Lu Chengan came from a foundation-building family, but he was only a three-spirit-root monk with ordinary qualifications.
The death of his parents at an early age made him understand a truth: on the road to immortality, only by living can you have a future.
Therefore, he must check his meridians when practicing cultivation, and must carry talismans when going out. When opportunities arise, he thinks of risks first, and never takes risks if he is safe.
Until a family marriage made alchemist Lin Yutang his wife.
On their wedding night, the broken tortoise shell that had been with Lu Chengan for many years suddenly awakened, manifested as the Xuanwu Zhenjie Armor, and brought with it a mysterious inheritance. At the same time, the Qinggang Bamboo Forest, where the Lu family relied on, suddenly changed, the underground water veins changed course, and second-level elixirs and powerful monsters were hidden deep in the Cangwu Mountains.
One is cautious and steady, good at refining weapons and finding pulses; the other is calm and decisive, proficient in refining elixirs and identifying medicines.
From a hasty marriage to fighting enemies side by side, from testing each other to guarding secrets together, the two monks who were strangers gradually became true Taoist companions.
Refining elixirs, refining weapons, managing spiritual fields, exploring water veins, cultivating tribesmen...
This is the story of a prudent monk who grew up steadily relying on the Xuanwu inheritance, and worked with his wife to lead the family to prosperity.
As a new author, I mainly ask for advice. I will read every comment carefully and accept everyone's suggestions humbly. I hope you all like it, your attention is the motivation for my writing!
Reader comments
It's okay, the outline is good, and the plot has also been well-worked. Although it seems a bit depressing, the family is not strong and it tolerates and gives in. It's more pleasing to the eye than the protagonist who wants to make enemies. Although it must have been polished with AI in the middle, some sentences in the article repeat the same meaning, and it is quite embarrassing. After AI polishing, I should review it manually. Although it is awkward, it is still understandable, but I shouldn't definitely persuade a lot of people to quit.
It's well written, and I can tell that I've put some effort into figuring out the plot, but there are a few minor issues that I'm not happy with.
(1) Family members are written by the elder generation. When it comes to the protagonist generation, only the eldest brother and the protagonist are written. The rest of the brothers are not mentioned, as are the uncles. Family stories still need to be written, especially for characters who appear frequently. At least the relationship and seniority are clearly stated...
(2) Regarding the settings of the protagonist's skills and turtle shell spiritual pattern! The author has never written about the special nature of Xuanwu's world-suppressing spiritual power. If it is just pure spiritual power, he can simply write it as spiritual power. There is no specialness at all in adding a name... If Xuanwu's world-suppressing spiritual power wants to be special, he can completely write that the spiritual power has the effect of suppressing and banning! And the tortoise shell spirit pattern, is it active or passive? Every time the author writes about the spirit patterns, he just unfolds them, and does not set up the use of the spirit patterns at all. If he is using the tortoise shell in his body to use the spirit patterns, then there should at least be a medium, right? Whether you actively use your eyes or your palms, you should at least make sure that the spiritual patterns are cast from the protagonist, and write down the method for mobilizing the spiritual patterns! Also, there are a total of 9 spirit patterns. If you want to be successful, at least the unlocking of the spirit patterns must have different effects and abilities, right?
(3) There have been dozens of chapters about the counterattack of the hostile family. The Zhao family has caused trouble several times. The family does not organize a counterattack, but passively solves the trouble every time! If you don't fall out openly, you have to fight back secretly...
The rest of the writing is okay. Whether it's the development of the protagonist or the shaping of some scenes, it's pretty good. The protagonist is not black and white. He has ideas, a bottom line, and a brain.
I hope the author will be patient and continue writing! At present, the framework looks good, but the content still needs to be improved! Come on! Will continue to watch
Tomato is a high-quality product, but its combat power is a bit lacking in the early stage. You need to use more tricks later.
It's a very good book, with a reasonable plot and a tight rhythm, but there are a lot of AI parts, which you can tell at a glance.
A book of grain and grass, the depiction is very comfortable
It's okay, the outline is good, and the plot has also been well-worked. Although it seems a bit depressing, the family is not strong and it tolerates and gives in. It's more pleasing to the eye than the protagonist who wants to make enemies. Although it must have been polished with AI in the middle, some sentences in the article repeat the same meaning, and it is quite embarrassing. After AI polishing, I should review it manually. Although it is awkward, it is still understandable, but I shouldn't definitely persuade a lot of people to quit.
It's well written, and I can tell that I've put some effort into figuring out the plot, but there are a few minor issues that I'm not happy with. (1) Family members are written by the elder generation. When it comes to the protagonist generation, only the eldest brother and the protagonist are written. The rest of the brothers are not mentioned, as are the uncles. Family stories still need to be written, especially for characters who appear frequently. At least the relationship and seniority are clearly stated... (2) Regarding the settings of the protagonist's skills and turtle shell spiritual pattern! The author has never written about the special nature of Xuanwu's world-suppressing spiritual power. If it is just pure spiritual power, he can simply write it as spiritual power. There is no specialness at all in adding a name... If Xuanwu's world-suppressing spiritual power wants to be special, he can completely write that the spiritual power has the effect of suppressing and banning! And the tortoise shell spirit pattern, is it active or passive? Every time the author writes about the spirit patterns, he just unfolds them, and does not set up the use of the spirit patterns at all. If he is using the tortoise shell in his body to use the spirit patterns, then there should at least be a medium, right? Whether you actively use your eyes or your palms, you should at least make sure that the spiritual patterns are cast from the protagonist, and write down the method for mobilizing the spiritual patterns! Also, there are a total of 9 spirit patterns. If you want to be successful, at least the unlocking of the spirit patterns must have different effects and abilities, right? (3) There have been dozens of chapters about the counterattack of the hostile family. The Zhao family has caused trouble several times. The family does not organize a counterattack, but passively solves the trouble every time! If you don't fall out openly, you have to fight back secretly... The rest of the writing is okay. Whether it's the development of the protagonist or the shaping of some scenes, it's pretty good. The protagonist is not black and white. He has ideas, a bottom line, and a brain. I hope the author will be patient and continue writing! At present, the framework looks good, but the content still needs to be improved! Come on! Will continue to watch
Tomato is a high-quality product, but its combat power is a bit lacking in the early stage. You need to use more tricks later.
It's a very good book, with a reasonable plot and a tight rhythm, but there are a lot of AI parts, which you can tell at a glance.
A book of grain and grass, the depiction is very comfortable
Super invincible, so beautiful
Yes, it's pretty.
Good, keep up the good work. .