Ye Luoli's Red Beans Born in the South Country

I think this novel is very good. It does not have the same old-fashioned dark protagonist as other novels, but gets along with the protagonist friendly and not so brainlessly. In short, the subject matter is very novel, and the overall style is more relaxed. It is very good to read. Then some scenes can be refined. The words between the characters are suggested to be put in double quotes, and it is a bit confusing. It is recommended not to skip it immediately. Some scenes do not fit the plot setting. I hope the author can think about it when writing.

It's very well written. It's my favorite setting among the Ye Luoli fanfics I've read so far. The author's writing style gives people a sense of daily warmth, and he doesn't deliberately criticize any characters, and he also removes the messy CPs. Come on 😋❤️

So warm, I hope there is no cp or Zhiying cp [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [please give me more updates] [please give me more updates]

The writing is quite good, but I feel like I have to write down all the psychological activities, all the things that should be discovered from the reader's perspective. The feeling of a little blank space that allows us readers to explore and think between the lines is lost.

In fact, when I first read the introduction, I just didn't feel it. I even thought it was about CP, and I thought it was about Bai Guangying and Pang Zun. But when I actually read it, I realized that it was not what I thought. The writing style has the kind of daily warmth, and the heroine is really attentive to some small details. I really like it. You don't feel that the sensationalism is obtrusive, but it blends in just right. It's not awkward at all. It really has the warm and daily feel of a young man's comic. The picture is very strong. I'm looking forward to the discussion about cp in the forum. When the time comes, I'll eat it up [lick the screen] [lick the screen] [bird food masterpiece]

How did Pang Zun come to the human world? Isn't there a seal? [What]

It's very beautiful. I don't know what to say but it's very beautiful. It has a eloquent and animal feel. I highly recommend it.

I saw a nice girl and a very attentive author In short, this book is an excellent book, and the setting is more realistic

It's beautiful. This book should only be found in heaven. It's rare to hear it in the human world.

Personally, I think it's amazing [Adoration]

I'm really going to fall in love with the heroine's character

It looks great, please give the author a big boost [Sending my heart][Sending my heart] The heroine is so good, I was so touched watching it

Very beautiful, the author is very careful

The plot is very compact and very detailed. There are basically no major language flaws. It's very interesting and I recommend everyone to check it out. The character design of the heroine is also very good. The number of words is not artificially made up. It's also very close to life and very realistic.

I can't help it and finally found this kind of cp

The taste is quite satisfactory.

This fanfic is very interesting, the characters are not OOC, and the plot is very interesting.

Can you have a harem with all the male fairies and all the handsome guys?

It's awesome, the author's writing is really good [like][like][like][like] When do I usually write about forums, I kind of want to read the forum comments on the content of the Nanzhi debate [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking][Please update]

I really like this style. [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

It's pretty good-looking, and the heroine here respects Xiao Bai very much.

I feel that the heroine has a particularly positive outlook on life. From the language, you will feel that she is a very warm person. [Laughing][laughing]

The teacher wrote it very well! The plot and characters are super good!

If there is no CP in the main text, can I write CP in the extras? I want to hit the heroine×Bai Guangying