In the Immortal Cultivation World, What Do I Do About My Increasingly Yandere Disciple?

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The rhythm of the previous chapters is well grasped, the plot arrangement is plain but not boring, and the system is also quite interesting, like playing a development + adventure game. However, during the rush period in the middle, I don't know whether it is a deliberate arrangement to spend time on the road to cultivate the relationship between the two parties, or whether it is just an accidental writing and writing too much, which makes it seem a bit tedious. In addition, I am also a little curious about how An He views her apprentice now. An He doesn't seem to object to some of the apprentice's more intimate actions. Does An He simply think that the child will naturally let go of her as a master when he sees more in the future, or is he already a wife? Oh, there are also a lot of typos and grammatical errors.

The setting at the beginning was quite interesting. The various branch options were like playing a game 🍉, but suddenly the second female lead fell in love with the female lead halfway through, and in the latest chapter she started raising a baby... Actually, I just wanted to watch the two slowly develop a relationship [awkward laugh]

Not bad, the relationship between master and disciple is well portrayed [smile][smile][smile]

Okay, okay, but there are typos and missing words in some places, but it looks good😋😋😋😋

You can read the daily literature and culture system.

It looks pretty good now. By the way, are the names of the heroine and the second heroine An Heqiao? 😍😍🤩