In the eighth year since transmigrating into Song Qingshu, what awaited him wasn't an invincible martial art, but news that Yu Daiyan had gone missing.
According to the original fate, Yu Daiyan's limbs would be shattered, Zhang Cuishan would drift overseas and take his own life at Wudang ten years later, and Song Qingshu himself would become an outcast of Wudang and die beneath his father's hand.
Just as the first tragedy was about to unfold, the [Fate-Rewriting System] finally activated.
[Fate Node: Yu Daiyan's Broken Bones]
[Requirement: Intervene effectively before the outcome is set in stone]
As long as he changed the fate that was supposed to unfold and saved those doomed to suffer, Song Qingshu would earn rewards. The more completely he changed fate and the farther-reaching the impact, the greater the reward.
And so, everything began with his heading down the mountain two hours early.
Save Yu Daiyan, protect Zhang Cuishan, seek the Nine Yang Manual, obtain the Great Shift of Heaven and Earth and the Nine Yin Manual, master Taiji, inherit the Eighteen Dragon-Subduing Palms, and learn the martial arts of Huang Yaoshi's lineage. Break the schemes of the Six Sects and the Ming Order, rebuild Wudang, overthrow the Yuan court, and bring peace to the realm.
He would meet Zhou Zhiruo and free her from a life bound by her master's command. He would meet Zhao Min, the Shaomin Princess, and cross swords with her in the jianghu and across the realm, becoming each other's most dangerous and best-understood opponent. And he would meet Xiaozhao, rewriting the life of aimless wandering she was originally destined to lead.
In this life, he would be neither a mere sidekick to Zhang Wuji nor a pawn discarded by fate.
If fate could be changed once, he would keep changing it.
Until he ruled Wudang, rewrote the world of The Heavenly Sword and Dragon Sabre, and forged a realm of his own.
After seeing the latest chapter, tell me your personal thoughts: Overall it's good, the writing style is good, it can connect everything well, and it can be described without feeling abrupt or stiff. Some people may think it's a bit of a nanny, but Pig's Knuckle Goldfinger has to participate in or prevent the tragic events of the original play from happening. Coupled with the author's writing skills, I personally think it's okay; I think there are also shortcomings. The author pays too much attention to golden fingers. Martial arts has never been just about martial arts, but also the high-spiritedness of people, which can supplement the psychology and emotions of pig feet when entering martial arts, whether it is chivalry in the world, personal friendship, or a sense of belonging to the sect. These are too few. At present, there is only pure martial arts, and there is no "xia" As a new author, I still have five stars for encouragement and support. I hope that my writing will get better and better!
Looks good, some suggestions 1. The writing is a bit too serious. I don't know why, but it makes me feel a little miserable when I read it. 2. Zhang Sanfeng's writing is a bit too serious. Sloppy Taoists should not be so serious. You can refer to Sammo Hung's version. Okay, it's another article about trying to conquer the world. Don't Yitian's fans have pure martial arts articles? Gone, gone Also, if you don't mind reading Battle for World Hegemony, this book is pretty good.
Very well written!! Song Qingshu is very full! Zhang Sanfeng's writing is also great. I saw comments saying that Zhang Sanfeng's writing is too serious, or he is not the leader. The author wrote that Zhang Sanfeng was also the first to discover that Song Qingshu's skills were different and very detailed. Later, the interaction between Song Qingshu and other female characters is also very interesting. Song Qingshu is doing what he thinks is right. It is normal for other female characters to appreciate and be attracted by people with strong martial arts skills (you will know by reading the article yourself. It does not mean that you are generally attracted, but what Song Qingshu did is really right and upright, so it is normal to be tempted). The author can just write according to his own heart, and the writing style is great! Come on! ❤️❤️❤️[Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates] But there really is! Point! No! Enough! Look! Come on, hardworking author [please update] [attention]
A good description, with the flavor of a martial arts world. Fighting is not just about crushing numerical values. It will be perfect if you remove the little poisonous points of the realm that were redundantly written before.
Now I like this kind of novel that is not invincible. The characters' dialogues are very unique, but there are too few [laughter]
It looks great, good luck to the author! More is not enough
It's pretty good, the plot is tight and there's a sense of expectation
Very good book, worth reading
The writing is very good, especially the interaction with Zhao Min. The two of them are a perfect match.
This book is very interesting, it's not a cheat, and the changes are very reasonable.