Farming? No, She Is Cultivating Immortality

It is the life of a family, a soothing and slow life, good. I just feel that there is a vague sense of the Qing family daughter in it (the chapter I have read so far), and I feel that there is a kind of implicit contempt for the grandmother and mother. The most sensitive point is that when Ling Gen chooses available occupations for his family, he neglects his mother. Others are ok (personal subjective feeling)

I came from a comic book and I finished it in one go. It was well written. The journey of the heroine and her family was not smooth sailing, but they all have great love. The author will listen carefully to the readers' suggestions. In the beginning, there will be many dialogues and few scenes and psychological descriptions, but this will gradually change later. What's rare is that 3 chapters were updated in one day, which is close to 9,000 words. It's awesome.

I came here after watching the manga. The author will update more. I'm afraid I won't be able to watch the manga (bushi) Never add a male protagonist out of nowhere, the two sisters are more beautiful than anything else 😳

It's a very novel setting. The only shortcoming is that the author's writing is not strong enough and the fighting scenes are not well described. There is room for improvement in many places. For example, after a family has spent ten years in a secret realm, and when they come out of the secret realm ten years later, their appearance will definitely change. There is no close-up description here, so polish it a bit and add a transition, for example: Ten years later. There are many trees, blocking out the sky and the sun. In a dense jungle, a green space vortex slowly opened. A white arm protruded from the whirlpool door. Immediately afterwards, the owner of the arm, a woman wearing a light cyan dress, walked out of the space door. She looked like she was in her twenties, with a soft face, a slender figure, and a clean and calm breath. This is Qin Zhen who has lived in the secret realm for ten years. Now that ten years have passed, the Qin family is recharging their energy and gathering strength. They are about to end their escape from the world and once again enter the ever-changing world of immortality. I just wrote it casually, that's what it means. Another example is when my sister Qin Zhen meets the ancient tree for the first time. The dialogue is also a bit messy and readers cannot imagine it. Overall, there is still room for improvement. Practice more and refer to other articles. The setting and imagination are very strong. I hope the author will grow up like Jianmu in the article.

The pace is not fast, there are rarely two female protagonists who are cultivating immortals, and they are also sisters. Most of the chapters are about a warm family struggling together. 💕 💕 Good review.

After watching the comics, I came to read the novel again. I like to see the two sisters supporting each other all the way from mortals to the path of cultivating immortals. There are also daily bickerings between the two sisters. There are no vicious sisters, only mature and stable sisters and sisters who are like living treasures. It made my body warm after reading it. This is the most comfortable novel about cultivating immortals that I have read recently. Great support for the author [Top post][Top post] As for the dialogue issues mentioned by some people, I don't think it has any impact. The dialogue between two people is very easy to understand. I quite like watching the dialogue between characters. It is very warm and real. It is not like other fairy tales where you go around killing and killing every day like keeping a running account. The author can control the rhythm himself [Please update] [Please update]

I really like this kind of narration, it feels like I'm watching a family's life of cultivating immortality from scratch. Very suitable for quiet reading.

The plot is still very interesting, the family is harmonious, everyone has spiritual roots, and there are not so many brainless plots. The main plot is between the heroine and the heroine's sister. The heroine, a spiritual planter, does not have spiritual roots, but uses vitality instead. This is quite novel. I like to farm a little bit and build a family. The disadvantage is that there are many and short dialogues, which are like saliva, which greatly affects the reading experience.

It's nice to look at, and there are many settings that make me think my head is spinning. There's also a naming problem, like me, I really can't come up with names😄. There are also small flowers, big flowers, small stones, and weaving, all of which are really fun [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]

It's okay, that's why it takes 7 years to break through the 7th level of Qi training, and it's still the case with the best spiritual roots.