Let You Make a Horror Game and Prepare for the Senior High School Exam?

The design is still conservative, there are no cliques, school bullying, boxers, gods, fights, roll kings, bed checks, and Nantong harassment. These are my personal experiences. I am studying in a key high school.

It's really good, I'm already thinking of a big series. College entrance examination, employment, marriage, family, health. I no longer understand how painful this combination of punches will be. I feel that when a character like Wang Yinuo dies, there are two options after 100. If you retake the college entrance examination for 100 days or graduate, all characters can be refreshed by retaking the college entrance examination.

It was so well written that I finished it in one go. It reminded me of my high school. It was the same sweltering heat, the same numbness, and even the toilets were exactly the same. After Xiao Nuo jumped to his death from the building, his classmates were excited because of the holiday. Parents were angry because they delayed their children's studies. I thought back to my high school and wondered how I would react if such a thing really happened. Not surprisingly, I felt relaxed because during this holiday, I might feel a little regretful, but not much. This novel is so real. When I first read it, I was a little skeptical about how the author would write it. But after reading it, I no longer doubted it. I even felt the same feeling during the reading process. It was very suffocating and desperate. However, I won't pursue it anymore, because I think of my high school, it was too painful, and I really didn't want to live at that time. The class I was in at that time was the Rocket Class, which was considered the best class. There were more than 70 teachers among the small teachers. From front to back, it was packed full with no gaps. There were six monitors in the front and back, four in the school, and two were monitored in real time by the class teacher. The exam was taken once a week, and you were ranked every time. Once your performance deteriorated, your seat was immediately put in the back corner. In school, if your study is average, you have nothing to do with your family, and you sit in the corner all the time, forget it, but if the top students in the class make mistakes, the center position between you and the top students in the class will be changed, but within a few days, you will be replaced again. Changing back and forth like this often makes people feel physically and mentally exhausted. We will all say that we students are cannon fodder to punish good students. I get up at half past five every day, go to bed at twelve in the evening, take a nap for half an hour at noon, and study the rest of the time. , Don't even think about air conditioners and fans. If there is a power outage, you will be asked to buy candles immediately. Some people miss high school, but I don't miss it at all.

It's so real that it's a bit hard to watch and remember high school. It is unique for Chinese people to become ruthless when writing about knives, forget their feelings, and lose their lives. It seems that they have opened up the two channels of Ren and Du. The relationship between Xu Zhe and Wang Xiaonuo looks both uncomfortable and exciting. Xiaonuo is cute and lively, quite plump, but seems to be flat at the back. The protagonist doesn't have much of a role for the time being, and the plot is pretty much the standard trend of a cool novel.

This book would definitely be considered a good book if it didn't have CP love lines. Personally, I felt that the love lines and the male-female cousin were a bit uncomfortable, but the game was well written. Anyway, I had that creepy feeling of oppression that made me suffocate. . . The study also writes quite well about the alienation of people, so her efforts were in vain. . I really think this chapter is a bit awesome I like his career line very much, but I skipped the love line and didn't watch it at all. If he really asked for money at the beginning, I would rather accept it out of pure appreciation. Otherwise, is it because he likes the female character? Just investing tens of millions in it is a bit outrageous. . . But if it's really good, just pretend I didn't say it. Ps. Although the cover looks a bit like AI and is a bit discouraging, the author's writing has a strong sense of life and the rhythm is also very good!

The article is well written, the logic of the main line is smooth, the structure of the article, and the narrative speed are relatively comfortable, the material selection is novel, and it is handwritten, which is also an advantage today when everyone is writing with AI. Overall not bad. But. An important friend of the protagonist is the daughter of the boss of a large group in this worldview, and she is almost a close friend of the past. We were friends online until we met and met offline. The heroine's brother is a tomboy. If you don't think it's boring, this is a very good book.

14-17 Candidates from Shandong expressed that they were full of nostalgia and had a bad life. 10% Of my nightmares are of uncertain origin, the remaining 90% are about my parents fighting, and the other half are about trivial matters in high school. I don't know what exam questions I have, I forgot my homework, I didn't finish the paper, I was distracted and I was called up to lecture on the topic, I was caught by the teacher and asked to lecture on the topic after copying it for hundreds of years, and I was going to be late. The most outrageous thing is that I was a good student in high school and almost never got beaten by the teacher. My parents didn't pressure me to do well in my exams at home, you know? [Smile] A high school like this still accounts for nearly half of my nightmares [laugh] Is the author willing to accept a rat poison advertisement? I require a swallowing scene [laughs]

Close to life, Jiangsu candidates are closer [smirk][laugh][smile]

Such a strong writing power. It is rare to encounter such a powerful author in Tomato. Young people are full of energy. If they have a strong spirit and a sharp spirit, the knife will be sharp. Even if I read the spoilers in the comment section, I will still be bleeding. Art comes from life. It is precisely because such things have happened in our world that I can feel the powerlessness even more. The author puts it The characters are drawn to life, and the protagonist and heroine are essentially tools. This is more like a group portrait. Countless people whose edges have been smoothed by comfort may find some blood in this game, because there are things that they have to fight for, and everyone has their own burdens. This is life, life is fragile and beautiful, and fragile life will also bloom the most brilliant fireworks. So, welcome to "Earth Online"

All I can say is wait and see and cherish it. It must be 5 stars. It has a strong sense of immersion. People who are admitted to college in reality are very happy to watch it and laugh a lot. Remember! Remember! Remember! Middle school students, especially those in the third grade of junior high school and senior high school, should not watch it, as they may develop suicidal tendencies. It is estimated that this book may not be finished in the future. Judging from the current situation, the overall laughter and joy are derived from the pain of others, such as breaking defenses and the sense of superiority and relaxation derived from comparison, just like the content in the novel. The content of the story is compact without a lot of excess, and many things are based on the readers' own experiences to fill in the story background and other things. Some of the things in it are very real, but at the same time, they may have been restrained a little in order to pass the trial. It's worth a look. From a literary perspective, I think it can also serve as a good hope for archaeological history after decades or hundreds of years when we are really not so involuted and not under so much pressure. When I saw it, I felt some empathy and couldn't help but laugh at the review of some wonderful experiences in the past. At the same time, I felt sad for myself and got a little choked up with tears. I think the author may have had this idea in mind when writing it. It's very true. I felt very happy and happy when I just finished reading some parts, but because of the future that is less hopeful than the present, I felt very bad and a bit heavy. There is almost no emotional line in the real life in it. It can be said that real life in it is the main source of humor, and real life accounts for a very small part of the total space. The protagonist can say that it doesn't matter whether he has a partner or a cousin. One of the few people on all platforms who stayed up all night to watch it. On the whole, it is the entertainment of suffering and the tears of the times. I feel bad after watching it🙁🙁🙁

The subject matter is very new. But when it comes to the emotional line, it looks weird. [What] What else does the female protagonist like? Is it the male protagonist or the previous one?

This book is very interesting, especially the description of Lu Bu's fight with Diao Chan for Diao Chan. Sun Wukong fights for hundreds of rounds. But Xue Baochai is really too strong . If it weren't for Noxian's outer ring + Noxian decapitation Taiwan. This wave of M4's six times strafing will kill you, among other things. I compare Appreciate what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Little "You are so arrogant, don't stop in front of your brother Liang" to show Zhuge Liang Angry at the monkey who beat him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book Festival is interesting.

There are few books that can arouse my emotions and allow me to follow the character's emotions all the time. When I saw Yinuo appear on the stage, I knew that this character would definitely go offline. It was very consistent with the setting of a character who would definitely be stabbed. The author has also been foreshadowing the fact that Yinuo will be stabbed. I have to say that this kind of open sword is more torturous than the hidden sword. You know that he knows he will die, but you have to read on. This kind of emotional mobilization is really powerful, but I can't imagine how long it will take Xu Zhe to come out. If possible, the next direction of the plot should be that Xu Zhe cannot escape and has to live in Zisha in reality, and then the protagonist arranges a holographic projection of Yinuo, and finally says goodbye to Xu Zhe. This is the most appropriate arrangement. It's a good book, I'll keep reading for more updates, the author will update more often! ! !

A good book, Xu Zhe and Xiao Nuo are very interesting! Although the couple ended up falling out [crying], the author's story about the third year of high school was still very depressing. Although I had just finished the high school entrance examination and was about to be a freshman in high school, it also resonated with me a lot. Thinking about preparing for the high school entrance examination, I felt really uncomfortable at the time. When I thought about school starting soon, I felt even more uncomfortable [angry]

I can't do it anymore. I've read half of it and commented first. The author must have written it himself, or revised it extensively. Even if AI is used, the manual work must be very large, because the whole text is very appropriate and humane in terms of words, sentences, jokes and all kinds of fun. You can see that the corners of my mouth are wrinkled even after the mask has not been removed. It's very interesting. I'll read it all, but there are only a few chapters yet. I hope the author can release more chapters.

This book has a feeling of returning to nature. Sometimes I have always been pressed by the pressure of reality. When I read this book and became immersed in it and transformed into the characters of this book, I realized that our current world can also be another world. We can live in reality from the perspective of games. We are players, born to come to this world for enjoyment. As I was reading this book, I suddenly had a flash of inspiration in my subconscious. Turns out this is who we really are. When you come to this world, you should not feel pressure, but embrace this world and enjoy it

This novel is so good. I can't read the plot directly. It's so good that it's so good. The author didn't write any emotional lines in the introduction. If you don't like the emotional lines, you need to skip it. I feel that there aren't many emotional lines in the back, so it doesn't matter if you don't like the emotional lines. Basically, there are more descriptive copies, but there may be more emotional lines in the front, so I just skipped them. It's about whether Xiao Nuo will die or not. Author, please stop being fussy [angry][angry][angry] I'm very anxious when reading this. When will the update be updated today? I'm urging you to update it off-screen. I hope that the author's subsequent copies can maintain the current level. I feel that the writing is really good. I don't know why the rating is so low [Sending my heart]

The writing is very good. I originally wanted to give it a four-star rating, but after thinking about it, there is nothing really bad about it. It's just that I felt a lot of discomfort during the description process. The logic is very clear, and the content felt like a flash in the pan at first, but by the 80th or 90th chapter, it started to have new life (I don't mean to say that it was not alive before). For me, it was a feeling that I couldn't describe. And it's still increasing, until it's around chapter 120. If I want to write a long story about college, graduation, work, etc., I find it difficult to imagine how to write it. Anyway, I'm looking forward to it.

Show it all to me, it's so good, hahaha, I'll take you to experience the real despair of a senior high school student.

When to write the trapeze plot? When the player is horrified to see a life disappear, the classmates around him say that it is not enough, and he can only have a day off after three. That feeling of despair and numbness, and the suffocating feeling that the school put up iron bars to seal the corridor windows the next day.

I hope the author will add a plot here. We had a trapeze artist in high school, and then our whole school had a regular class meeting on Monday, and the leader asked us to cherish life. The head teacher said this: "When we looked back at the surveillance video (he held a relatively high position in our high school, he was considered a minor official), do you know what my first reaction was when I saw him fall? " "What is it?" "What is it?" The students asked curiously. "It fell lightly." As if he was afraid that we didn't hear clearly, he repeated it again, "It fell lightly." "Ahem, I'm just kidding. Don't say what you just said outside. It's actually a pity, a pity, a pity to see a precious thing disappear." I hope to add another setting, which is what really happened in our high school. We will rotate the inspectors every day, that is, every student in the school can be a supervisor. Then when you become an inspector, you will catch whoever has leftover food and other disciplinary issues, and then write it down in the book and hand it in. Generally, those who have a good relationship with whom will not be recorded, and those who have a bad relationship will be caught.

This book is very well written. The author's creative writing level is very high. Have a stable mentality. Enough material. It's not a knife for the sake of a knife. In fact, if you put it in, it will be extremely uncomfortable. We have long known that Xiao Nuo's birth was all for a grand death show. But we can't help but watch, think, and cry. This is the sweetest short story about love that I have ever read. Only then did I understand. It turns out that everything is trivial in life and death. It made me understand the importance of life. Xiao Nuo is a young and beautiful girl who is very sweet and resilient. Xiaonuo, good night.

The description of the senior year in high school is so realistic that it is suffocating and powerless, but it is exactly the reality [crying]

Author, do you know that "The Analects of Confucius" has been updated by you. Establishing at Thirty: It is necessary to update thirty chapters in order to gain a foothold in the online literary circle. Forty without Confusion: Forty chapters are updated every day. Only then can you continue to receive gratitude and praise from readers and no longer be confused about the meaning of writing. You know your destiny at fifty: 50 chapters are updated every day, you are your destiny, and the entire website will praise you. Sixty and easy to listen to: that is, when you can update 60 chapters a day, everything you say will be easy to hear, including readers. When you are seventy, just follow your heart and do not go beyond the rules: if you can update 70 chapters a day, you can do whatever you want! Update soon! ! ! [Cool][cool]

[Planted Grass] [Sparrow Eater Masterpiece] Looks great [Shy] I watched it from beginning to end. I listened to books at three times the speed and I didn't feel sleepy at all. There are a lot of funny and wonderful places that are worth checking out. Can the author give me some updates? [Please give me more updates]. The plot is very good 💩 It's very real here. Bathing is pretty good. We don't even have one in our school. I'm going to be a senior in high school and I'm a hard-pressed dormitory student. The emotional scenes between Xu Zhe and Nuo in the game are very well written, although the hint is be. But will there be a miracle? The couple is so sweet, but I also want to see what Xu Zhe looks like after Nuo grows invisible wings. How bad am I? [Laughs]

The writing is quite realistic (♡>𖥦<)/♥, but I don't think I have ever experienced such a tragic scene. The six-person dormitory has air conditioning, the electricity bill is paid together, and the water card is charged by yourself. As for running exercises, there were always morning exercises before the senior year of high school, and the exercises were intermittent between classes. In the third year of senior high school, the running exercises were no longer performed with those of other grades. After two months, there was no running exercise. There is air conditioning in the classroom, and it has been there since the first grade of junior high school, but it is only allowed to be turned on until the third year of high school (condition: the first in the third year of high school is required to turn on the air conditioner). The dormitory conditions are very good. Except for the cleanliness of the dormitory in junior high school, which was quantified, high school students basically don't care. The teacher's teaching quality is still acceptable, but other aspects are more difficult to evaluate. There are two cafeterias where meals are available and you can pay by scanning your face. The school also has a bakery and a canteen (these are expensive and don't satisfy your hunger). Teachers can live in city apartments. Students can also live in single rooms (paid/graded). I can't think of any more, meow∽ Why can't I type out the emoticon pack? (｡•O•｡∩)

The author gives you a little inspiration: you can simulate myopic astigmatism for players in the game. Rubbing the eyes will increase astigmatism. During the exam, especially when taking the Chinese language test in the first test, your eyes will be particularly dazzled when you read the words at the end of the exam. In order not to fall asleep during class, I applied Fengyou essence on my temples but it still felt not enough. I applied it under my eyes, and then I found that my eyes were burning and I couldn't open or close them and fell asleep. Some people have sensitive eyes. After a while in class, they will find that their eyes are very dry and sore, and they need to be continuously instilled with eye drops to relieve it.

After reading it, it is really good. The author's writing of virtual characters and invisible wings is just like Kai Zhi, and there is no comparison with writing the emotional drama of the male protagonist. But it's so painful that I really can't stand it anymore. I've graduated from college, and I still get stressed out and feel physically uncomfortable and want to vomit when I see this.

Decided to give up reading. From the foreshadowing of Xiao Nuo's character, I foresaw this tragedy, but I still couldn't let go after actually reading the ending. I cannot accept that this teenage emotion has been completely instrumentalized and exists only to prepare for the tragic scene of jumping off a building. This is completely contrary to the core of learning for goals mentioned at the beginning. The root cause of Xiao Nuo's tragedy is the harm caused by a sick family. He should not be blamed on youth, nor should he deny his ignorant pursuit. At first, when I looked at Lao Tang's line, I thought the work could give a more transparent interpretation. There is no point in a story if it only focuses on exaggerating pain. The book was good at the beginning, but in the second half it felt too obsessed with creating tragedy. I can understand that the author wants to show the absurd reality of "learning over life", but I don't know whether it's because I personally can't accept it, or whether the narrative itself shouldn't be handled this way. I feel that giving it four stars is very tolerant and I tried to avoid emotional scoring. I know I shouldn't be too demanding about web articles, but the expectations set up in the previous article are too high. It's already five o'clock in the morning when I write this review, and my heart is so packed that I can't tell whether it's the reality that hurts me, or whether this book is [crying] sad.

Yes, the writing is quite good, but there are still some things missing in the description of the third year of high school. I think it can be updated faster. I think there are too few updates every day.