn't even see the bad future. He is looking at the power of [Holy Lord]! Change it however you want, nothing will happen. Theoretically speaking, since the Holy Lord's power can be made into spells, other demons can too.
Everyone is welcome to give your opinions. I will read every comment. If there is anything we can discuss together. Moreover, I will definitely not write about Secret Invasion. It has been unilaterally expelled from the MCU by me. I will also write about some content in the series in the later stages. I hope everyone will watch and rate it, and let's wait for Avengers 5 together
The content is generally good, the subject matter is very novel, the writing style is good for a newcomer, and the pacing is OK so far, but some character descriptions are not very good, but it is basically restored. With this kind of multi-element integration, the subsequent plot is not easy to write. I hope I can make an outline or sort it out in advance. If you are short of books, you can read it and add a bookshelf
Let me give you a quick thought, although the protagonist and Nick Fury are nominally collaborators, I still feel that the protagonist is treated as his subordinate.
When I first watched it, I thought someone would complain about it. Well, really. First of all, let me talk about the things that some people will mind. For example, it cooperates with SHIELD. The plot of Iron Man has basically remained unchanged, and then there is the integration of the world. Oh, I originally meant to label it, but it turned out that I was a little bit bothered by it. Let me take care of it first. If the follow-up is good, I will continue to watch [laughing]
It's okay, there's nothing messy about it, the protagonist's abilities aren't too invincible, and they're not too trashy. The plot should go through the separate development lines of each hero. The view on SHIELD is also good, at least it's not too extreme like other novels. Come on.
It's well written and the characters are well described.
I can't give you any opinions at the moment, after all, there is still too little written, so if there's no big problem, you can read it! The author should write slowly [laughs]
The plot flows smoothly and the writing is naturally excellent.
It's good to watch. The author has done a good job of integrating Jackie Chan's Adventures with Marvel without adding any unnecessary plot.
It's very interesting, good luck to the author
It's pretty good, I hope I can write it down
The theme is quite new
Not bad, at least it ranks in the middle of the Marvel fan fiction
The subject matter is very good, keep up the good work