Beast Taming: Rising to Power by Extracting Elven Corpses!
御兽：从提取精灵尸体开始崛起！
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 156k Words
- Genre
- Urban
- Subgenre
- Urban High Martial Arts
- Updated
- 1mo ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
68Chapters
1.1kReads
115Shelves
42Listens
44.2kReads · all time
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Reader comments 6
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It's okay. The plot is very smooth and relatively good-looking. But some settings are not explained clearly. They are not rigorous and lack a sense of reality. The flaws cannot be concealed. Questions such as 1. How to carry the props of the puppy? It seems too tiring to carry them with telekinesis. Did you make a bag specially and put it on him? The article did not specify it. 2. Why does the protagonist think that his skill stones can be sold? Originally, his talent for extracting skills can only temporarily grant skills. It was the golden finger that made him permanent. If you sell it to others, won't people wonder why it can permanently grant skills? It's not the skill jade disc mentioned later. This will cause other people to peep. In other words, the protagonist's talent is a low-level talent, and there is an upper-level talent that can grant permanent skills. Does it mean that the protagonist's golden finger combined with this low-level talent has the effect of a high-level talent? The author did not make it clear here. 3 In the high school semi-finals, Xiao defeated Lin, and the protagonist defeated Chu. Shouldn't Xiao and the protagonist play another final at this time? They haven't played yet, and I haven't seen Xiao say he gave up. Why did Xiao become the runner-up? It feels like I missed a paragraph. In short, the plot arrangement is okay, and the tone is also very good. However, some settings and plots are not rigorous and detailed. It will be a bit uncomfortable to read with your brain. I hope the author can change the content of the previous article. It will definitely be better. Come on
The writing style is still a bit average, and the plot design is also average, but if you are willing to write it, it is good. Give it a five-star encouragement.
The writing is good, I hope it won't stop updating [laughter]
Well written, the plot can flow smoothly
. It's okay now, there are no big poisonous points at the moment so we'll have to wait and see.
Not bad, come on, author