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My parents are hidden emperor-level experts, my brother is the protagonist of Long Aotian, and I... Have changed my gender?
Boy, do you want to be a magical girl?
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Parents: What should I do if my son suddenly turns into a daughter? Of course I will love you to death!
Brother: Hehe... Hehehe, I also have a younger sister!
Caiye: You provoked me first, don't even think about escaping, otherwise... You'll be waiting in the dark room!
Kaguya: I used to be just an ordinary person. If you asked me to get married, I wouldn't pick your fault.
Now I am the strongest person in this world (background), what should you call me?
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Reader comments
To be honest, the writing is average. But this is the first book of a new account. I basically only score based on whether it can be completed. A novel that cannot be completed is considered rubbish, so I will only deduct one point to see if the follow-up will be completed. If you are a new author, I hope this first book will not be for the purpose of making money. The most important thing is to learn to finish, even if the follow-up fails. As for the content, it feels like I borrowed characters from Chrono Kaguya and other girl bands to write my own urban fantasy novel. I also tried hard to use jokes to make the novel interesting, but this did not last long. I hope that I can write better plots by myself in the future instead of relying on jokes. There are also some unreasonable points in some plots, such as why Yachiyo didn't register for her concert and so on. I hope this situation will be reduced in the future. To sum up, the actual score is 10 out of 10 and I personally give it 5 points. The real score is only 4 points or even lower. Finally, I still hope that the author can write this book to the end. Sometimes I will check the records when I meet someone like me. If there is a book that has been completed with a normal word count, it is easier for people to read it with confidence. Finally, I hope that the author will not be afraid of making mistakes, correct them if they are wrong, it is not scary to make mistakes, but not correct them if they are wrong, and learn to read feedback. This must be combined with what you want to write and the target group.
It looks like it has been sent
My dear author, come back to life quickly, we need you😭
It turned out to be a book by Chrono Kaguya, so I had to give it a try.
Who's on top [smile][smile][smile]
It's so beautiful, don't give up. The author is great. This is the most beautiful Kaguya-like fic I've seen so far.
To be honest, the writing is average. But this is the first book of a new account. I basically only score based on whether it can be completed. A novel that cannot be completed is considered rubbish, so I will only deduct one point to see if the follow-up will be completed. If you are a new author, I hope this first book will not be for the purpose of making money. The most important thing is to learn to finish, even if the follow-up fails. As for the content, it feels like I borrowed characters from Chrono Kaguya and other girl bands to write my own urban fantasy novel. I also tried hard to use jokes to make the novel interesting, but this did not last long. I hope that I can write better plots by myself in the future instead of relying on jokes. There are also some unreasonable points in some plots, such as why Yachiyo didn't register for her concert and so on. I hope this situation will be reduced in the future. To sum up, the actual score is 10 out of 10 and I personally give it 5 points. The real score is only 4 points or even lower. Finally, I still hope that the author can write this book to the end. Sometimes I will check the records when I meet someone like me. If there is a book that has been completed with a normal word count, it is easier for people to read it with confidence. Finally, I hope that the author will not be afraid of making mistakes, correct them if they are wrong, it is not scary to make mistakes, but not correct them if they are wrong, and learn to read feedback. This must be combined with what you want to write and the target group. It looks like it has been sent
My dear author, come back to life quickly, we need you😭
It turned out to be a book by Chrono Kaguya, so I had to give it a try. Who's on top [smile][smile][smile]
It's so beautiful, don't give up. The author is great. This is the most beautiful Kaguya-like fic I've seen so far.
It's pretty good. Please update quickly. Don't interrupt.
Update soon author Ah, after chasing it for a month, I can only say yes. I personally feel pretty good.
Update soon! Kuyasi! ! Please add more updates. The author thinks one chapter a day is not enough.
Great writing, keep it up
Come on, write quickly
Look, look, look, look, look
Nice looking Kaguya colorful leaves stickers
I tried to persuade you at the beginning, but it was okay later on.