On the first day after he transmigrates to Nanyang, the System runs off.
Holding the Nine Revolutions Chaos Art, Ye Changsheng falls into deep thought. Other people get a golden finger when they transmigrate. What did I get, nothing?
Three years later, he has become the most mysterious man in Nanyang. He rescues Zhang Haiqi from the Southern Archives, beats up the bandit leader Fenghuang, sweeps Huo Jinxi of Changsha's Nine Gates off her feet, and even charms Zhang Qishan's wife, Yin Xinyue, into running away with him.
While Wu Xie is still fretting over the bronze gate, Ye Changsheng is already enjoying hotpot in Peach Blossom Spring with seven goddesses in his arms.
“You’re all risking your lives to find immortality?” Ye Changsheng exhales a ring of smoke. “I mastered it on my very first day.”
What the hell? This protagonist must be a fool. He has no ability, so he just joins in the fun and checks the plot line of the Zhang family. This is because he owes a long life. He doesn't die fast enough. It's like lighting a lantern in the toilet to look for shit. Zhang family, Zhang family traitor, and Mo Yungao's people. If you don't catch him, you will be killed in minutes. I have no ability and I don't know yet. I'm insignificant and underdeveloped. Don't waste your time.
The writing is incomprehensible. The protagonist's brain circuit and behavior are not like a normal person. I feel that the biggest cheat is not the exercises, but the protagonist himself. A modern social animal can survive on a desert island for half a year. I don't know the words of the exercises or the acupuncture points. I just have to guess, and I have mastered it. I drifted on the sea for a day and a night before reaching the land. My luck is incredible.
There are too many parallel sentences, too many scene descriptions, and too many passive narrations. This is not writing a novel with a main plot, but writing a script based on the story. There is basically nothing interesting about this book. There is not much plot, and metaphorical descriptions of scenes account for more than 80% of the book [laughing] This is no one else.
Mark it.
You can tell from the author's name that it's an AI work
AI can be used, but it is wrong to use AI to fill water. Out of 100 words, 90 words are filled with AI filler. To say the least, out of 100 words, 95 are ai. Let's talk about a dialogue, a long paragraph on the water of AI, and it is generated by pure AI. Repeatedly apply AI's favorite sentence patterns, No. . . Rather. . . Like. . .
It doesn't feel like reading a novel
It feels like reading a diary! Plain and simple!
It feels like reading a story, and it also feels like you are writing a story. It has no characteristics and the writing is not very good. The AI flavor is too strong.
AI novel, the protagonist is very weak